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Lee Wilson

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  1. Right?
  2. Using a guillotine, hmm, I think there's a story there, maybe for Detective Saggio.
  3. Hope you're not the Billy from the Def Leppard song, 'Billy's Got a Gun.'
  4. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 15

    Sometimes I hate being right, my comment from the last chapter seems to be dead-on: Clusterfuck isn't sufficient to describe this situation. I'm done making predictions, but I have to say to my fellow readers, be afraid, be very afraid. Tense, but excellent chapter. @irivera There were a couple places where Jonah was looking for Will with Monty where Monty was referred to as Victor, you might want to check/fix that, it confused me for a second before I realized what happened.
  5. Whew. I'm just glad LeeAnn and I aren't really triplets.
  6. Well, hmmm. How does one reveal the truth without revealing the truth? I guess I'll find out if I enter.
  7. Lee Wilson

    Hotel Room 606

    Um, thanks? I do agree that I am not normal, whatever that may be.
  8. No worries, I was joking. Post at your own speed and size. I’m typically 2-3000 myself.
  9. I guess I can’t Bless The Broken Road.
  10. Yeah, I’ve written more than my share of those kinds of parents. Needed to even the score a bit.
  11. Not that I was really aiming at a comedy, just having some comic relief. But glad you liked it.
  12. Hmmmm, more like the treads of a tank falling off. More damage that way.
  13. I have only one complaint. Your chapters are too damn short! Apparently I wasn’t alone in the idea of turning around and grabbing a handful. Can’t wait for more.
  14. Talk about a tease. Stopping like that, downright mean. But then I might have turned around and grabbed a handful. You’re gonna tease? I’m gonna forge ahead.
  15. Keep reading on. Like we could really stop now even if we wanted to.
  16. Interesting start. Like Jason, the title dangled the hook, but the short description made me take the bait. Looking forward to catching up.
  17. Sounds fair. Actually, sounds wonderful. I’ll be there on Saturday. 😇
  18. Damn, can't fool you. Peter hasn't been born yet. This one takes places pretty much in the present, this coming summer. That's an awesome idea. Thankfully, I haven't finished that chapter yet.
  19. Some of those landmines are completely invisible.
  20. Yep, no dickhead parents in this one. Other relatives... Ooops, shouldn't have said that.
  21. I have to believe you'd love to tickle just about anybody.
  22. Perhaps the intro-douchion has been received, but Mel hasn't appeared in a scene yet. Something I believe Jeff will learn in spades at his new school. if he's allowed to go. Ooops, did I say that out loud? Even more intense if he's changing into his swim trunks. Oh, wait, that's a different story that can't be told on GA.
  23. Yes, you have the quieter, gentler Lee for a bit. Things start to get hairier next chapter. True, their gayness doesn't really bother the others.
  24. I haven't fully intro-douched Mel yet, but he'll make a real appearance at some point.
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