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  1. Lee Wilson

    Batch 47

    Ditto on the reaction here. Love, anger, sad. They all work. Ended up going with love because of the way it turned out. I had a feeling Gav was more than we were told. It's funny. Second time there was a parallel with one of my stories. I won't share too much in case anyone ends up checking out mine, but I think kbois would like the way I dealt with my attackers. Maybe. That one is here, 'Don't Blame the Band' if anybody is interested.
  2. Lee Wilson

    Batch 47

    A pack of wolves wearing nurse's caps.
  3. Lee Wilson

    Batch 46

    Matt: Methinks he doth protest too much.
  4. Lee Wilson

    Batch 38

    Also late to the party. Love the humor. Hoping the next 4 chapters are as good (that'd be a challenge). I started reading ii because the beginning sort of mirrored one of my previous stories (on nifty.org), but that was with younger boys. Great start.
  5. I haven't figured out 'One Last Time' yet, so your guess is as good as mine. I initially had 'Sittin On The Dock of the Bay' in the classic rock portion of the list. Just tried to level the count ever so slightly. There are others in that list (Chapter 3) that don't really fit the genre either, but let's say it's a 'basically southern rock' set.
  6. This story began as a chapter in a series I was writing on nifty.org. At the end of the first chapter, it was apparent that one chapter wouldn't be sufficient to complete the story. As I neared the end of the second chapter, I became attached to the characters and felt since it only marginally fit the overall topic of the series it would be best served as a stand-alone story, which will now contain more than the originally planned one or two chapters. That series was called 'Grocery Store F
  7. I had just finished delivering the last paper on my paper route. Unfortunately, that meant I was as far away from home as I was going to be. I'm Matt Harrison, 14-year-old soon to be freshman. A paper route was the only way I could figure out how to make some money. I think everywhere around here wants you to be 16 or more. My brother's lucky, he gets to work in a nice cool supermarket. Me, I have to ride like 3 miles in the heat. I’m only in my second week and already I’m getting tired of the h
  8. Matt is a young teenager, who with the help of a new friend, discovers a new world of sexual experience. In the process, his life changes in ways he never expected.
  9. Saturday October 22 - Still with Tyler. I'm standing in the middle of a lake. I'm on something like a sand bar. 10 feet away from me in every direction the sand bar disappears and the lake is so deep, I can't see the bottom. I also can't see land in any direction. Rob is standing on top of the water about 100 yards or so away. No, he's hovering above the water. I can't hear him, but it seems he's calling out to me. I know I can't swim that far. I look around, hoping for a piece of driftwood
  10. Missed the question on the Atlantic show wd. Those 3 dates got canceled.
  11. I love the interaction with the readers this site provides. Feedback is so important. Especially good feedback. It feeds the ego and keeps the creative juices flowing.
  12. Geez, I hate it when you guys peek at the next chapter, he he.
  13. Hmmm, bringing Michelle back into the story. Has possibilities. Will definitely consider it wd. As far as checking IDs; wouldn't have mattered, Pete and Ant wouldn't have known the motel clerk's name. If you meant fired from the motel; I assumed it was the owner's policy in a shit-hole to let anybody stay, he'd need all the business he could get. Guy might have got a promotion. 🤑
  14. Saturday October 15 (late) "So, how did your setup go?" "Oh fuck, it was amazing Ant. I guess RB has about 4 reactions when meeting someone new. Worst is he breaks the hold and runs away screaming. As far as I know he only did that once with a druggie. Next is kind of complete indifference. No running, but it's obvious he's not happy. Then, starting with the good reactions, he'll happily shake your hand, maybe even smile at you. I gather Andy got one of these. Then, there's the 'holy s
  15. No worries folks. I'm not going to send Uncle Marco after people who don't comment.
  16. No real research. I worked backwards from getting the band a decent amount of money but not ridiculous. I won’t spoil the return to school for you 😃
  17. I can't take credit for it. I heard it either in a movie or a TV show, can't for the life of me remember where.
  18. Thursday October 13 I call over to Ant's as soon as I get home from school to see if he's home. I'm so fucking happy. He is. "Going to Ant's mom. See you for dinner." She says OK, but I'm already out the door. I'd be flying if I could. Even though I want to get there as soon as I can, I keep close to the speed limit, well, relatively close. I ring the doorbell and Mrs. Rossi lets me in. I say hi, stay there the minimum time that would be considered polite and run up the stairs to
  19. You’ve confused me. Anthony was initially maybe a little mad at Pete, but only Cathy was really mad. I don’t remember anything about Eddie being mad. OK, I get it now, Eddie calling him a fucking asshole at the very beginning. No, nothing here, that will come later.
  20. I just happen to like Whiskey Man better. Neither compare to Fall of the Peacemakers IMO. The rest of the songs are high on my playlist. Any pretend character can be an amazing singer. I hope you like the direction I take them weinerdog.
  21. 😎 I've gotten the 'who said what' comment before. Point taken and will keep that more in mind in the future. Happy Chappies ahead (at least for a little while - life is full of rainy days, it's not always sunny.) 🕶️ 🕶️☔🕶️
  22. Maybe. I have considered giving them another break. I write pretty much stream of consciousness. Lots of times where I think it’s going, it takes a left turn on me.
  23. Wednesday October 5 I'm walking home from school and a car pulls up beside me. "You're Daggett, right?" Not knowing who it is, I'm hesitant to answer. "Who are you?" "Never mind that. Are you Daggett?" "Yeah, why?" "What happened in that warehouse?" "What?" "You were there before my sons died. What happened?" "Mr. Turner? I wasn't there. But I heard about it. I'm sorry for your loss, er, losses." "I was told you were there because they were
  24. Lee Wilson

    Epilogue

    Good story. Had a lot of emotion in it. Laughter, sadness, anger (at the psycho with 2 names). On to another of your stories. Great job Andy. LRW
  25. Andy, you are the Chubby Checker of gayauthors.org. Seems like every chapter it's 'Let's Twist Again.'
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