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  1. Lee Wilson
    That Saturday evening was the middle school’s ‘Say Goodbye to Summer’ dance. Granted, technically there were still roughly two weeks left of summer, but Labor Day has always been the unofficial end of summer. So, the following Saturday worked pretty well. Michael had been trying to convince Stephen to go almost since school began. Earlier that week he gave it one last try. “I know you’re afraid of what people might say, but look at the YMCA, has anyone ever said anything there?” “
  2. Lee Wilson
    We have not yet heard the last of Gavin.
  3. Lee Wilson
    Speed bumps ahead for sure.
  4. Lee Wilson
    It's good to be the king.
  5. Lee Wilson
    Gee, I'm just coming up to that chapter, I'll have to remember these. And make sure they're wrong, hehe.
  6. Lee Wilson
    I wonder if that's adjusted for time zone. Same time for me in EDT.
  7. Lee Wilson
    Nope, nothing wrong here! Apologies to Vic Trenton for stealing his line. (From Cujo.)
  8. Lee Wilson
    Yes. Both Brodie and Jeff caught a break, Brodie's in part due to his taking responsibility and not ghosting his friend. Hell, I'm almost 5 chapters ahead and I don't know who I'm going to focus on. Most of the characters already introduced play some part in the intervening chapters. I can tell you that chapter 16 is centered around someone you've all been looking forward to meeting. It's funny, the story started out being about Michael and Stephen, but they've been driven into the background quite a few times. There will be more happening with them though, I promise.
  9. Lee Wilson
    He was. Thankfully I have learned how to write good Public Defenders. Michael had been there before, but yes, it's good for both of them to get out.
  10. Lee Wilson
    You may be right. I do have more plans for Gavin. We'll have to wait and see what I do to him. True, I'm not seeing Jeff as violent, mostly clueless that some of the things he does are wrong. Riverside should be good for him. I need to consider more about Jeff. Thanks. Fortunately, I just took out the trash last night, so I have a whole lot of room for more.
  11. Lee Wilson
    True. I'm not sure how much the swim team will be involved going forward, but I think it might have a few interesting points I can add. He was. I think Jeff may very well learn from his mistakes, finally.
  12. Lee Wilson
    Yep. Maybe Gavin might even find a "real" friend. Who knows?
  13. Lee Wilson
    Stephen watched Michael's practice after his was over, since it lasted longer. Matthew had an older sister who was level 2, so he waited around with Stephen, watching his sister. "What did that girl say to you?" "She said I was kind of cute." "Cool. You gonna ask her out?" "Huh? No. She's like three years older than me. She was just being nice." "Oh. Who are you waiting for?" "The boy in lane five right now, Michael. He's a friend of mine." "Why is he feeling t
  14. Lee Wilson
    Awesome. Where do I sign up for a visit from Dylan? I need that to happen to me.
  15. Lee Wilson
    FYI, Craig, mancunian, passed away earlier this year. I'm not too sure how well publicized it was. I found out from @Albert1434, who was a good friend of his. Thanks much for including me in your list of influencers.
  16. Lee Wilson
    Two ends of the spectrum, huh? (No, I don't mean "the spectrum", as in autism.) On Gavin's part, definitely conscious, Bill, who knows? The name was chosen from GA's name generator, although I did wait to find one that was traditionally German. Donnie, hide your eyes, your Iris is showing, what a mistake you're made. Well, no that wasn't really the inspiration, either. I don't believe I've ever heard Can't Stop The Music, but a very nice tie-in.
  17. Lee Wilson
    That’s a good thing to hope for. Will it come to pass? A little light shines here next chapter. Not leaving you all in the dark much longer. Very good. That he did. Thanks.
  18. Lee Wilson
    Hmmm, I didn’t know comments could be edited by someone else.
  19. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 8 S3

    Lee Wilson commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 8 S3

    Getting settled in, waiting for the next shoe to drop.
  20. Lee Wilson
    I write my villains well. Yep, he needed more positive reinforcement.
  21. Lee Wilson
    Hmmm, your reading comprehension must be worse than mine. You've already seen it. But thanks for not spilling the beans.
  22. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 17

    Lee Wilson commented on irivera's story chapter in Chapter 17

    Awesome chapter. Not happy Jonah got sent back to NC, but after the last chapter, it was inevitable. Perhaps not permanent, we'll see. I interpreted this as, he put something in Will's drink, and considering the effects, it probably was a roofie.
  23. Lee Wilson
    Thanks. Gotta have some ups before the downs. Oops, did I type that out loud?
  24. Lee Wilson
    Aaaah, there they are. The infamous @weinerdog predictions. Gues we all have to keep reading to see if he's right. BTW, I've written their hearings, so your predictions won't change anything, even if you're right.
  25. Lee Wilson
    Thanks much.
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