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Lee Wilson

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  1. Two ends of the spectrum, huh? (No, I don't mean "the spectrum", as in autism.) On Gavin's part, definitely conscious, Bill, who knows? The name was chosen from GA's name generator, although I did wait to find one that was traditionally German. Donnie, hide your eyes, your Iris is showing, what a mistake you're made. Well, no that wasn't really the inspiration, either. I don't believe I've ever heard Can't Stop The Music, but a very nice tie-in.
  2. That’s a good thing to hope for. Will it come to pass? A little light shines here next chapter. Not leaving you all in the dark much longer. Very good. That he did. Thanks.
  3. Hmmm, I didn’t know comments could be edited by someone else.
  4. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 8 S3

    Getting settled in, waiting for the next shoe to drop.
  5. I write my villains well. Yep, he needed more positive reinforcement.
  6. Hmmm, your reading comprehension must be worse than mine. You've already seen it. But thanks for not spilling the beans.
  7. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 17

    Awesome chapter. Not happy Jonah got sent back to NC, but after the last chapter, it was inevitable. Perhaps not permanent, we'll see. I interpreted this as, he put something in Will's drink, and considering the effects, it probably was a roofie.
  8. Thanks. Gotta have some ups before the downs. Oops, did I type that out loud?
  9. Aaaah, there they are. The infamous @weinerdog predictions. Gues we all have to keep reading to see if he's right. BTW, I've written their hearings, so your predictions won't change anything, even if you're right.
  10. Troy is beginning to get what he wanted. How much will he like being pounded by that huge piece of meat?
  11. Thursday The morning started a little differently for Michael and Stephen. Mrs. Inness had an announcement. “We’ll be stopping a little early today so I can take Michael and Stephen into the middle school to get their IDs.” “Why do we need IDs if we’re home-schooled, Mrs. I.?” “There are occasionally school functions that home-schooled children are allowed to take part in. Dances, plays, chorus, et cetera.” “Oh.” “Plus the school district has a database including al
  12. Oh, getting smushed by a semi is too pleasant an outcome for this story.
  13. I think of all my antagonists, one here comes in fifth in his treatment. Behind only the four-way first place tie in ‘Don’t Blame the Band.’
  14. I believe you’ll be surprised when someone from Gavin’s family makes a cameo appearance. It is a great word. I’m glad you used the right song title. Which one was it? Hmmmm. Oh, payback is coming. I think the appropriate term is, in spades.
  15. Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things.
  16. I like overtime in hockey, sudden death. No, I’m not killing Gavin.
  17. Perhaps Gavin isn’t a fan of the air force. At one point their slogan was “Aim High.” I didn’t make him stupid enough to directly take on someone who can benchpress his a55. Gavin gets his just desserts next chapter; at least the first course.
  18. 60’s and 70’s weren’t much different
  19. Good idea. Good guess Kreskin. Thanks
  20. Nice guys finish last. Maybe not here though.
  21. Well, the next chapter’s title should very well fulfill your hopes.
  22. True, and maybe, maybe not.
  23. No savior expected for Gavin. Thanks, re the twist. Like Jeff said in a previous chapter, Leon can take care of himself well enough.
  24. See above. Yes, they’re starting to fit in well. Leon wants Stephen to see not everybody will hate him. Michael, too.
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