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Chapter 17: Danger is close. Will Carter and Jeremy escape?
Cane23 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 17: Danger is close. Will Carter and Jeremy escape?
As danger arises, arises the closeness between Jeremy and Carter too. When Lopez hit Jeremy, I've been thinking - oh no, not amnesia again! 😉 -
Did I really write that?! 😱
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Somewhere on the Pacific, after accidentally finding himself overboard, Logan is in a cold water, looking his boyfriend's boat sailing away. Eric finds him surrounded by dolphins and rescue him. Two guys, disappointed by their boyfriends, connected by destiny and unusual circumstances find the love of their lives. This amazing story is story of adventure, salvation and love. Thank you @P. E. Knapp for sharing this little masterpiece before the scheduled anthology.
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For a good looking, masculine guy, Barrett is rather insecure. Being a child in foster care probably had some effect on his psychological development. Denial of his sexuality for so long might influenced his self-esteem too. Having one girlfriend, who was more a friend than a girlfriend says something about it. Todd might really help him to open up and feel all the beauties of love and relationship.
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Unfortunately, not, at least not yet! He'll do anything to please his father, at the cost of his own happiness. As I've mentioned before, there is lot of 'emotional manipulation' their father use and Anothony is not strong enough to resist. You know those kind of parents - You can do whatever you want, but you know my heart is weak...ok, ok...don't be sad if I die, I'm not judging you...go live your life, I'm not important...blah, blah, blah...
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Kisses, boyfriends and boats
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Kisses, boyfriends and boats
This is so charming chapter. Conversation with irresistible twins has been amazing! Incredible how relaxed and 'normal' it sounds - daddy having boyfriend or two daddies. Comparing to decade of few ago it is so refreshing being yourself! It should help Ralph open up and find his happiness with Nolan. Of course, nothing can go completely smooth. Judgmental parents are here to make Ralph's life more difficult than it is.- 12 comments
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To quote @drsawzall from previous chapter comment about Anthony - He should reach between his legs and give his testimonials a grope and find the courage to be his own man…. Well, at least Anthony is honest, both with Barrett and himself, even admitting he is jalouse of his brother's independence. Unlike Barrett who keeps his feelings for Todd a secret while talking to Anthony. Is it wise? Isn't it going to be much worse if Anthony sees them together, holding hands, kissing...
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Beautiful story and I have to agree with @centexhairysub - presented in this form, story is finished. If you decide to continue, please do it if you have idea for good plot, not to please us. We are always hungry of good stories, but it is author's inspiration that is important. I would personally like, if you ever decide to come back to this story for rewrite and expansion, a multi chaptered story with more adventures at sea, closer look into the characters - their feelings, emotions, thinkings... The story is amazing in this, short form (as @Al Norris said - to the point), but it also has potential of something bigger. Whatever you decide, wish you success, eagerly waiting to read it.
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Drama continues, suspense grows... If there is anything good out of this situation, it is honest talk between Jeremy and Carter and Carter's revelation of his failed marriage. Is it going to be enough for a fresh start (assuming they are going to escape Lopez and his men)?
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Nope, we are still waiting for the answer. Tomorrow, I guess... 😁
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Anthony doesn't have problem with Todd's sexuality but has problem with father's refusal to accept Todd's sexuality. So, instead of dealing with father, he, stupidly, find it easier to push Todd back in the closet than to push father out of his narrow mindedness.
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Being 'less gay' I usually connect with the hypocritical attitude of the world around me. After explicit hate, thing I despise the most is hypocrisy. What I usually hear people say about Pride - "I have nothing against gays as long as they do, what they do, in their own house! Why do they want to show it to the world...etc. etc.". So, to make parallel with the story, as long as Todd is officially acting straight, marry a woman, have children, play 'perfect American family' (whatever that means) ...he can f*ck whoever he wants in secrecy of his room!
