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Cane23

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  1. One for hole, hole for one! All for hole, hole for all!
  2. Golf Shirt-Lifters Moto: Stick it into the hole!
  3. Seems like Carter is in some sort of denial when it comes to his feelings for Jeremy. Jeremy has already admitted to himself that he is in love with Carter. On the other hand, Carter stubbornly refuses to even think about it, he is even considering a loveless marriage just to escape the truth.
  4. Maybe they should start softcore - Ralph and Nolan join the Fags for Golf team, playing against his father in promotional underwear (or naked but as @Robert Hugill prefers)!
  5. Very civilized!!! 🤪 Complete Norman's monologue is disgusting! I mean, what to say to this - as it wasn't enough that Ralph was with a boy, but the boy was a commoner too!?!?!? 🤮 Whatever Ralph did was not good enough, no wander these toxic parents have killed boy's self-esteem. I'll just let @Summerabbacat find a punishment for them!
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    Chapter 1

    Why did Jim and his wife insist on hospice for Peggy? Do they have something out of it, is it about the price or they are just playing the smartest (they 'know' what's the best for mum 🤪)?
  7. It's no coincidence that my 100th, celebratory, Review at GA goes to @kbois' story! ❤ @kbois deals with dementia, illness and death in this story. In her unique way, she explores how every family member cope with pain and face the awareness of inevitable loss. Above all, this story is deep, emotional farewell. Farewell devoid of any pathos but colored with lots of love, some sadness, anger and little bit of humor. Peggy left such beautiful legacy, amazing foundations in her family that her funeral becomes a celebration of her life - life that was worth of living. Thank you @kbois! Thank you for making this farewell, even for us who couldn't do it! ❤
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    Chapter 1

    Idea to enter the marriage as virgin is pretty conservative. In my society, I connect it to hypocrisy of straight men who want to f*ck everything that walks but want to marry a virgin to be their (house)wife and mother of their children! Nevertheless, I can respect someone's believing, even more, I respect Charlie's decision to be patient and wait for Eddie. That's what love do to us.
  9. When Charlie decided to defer a year at university and go to US on a road thrip, little did he know that it would be lifechanging experience. Finding Tom in NYC has been everything he was dreaming about. Patient lover, gentleman with respect, understanding man, Tom has brought Charle into the adulthood in a most memorable way. At the same time, this youthful innocence and energy, moves Tom from lethargy, making him believe that life is worth living. As well as Charlie, Tom learns something in this brief relationship. Charlie learns the significance of family and that home is his rescue place whenever he needs it. Finishing education, Charlie finds Eddie, the love of his life, learning that some things are worth waiting for... So...learning, learning, learning...and not just in school - learning from life and experiences too. @Mikiesboy shows the significance of learning in this beautiful short story. Whole life is learning - knowledge and experience is something nobody can take away from us!
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  10. I don't know about that. Nobody complained to me! 😜
  11. I'm too shy! 🙈
  12. I'm glad you are continuing this story. I know its kinky, taboo...and little bit on the edge comparing to other writings here at GA. Nevertheless, your style is amazing, plot is intriguing, and tension is so high. Joshua is predator, using his brother lack of medicine to take him. How is Noah going to break free? Is Shane going to be able to help him? Journalists are offering help but, is the cost for their help going to be too high?!
  13. I like Gordy! I've been thinking he is some old pervert, but he is just another exhibitionist in @Robert Hugill's 'naked buts gallery'! 😁 Fire-crotch!!! I know how THAT looks like! Even with hair getting darker and graying beard, 'fire-crotch' still burns it its flames! 😂 (sorry for TMI 😉)
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    Quack, Quack

    Enough tape can make it thicker! 🤷‍♂️
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    Quack, Quack

    I'm curious - what was the redneck's story and is it based on true events?! Oh, I see the answer now, @weinerdog was faster!!!
  16. In one word - HILARIOUS!!! Lee excelled in comedy again! Warning! Don't try this at home!
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    Quack, Quack

    Ahahahhahahah, Lee, before doing anything with his dick, your guy needs lobotomy! 😂🤣😂
  18. The story is perfect just the way it is! You have focused on one very important, I would say crucial part of Jacob and Tyler's life. That makes this story so intense, something you can read in 'one breath'. Turning it into a saga would make the message of this story less prominent.
  19. Trauma from the childhood and violence outburst triggered by the 'f' word! It all makes sense now. What amazes me the most is support from friends, especially Tyler! Incredible character!
  20. I'm reading this story and have so strong deja vu! Has it already been published elsewhere or I was reading it before becoming a member at GA...I really cannot remember... Nevertheless, amazing characters and interesting plot. Great work @Jeff Burton!
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    Chapter 1

    I LOVE that film! A true sci-fi! Idea to communicate with aliens using the music - amazing!
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    Chapter 1

    Well, if it means something, I like the original trilogy, I don't like prequels and sequels!
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    Chapter 1

    Everybody likes 'Star Wars' - it's not sci-fi, it's a fairytale! 😁
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    Chapter 1

    🤣😂🤣 Well @Paladin your characters are certainly not waiting - always straight at the point! 😁 You've made a nice little mystery around Aaron! Who is he and where is he from? Might be from the future but might be an alien... Is he one of those honest people without filter, or there is a light spectrum of Asperger there? Great start - funny and intriguing!
  25. I thought Dexter knows Carter is Ethan's twin brother and that is the reason he locked Elena - to prevent truth coming out. Obviously, only Elena knows the truth and the reason for capturing her is something else (or nothing at all - Dexter is simply sick bastard).
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