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Interrogations and Hospitals
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Interrogations and Hospitals
Will respond to the comments later. Just finished mowing what felt like the back 9 and I’m beat.- 24 comments
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Sergeant Thomas cried out, “We need a medic out here! Stat!” Stephen was sitting on the couch, shaking badly. Pauline was freaking out, "Stephen!" One of the EMTs rushed into the room, "Make some space." He knelt down in front of Stephen, feeling his pulse, counting his respirations. "Stephen! Stephen, can you hear me?" Stephen turned to face the man. "I'm Russell. I know this is all upsetting to you. Try to breathe slowly. Hold your breath for a few seconds."
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Not to mention you were already the subject once. #19 if anybody’s curious.
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Yeah, I'd say so.
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Damn. I used the wrong song.
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Soon, meaning relative to when the dinosaurs roamed the earth. I'm thinking maybe, September? Actually, I did consider delaying chapter 17 a little bit, to raise the tension. But in the end, I'm sticking to my 3-day interval, which of course, I shrink occasionally.
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Trials and Tribulations
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Trials and Tribulations
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More like 1059. 1083 total “Authors”, 22 that have been revealed, one likely correct from #2 - @Mikiesboy, and @Dabeagle. Have to leave you on the possibilities list, since you could be throwing us a curve.
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History was never my forte either. It was the only class that had an F on my report card. And F wasn’t for Fabulous.
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Maybe, but my guess is has seen 'Full Metal Jacket' numerous times.
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Well, I was thinking discipline, but... From now on you're Gomer Pyle.
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I think Aaron is getting tricky. What better choice for this Author Guess Who than our newest Signature Author? @Mark Ponyboy Peters
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Late-Night Texts - A month later
Lee Wilson commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Late-Night Texts - A month later
A brief interlude showing us how hard Dylan has fallen for Troy. Interesting. -
Overhaul, yes. Move, no. Thanks.
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Well, Bobbitizing would have been a nice addition. We’ll see what happens when he recovers. Just the stripping. Would be a heck of a coincidence if the Chevy owner arrived that evening.
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Unless I bring him back as a ghost.
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Yeah, one of Mark's balls already had a hole in it, so he'd be ready to play.
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I take the guideline to warn the readers very seriously. Perhaps my " not too extreme" is further over the line than I think, but I don't want to surprise and thus upset anybody.
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Thanks, it was intense, but I obviously could have made it worse for the boys. Alright, I wouldn’t have wanted to.
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Definitely needed to lighten the mood. Glad you liked the academy comment.
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All hit right on the head.
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It refers to Mook, from his favorite song:
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Mook, maybe? Gavin returns and should address the IF. Yeah, that would have been better. Mark: You shot me in the nut! Stephen: Bullseye!
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After a very short conversation at that. I suspect he closed one eye to aim, so any misalignment was negated. Indeed.
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Thank you. You make perfectly valid points, and I'm happy to say I believe I have addressed them sufficiently in future chapters.
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