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Well, having Julie Andrews for a queen, I expect nothing less than perfect English from you! 😁

This is very HOT and sexy chapter! Their fighting for the dominance in bed is almost charming! 😁 After this, who cares how mother is going to react! What can she do - sue them for mental anguish due to 'suffer' for 'lost child'?! 🤪

Here I am finally! Hallo everyone!

Coming from the Balkans, I understand the difficulty to express yourself in language which is not your native language. On the other hand, ex-Yugoslavia has been a socialist country, but not under Soviet bloc which means we have learnt English for generations. Although I find my English good enough to communicate, I'm very reserved with possibility to write literature in English. Actually, I've written one poem recently, but it was something personal, so, you'll have to believe @Mikiesboy when he says it's a 'good poem'! Nevertheless, our authors here at GA have made some valid points about reading and speaking English to improve it. BUT! Grammar comes naturally for English born speakers (even they have to improve it). We, my friend, have to learn it in a hard, 'old school' way, and there is no shortcut, believe me! Everything - Tenses, irregular verbs, articles (duh!!!), passive voice... There is something I have to learn again every time I use it - Conditional sentences 😱 and sequence of tenses e.g. Writing is a gift, if you have it, try to improve it by practicing. I wish you luck!

I don't even know what to think about this! My child, naked with some other person, without my knowledge or presence...it's big NO (no matter what are the intentions)!!! I suppose my reaction would have been: I'm not some fighter and I would have probably end up beaten...still!!! On the other hand, what kind of solution is, we strip naked and walk around the garden. No matter how much I like naked buts in @Robert Hugill's stories, I'm not sure what's the message here - be comfortable being naked in front of strangers?!? Exhibitionism is one thing, and it is ok who likes...but children's security comes first! Speaking about children's security...Jackie is one selfish bitch!!! Her reaction to what happened is outrageous but, I will not waste my time commenting her when @Summerabbacat is going to do it much better! Just - Ludo should not worry about her taking child...she is in rush to get rid both of them! Mother from hell! 🤮 As rest of the chapter - it's always amazing reading about @Robert Hugill's characters discovering their sexuality.

No need to read prequels to follow this one, but when you find time, binge https://gayauthors.org/story/laura-s-fox/good-guys-dont-date-bad-boys/ It is the first of Sunny Hill stories and it is amazing, fun and worth of your time! 😉

Be merciful, find her a man!

Both Jeremy and Jeff seem clueless how much Dexter and Laura HATE Carter! It's not just dislike, it's pure hate - very dangerous and destructive hate! Carter should take care of himself!

My question is what is happy ending? Does it, necessarily mean, happy couple, staying together and HEA?! I don't think so. I've read some wonderful stories where couples don't stay together but end is perfectly happy. For example, @Headstall wrote amazing short story Merry Christmas - Fiction - Gay Authors where the main character finally leaves boyfriend after years of cheating. He is not happy; he still has feelings for his ex, but a feeling that he, finally, stood for himself is great relief worth of reading. Another interesting example is Deer in Headlights - Fiction - Gay Authors recently posted by @Salerion. Betray, cheating, disappointment...but the way the main character cut the situation - determined, without hesitation, leaves a feeling that he is not week victim, but somebody who has taken his own life in his hands. Ending has to be meaningful and logical. Dying in Auschwitz is tragedy but, if idea of author is to show the horror of the Holocaust, to shake readers and warn them something like that should never happen again, than sad ending has sense. Maybe answer to the question is not happy or sad ending, it is good ending I like! 🙂

I've come back here after reading complete story. I think now, it's not about roles (top/bottom...whatever). Greg is so sexual that he can do and enjoy anything. It is about his traumatic experience of rape. After horror he survived, he closed himself for any possibility to even try putting something back there! Interesting that Nathan is the first one who liberated Gerg's fantasies. Good doctor is good for Greg!

