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@CasualWanderer82 in episode - The Gloat of the Naughty Author!

This is the most wonderful and poetic chapter of this story. The resemblance of famous classics is amazing. White Mane by Franch author René Guillot tells the story about incredible connection between horse and a boy. Appearance the fox by the river, reminded me of Little Prince and his taming of the fox: What does that mean--'tame'?" "It is an act too often neglected," said the fox. It means to establish ties." "'To establish ties'?" "Just that," said the fox. "To me, you are still nothing more than a little boy who is just like a hundred thousand other little boys. And I have no need of you. And you, on your part, have no need of me. To you, I am nothing more than a fox like a hundred thousand other foxes. But if you tame me, then we shall need each other. To me, you will be unique in all the world. To you, I shall be unique in all the world . . ." ... "One only understands the things that one tames," said the fox. "Men have no more time to understand anything. They buy things all ready made at the shops. But there is no shop anywhere where one can buy friendship, and so men have no friends any more. If you want a friend, tame me . . ." "What must I do, to tame you?" asked the little prince. "You must be very patient," replied the fox. "First you will sit down at a little distance from me--like that--in the grass. I shall look at you out of the corner of my eye, and you will say nothing. Words are the source of misunderstandings. But you will sit a little closer to me, every day . . ." Beautiful @CasualWanderer82, symbolic, style...everything! His father never left him, did he? 😢

For the first time I think Brandon is absolutely right! Nicholas is pathetic. 'Oh, my son doesn't like me', 'Oh, he watches kinky porn', 'Oh, where is my little boy from the picture'... He is fake and it's obvious. Above all, he sends his own son to predator's den while drowning into misery. So, Nicholas cannot protect his marriage, he cannot protect his family, he cannot protect his sons nor his lover. Well Nicholas, while you are rediscovering identity and rethinking your life, everything around yourself is falling apart! What are YOU going to do about it?!

When guys have mentioned of possibility of foursome, I finally figured out that Gordy and Graham are not the same person. Actually, I've totally forgotten about Graham, although, it seemed strange to me that police detective is sneaking through the back door. Well, I thought of Graham as somebody to avoid after walking naked around kid, but now, I think of him as great, supportive friend!

A lot is going on. Interesting how technology has changed during the years. Roger had to memorize the face he has seen - nowadays, everyone has smart phones with camera.

I might be wrong, but I also think he is the one hurting Marcus in the car. Why would that be cops when they have free entrance with self-service at Marcus whenever they want?!

I like this quote! 😁 But I see this story more as booze... It's addictive, you know you'll have a hangover, but you cannot let it go!

Wow, another chapter so soon!!! 💪 Anyway, relationships within that family are so toxic that I've felt strong anxiety after the final sentence. It really looks desperate, there's nobody to trust, predators, dressed in friendly masks are waiting for their pray! Nicholas needs a god sex to relax but, he needs someone to talk too! He's alone and he's lost... Brandon...well, I thought it is teenage rebellion at first, but there is so much malice in his communication with his father. Seems they are so much alike, and he is reading Nicholas very good. But his bites are hurtful. I don't know what you are planning for the end but, as it looks now - it is a train wrack waiting to happen! What I need now is another chapter of 'Kingdom'! 🙏😁

@LJCC - I'm so happy for you! Top 8 Most Read Action/Adventure - Spy lighter-hearted spy - Sort of a Alex Rider and some of the earlier James Bond movies 3) Mr & Mister Danvers: Initiation by LJCC Complete

My deepest respect and bow to sir @Mark Arbour! There should be blog with his novels only. I'm sorry I haven't read more of his stories, but it is such a big bite. It is huge written legacy that take some time to read.

Well...I've almost forgotten that, among other things, tags say: crime, police, dark... Your characters always arise so many ambivalent feelings. They are so multidimensional and complex. Nicholas - confused, unhappy with his life, marriage and job found himself tempted by young and handsome Marcus. Hi's ripped between loyalty to family and his own happiness. Discovering his own sexuality is another 'problem', his wife could never satisfy his bi side. Seems that Tom has already passed that line but is he completely honest with Nicholas?! Hole is just a hole...is it?! Dirty cops that like 'f' word but enjoy good male ass! Of course, Marcus cannot report assault when he is assaulted by those who should protect law and order. What shall Nicholas do with this knowledge? How can he help Marcus without putting himself and his family in danger? And finally...what with hidden desires -To act or not to act, that is the question!

Ralph is overwhelmed with this meeting... So, what is it, you don't have that much in common, or you have more in common than it seems?!?