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They lived together!!!!?????!!! You see neighbor almost every day, or lady at the grocery store...and you hear something happened to them...and you feel sorry for them. You live with the guy and just 'put him in the garbage'..! Reading the chapter and the comments, I'm really wandering is Alex just stupid or what..? Like, the complete idiotic plan has been made in some panic. Could it be possible that in the boat were some other substances beside alcohol...?
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Road to man's heart leads through bandages! Oh Anthony - the worst peacemaker in history! If he was working for UN, in the middle of massacre he would have persuading participants not to hurt each other's feelings! Instead of talking to father - he comes to persuade Todd... To do what? To say what papa dearest wants to hear - 'I'll be less gay', 'I'll find a girl', 'I'll work in your company'... accepting to live in lies and denial. And all that emotional blackmail - 'oh, we lost mother, do you want to lose father as well'?!?!?! Really?!? Seems that Todd is the only one in this family who accepted that mother is dead and moved on. Both Anthony and their father are in some sort of denial, they have seriously to deal with the ghosts of the past.
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Oh, who am I to comment your 'diet' my friend! I know it's not disco, but here is a charming song that reminds me of Dylan's upcoming challenge 👇
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Chapter 15: Carter is in deep waters. Will he survive?
Cane23 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 15: Carter is in deep waters. Will he survive?
Yes, one part of Carter's unfortunate life might be continually running from Lopez but there is the other part too - facing Jeremy's mood swings, anger outbursts, loves me/loves me not mind changes, easy jumping to conclusions...it is tiring, frustrating and Carter has to set boundaries somewhere in order to stay sane! -
Bravo Todd, straight forward! 🎯 Easy - stop overthinking and go for it! 🙂
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Chapter 15: Carter is in deep waters. Will he survive?
Cane23 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 15: Carter is in deep waters. Will he survive?
What a melodramatic, self-centered bitch! Btw, Jeremy just wants to help Carter, not marry him (yet 😉)! Well, this chapter shows how conflicted emotions and mess in head can be easily cleared when the person who is the trigger for such emotions is in trouble. Faced with possibility to see Carter being hurt, or even loose him, Jeremy gets in action! Let's see what will happen... -
Alex doesn't look like a guy with some mastermind plan to gain some financial benefit out of Logan's missing. He was probably drunk for a very long time to even notice Logan is not on a board and then, as coward as he is, he was probably afraid to make a report, having to explain everything, maybe even being suspect. He is obviously self-centered, narcissist...which brings us to Logan again. What is he doing with such guy, is it his low self-respect or habit...? Anyway, I'd like to know more about Logan's background - we know he is not rich; he has parents (I suppose concerned about him), so, it would be nice to know who Logan is.
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I thought he might be pushed as well! Why not, if nobody is looking for him... Easy way for Alex to get rid of 'burden'!
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It's my impression of the chapter too. Very, very insecure Todd. He's like ugly duckling waiting to become swan!
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Back to the 122 Club: Going out with a bang?
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Back to the 122 Club: Going out with a bang?
Heyward is preparing to slowly sail away! The question is what kind of mess is he leaving behind? Of course, now that he's leaving, why not to move frontiers a little bit more... From skinny-dipping in the pool, through Lawrence party, we have come to the 'full monty' The Last Party! What is expected of the participants of the party, what kind of communion with host?! Sometimes, I think Vaughan and Dante give too much significance to Francis. He is not so powerful, so is it caution or curiosity leading them?- 11 comments
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He first took advantage of drunk boy and then, he has accused the same boy of trying to seduce him!?!?! Well BRAVO Jeremy, you piece of shit! BRAVO! 👏 What a cliff at the end...let's see who is going to be a hero?
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Poor Anthony, junk both enters and exits his mouth! Let's hope he'll find somebody as Jenny to polish him as much as possible.
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There is the famous quote from 'Jerry Maguire' movie - You had me at hallo! Well Dylan had me the moment he helped girl with Diabetes at the party. Till now, the best scene in the story for me. That's the Dylan I like and whatever personal mistakes he makes, he is going to be Dylan the brave healer for me!