This sounds exciting...and so 'logical' in this story (not to mention very, very HOT)! As long as Dr's heart is not broken... Duh, what can I say, stupid attaching to the characters! (and I really, really like dr. Nathan)

I think Ryan is going to use those photos for wanking! (in privacy, of course)😜😇

This chapter doesn't bring many new adventures, instead it shows how closer Jeremy and Carter becomes. A long road they have passed - from cruel animosity, till 'best friends' (as they say). @vanalas nicely develops their relationship. They are not becoming lovers suddenly. Their feelings are obvious, but they are slowly falling for each other. Anyway, I feel the storm approaching. Evil doesn't sleep, Dexter and Laura are determined to get Carter out of Jeremy's life. Elena is still captured somewhere...

WOW, what amazing thriller, suspense, mystery, intelligence...and love story this is! Reading the final words of the last chapter, author (un)intentionally brings us to the prologue and first chapter, fantastically concluding the Book 1 of this incredible series. In the first part of the story, we are introduced to Greg - highly educated and intelligent former cop, masked in good looking, average guy. As currently jobless, he lives a difficult life on the edge, with his son and paraplegic father in small, inadequate apartment. A 'good doctor', handsome and mildly autistic guy, enters Greg's life, becoming his 'good fairy' and love interest. We enjoy their funny, even charming encounters, watching two extraordinary guys getting close. BUT then...second part of the story brings complete twist. Looking for a job, Greg starts working for a special Agency as high-class escort. Entering a world of danger, intelligence and global security, he fights demons from the past, face the challenges...starts a new 'hidden' life. The end of the story is just the beginning of Greg's adventures. I'm eagerly waiting Book 2 of the series to see where is @LJCC going to lead our hero.

I didn't want to leave a comment before the end of the story because - it's not the same reading a series and binge read. BUT...this is such a fun chapter; I couldn't resist it! 'The good doctor' and the (ex) cop - great! 😁

For heaven's sake - they HAVE a mother! No matter what we think of Theresa, she is still alive and girls' mother!!! Ralph's parents are so annoying!!! I think, it would be easier if they are some angry bigots who wants to cut relations with their 'sinful' and 'ungrateful' son, but no, they are like pests! There is no fast death with them, just slow cooking like a frog! Duh!!!

Maybe as wake-up alarm!

A M A Z I N G!!! I like Kate!!! The complete action to get pictures and 'save' Bruce is soooo exciting!!! Well, that's it, Bruce is out and looks like there is future for him and Damien after all! I'm intrigued by people from Bruce's childhood. Where are his siblings, is he still in contact with Colt?

After epic story Running with the Pack @WolfM brings this intimate and deeply personal story of repentance and redemption. Chris, one of the main antagonists in the Book 1, takes this thorny road of becoming man/wolf worth of respect and love. Written in a form of journal (diary), Chris uncovers his deepest thoughts, fears, scares and painful memories. Although his actions cannot be justified, and his guilt cannot be completely erased - he gives us backstory of his history with Michael, alpha's son and main antagonist from the first installment. We see how the poisonous relationship and codependence has made Chris a heartless bully. Till the end of this story, Chris learns what the real friendship is, how amazing a true love is and how beautiful and colorful Lycan world is. Chris, the bully has died the day he was sent in exile from his old pack. New Chris has been reborn in new pack. He has paid for his sins and Mother Nature has rewarded him with second chance.

I like the Spring when nature awakens from winter sleep but, summer holiday somewhere at Mediterenian is healing for us living in a landlock country!

I've been waiting your Jackie description!!! You've been gentler than usual!

I don’t know you, But I know this much, On my life you’ve made a touch, Through the words You shine a light, Making our lives so bright. Now you wander a dark path, Desperately look for light, There’s no such a gift in me, To light the flames so you could see. But when you raise your glance at sun, Catching tiny healing ray, Feeling heat while you're at run, That’s me, sending hugs today. My first attempt at writing poetry in English! I know it's not much (certainly not Lord Byron 🙂) but it's from the heart! @Mikiesboy

I had to come back to this moment because I find it very emotional. @WolfM I think Jackie and John Stockdale should adopt Eli 'Mouse', it would be good and healing for all of them!

I agree, it's like we are having two antiheros! It is going to be interesting to see what (and if) is going to bring them to the 'light side of the Force'! 😁

After very hot and sensual scene comes the cold shower - dirty Keren is ready to make a hell out of Damien and Bruce's life! From the start of the story, their forbidden love looks like something sentenced to no future! It makes me more and more anxious to find out how is it going to end!