Is Brandon a 'Pawn'? 😁

I've been astonished to see your new story this morning... Then, I've been shaken when read it - it hits too close to home! 🤪 I find some similarities with Nicholas (except for the size...oh, well 🤷‍♂️)... He's strong, healthy guy, with great libido, closed in marriage that looks like a golden cage. It is not a rear case that women, after giving birth, lose interest in sex. Seems that his job is not much adventurous too. And now, he meets a free spirited, handsome Marcus who is challenging all that Nicholas has thought about himself. Oh, the teenagers!!! THAT pain I know very well!!! But it is not all on Brandon, Nicholas has to find a way to communicate with his son. Trapped in his miserable life, Nicholas didn't see how estranged relationship with his son has become. Brandon is not the same boy he was playing with, but Nicholas is not the same man either. They have to get to know each other again, without overprotective mother. Surprisingly, Marcus might help this relationship heal. Your son loves you - good first step!

Ooops, it's gone, I'll have to think some other way to share it! Sorry guys! 😞

I've been playing with AI Bing image creator few days ago. I've put exact description of Bishop from the first chapter. Unfortunately, 'puritan' US programs don't allow nudity so, other description, when Pawn look at naked Bishop in the bed was not possible to create!

One of your chapters that leave me speechless! When I read it last night, I haven't been able to leave a comment. Too much conflicted emotions. So many unspoken words that tells everything. You leave us reading between the lines... First, I've been angry of King for endangering Bishop's life. Then, I've been furious of Bishop for running away and ghosting King. Yes, king is very difficult to handle occasionally, but Bishop was intelligent enough to know it better... You don't play with fire and leave it in the forest without expecting wildfire to burst out...or flame to burn down! And just when I thought that I'll write down comment to express all my anger toward Bishop - Rook did it for me! Maybe harsh, maybe cruel...but it had to be said. Still, your characters are so complex. While still angry of Bishop, I think - can we blame him for wanting to have his own life, his own dreams, his own path... I don't know - did he choose wise or safe?! Considering his illness and loosing of support (Bishop), King's suicide is not surprise. The words he says are so strong: "I'd choose death...a hundred times...if that meant your happiness." He said them to release Bishop, but they sound so accusatory! This guilt is a heavy burden Bishop has to live with. On the other hand, these words make King's suicide act of ultimate love and sacrifice, instead of act of lunacy. It's a samurai way of dying! Finally, Patrick is back with a horse. He might not be King - but he is not Pawn either anymore! Who is he now? So, what's next? Oh, they'll f*ck I'm sure. They'll f*ck senseless, twosomes, foursomes... Maybe even Bishop loses his charry because, well, just to repeat what has already been said - Patrick is not a King! 😉 The question arises - what will the future bring? Is there a future for them? After so much pain, I certainly hope so...

As much as it sounds funny, I have to admit that it is the best and the quickest solution! There would be few days of fuss and then peace! Unfortunately, as Gordy says, this is going to be long, exhausting, unpleasant legal fight with law, police, medias, neighbors...and last but not the least, Jackie herself! It is going to be hell. I hope Arthur and Ludo will at least have some domestic fun, maybe with Gordy too! 😉

So sorry about this news. The curse of human body - healing one thing, we hurt the other! I know that well... But you are a fighter, this is just another battle to win! The friend I was visiting in hospital few weeks ago has been diagnosed with microcellular lung cancer, stage IIIc. He's receiving chemotherapy now. Prognoses are...well, nobody can really tell...or doesn't want to. He's living with his parents now and we speak by the phone every day. The sad thing is that I cannot be by his bed and hold his hand because...well, the things are 'complicated'! Aren't they always...

Bravo @kbois! Btw, does promotion apply to the Krew too?

Till the end of the chapter, I was literary sobbing! So many hurt children, so many ruined lives... Yes, there is hope and there are good people who are going to help, still, I couldn't stay calm to so much pain. I only hope that f*cking criminal Rizzo is not going to hurt any of the good guys. Ok, he doesn't look like very smart mafioso, more like bully who achieved the position somehow but still, angry beast is hard to control. Anyway, there is boss above him too who might find his methods and results unsatisfying and remove him...

First snow! I still haven't change summer tires on my car!!! 😱 At least children are happy!

Is tag put by authors, or it is added by admin?

Just do your backup!!! 🙏😉

Yes, and roof over head...and bed to share...and has swallowed his own pride and went to speak with his bigoted father for Nolan's sake...and made a contact with Russ...and helped Nolan save his company... Well, Ralph has proven his loyalty, so, some patience from Nolan is at least he can do.