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Lee Wilson

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  1. Monday lunchtime - Still with Carlo I'm still so pissed from the meeting this morning; I need to do something big to protest our treatment. "What's the matter, Carlo?" "Principal Sabato. He pulled the four of us into his office this morning and without actually saying the words, told us to stop being gay." "Really?" "Yeah, Steve." "Shit, even I wouldn't pull a dick move like that." "But you scared him Brandon, when you told him we'd get our dads involved."
  2. Eric Clapton, Ritchie Blackmore, Alvin Lee, Brian May. I don’t think very many of the current “guitar greats” can compete with those guys. I do like Joe Satriani a lot. Steve Vai is up there as well. For those of you not familiar with, or may question my inclusion of Alvin Lee on that list:
  3. Possibly brain damage, possibly separation anxiety. Jeremy has become somewhat dependent on Derek. And not just this past week. Now that he remembers it more, it gets worse. Jeremy had Derek and a little bit of William and Jenny. He hasn’t had or hasn’t made the time to seek out others. Work and the other have been the bulk of each other’s worlds for nearly a year and a half. We saw how it impacted Derek. Now it’s Jeremy’s turn, having a nearly complete memory. Yes, Mr. Burlington (I should have given him an easier name to spell), is an over the top control freak. I’m thinking that may need to bite him in the ass somewhere along the line. Not as severely as I usually treat the bad guys. I’m not going so far as calling him a homophobe. He couldn’t control his son’s sexuality. That bothered him more than his actual sexuality does.
  4. Monday June 12 "Good morning, Jer..." "Thanks for fucking calling!" "I'm..." "I was so stressed yesterday, I needed stronger pain killers the headache was so bad. I fell asleep like 6:00. I'm guessing the cop left sometime after I fell asleep. I woke up in the middle of the night, nobody was here. I had half a mind to call you at 3 AM. But I thought, maybe things were still in the shitter. But then why would the cop be gone?" "But Jer..." "Don't even fucking think a
  5. I guess if Tony is forthcoming with the whole story, yeah, it could turn out bad for Mr. Rose. More on Tony and maybe his dad at some point in the future. Armstrong. If I were him, I'd say no. Patience, young Padawan. No details, but I will say by the rules, not bogus. Now whether or not the rules are bogus, well...🤐
  6. I tried to make it appear like he was almost masking his homophobia. From your comment, I think I succeeded.
  7. Saturday - From the viewpoint of Michael Armstrong Sr. Mr. Armstrong is frustrated. Every single recruiting office he can locate is closed on weekends. How the hell are working parents supposed to banish their hooligan kids to the military if they're only open weekdays? I can't trust Mike to go alone during the week. His mother doesn't agree with me, so she won't take him. I guess Mike gets to stay here and enjoy whatever punishment I can dole out. Who knows? Maybe that will be better for t
  8. Sounds reasonable.
  9. I believe chapter 8 will cut Derek a little slack.
  10. Glad you’re liking it. I honestly can’t say where the inspiration came from. Perhaps I had a dream about the long ago friends that were on the local rescue squad. And my subconscious took care of the rest. I think the title is quite fitting. I’m really rocking on Derek.
  11. Nope. He was there: Cassidy Parker turned toward the Arriens to attempt to shoot at least one of them but was cut down before he was able to aim, however he did get a shot off. Regarding the watch. If they were reasonably smart, they wouldn't be criminals. Maybe just lazy.
  12. The bad guys in my stories never fare well, do they? Hmm, maybe the next story, I have to make the bad guys win.
  13. Sunday June 11 What did the Chief say? Come to One Police something? No. He's sending a car. Huh? "Sorry, Jeremy, I missed that." "I said calm down. Don't get all upset about what may or may not have happened." "No. I was trying to remember what the Chief said. I kind of lost focus after he said my dad was abducted and maybe mom and Frank too." "I know you've been worried about me. I'm coming back, so you have to believe you're in a 'good things are happening' streak rig
  14. I wouldn’t say forced, but Ken did renege on an implied promise, so tricked might be more accurate. Part two of ‘you do me and I’ll do you’ did not cone to pass.
  15. I'll have to look into that, not familiar with it, probably because it wasn't in my history books either.
  16. Tuesday - Lunch Time Steve Lancer walked up to our table a little hesitantly. "It's OK, Steve. We were serious yesterday. Sit down, join the convo." "Thanks. Hi all. What are you talking about?" "Lance was bitching about Mrs. Landsdowne." "Like three weeks into school and she already assigns this huge project." "Pick an event in American History, describe it in your own words, and explain what could have been done to prevent it." "You have her too, Steve?"
  17. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 18

    I couldn’t help but think while reading the comments whether or not I was the only one who heard “it’s complicated” in Jim Caviezel‘s voice, a la ‘The Count of Monte Cristo.’ Glad to see Lyssa in on the road to recovery.
  18. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 16

    Even before this comment I was figuring we just witnessed the calm before the storm. A Nick, as in more than one Dom-a-nick
  19. I've always used the two terms interchangeably. Perhaps incorrect on my part, but I'm pretty sure I've encountered additional places where that is true.
  20. 1. I thought that was sufficiently explained here: Back at the Arriens' household, Captain Alex Arriens is preparing to leave for the Marlins game, where he's meeting another group of police officers for a well-deserved afternoon out. "Have a good time Alex. Frank and I will be watching. Maybe you'll get on TV." "I've been on TV enough lately. But now that Springs is in custody, I'd rather avoid the limelight. See you later, Cindy. I love you." 2. Yeah, you got me there. Didn't consider that. 3. Initially, Jeremy didn't even remember his boss. In this chapter, when he finally does, we're not there when he discovers it. I guess I missed an opportunity there as well. I've mentioned it elsewhere, but I'm not really good at expressing my own emotions. Probably why it translates to the characters.
  21. Saturday June 10 It was so hard to crawl out of bed this morning. Four days of barely being Jeremy's friend is starting to get to me. I know Brenda was right last night. I should get on the 'it'll be OK' team, it's just so difficult. First, he loses most of his memory. Then he loses the rest of it. Finally, he reaches out to me because he has no other choice. And how do you forget you're gay? I guess when you forget everything else, it just comes along for the ride. He's lucky he's in the h
  22. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 12

    I know what you mean. You get so into some of them, they seem almost real to you. There are actually a few in finished stories, I kind of miss and am considering revisiting.
  23. Sometimes, no matter how close people are/were, they still move apart. Life sometimes keeps them apart. Maybe Brenda was away on vacation. That, and we’re not really talking small town. From Wikipedia: Davie is a town in Broward County, Florida, United States, approximately 24 miles (39 km) north of Miami. The town's population was 110,320 at the 2020 census I chose it because of a personal connection. The Danny Joe Brown link was a pleasant (sort of) bonus. RIP DJB.
  24. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 12

    I haven’t commented much, being a much later reader, but I echo all of the above. Great chapter. My only question is what’s wrong with the 18 people (at this point) who only selected ‘Like’? J/K.
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