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Just...give me some ABBA song to wash this picture out of my head! 😜
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So many things have happened in single chapter... Amazing sex and first anal sex for Barrett, then Anthony finds out about Barret and Todd, then daddy dearest finds out about Barrett and, finally, Barrett agrees to mediate in father/Todd's relationship! 😁 I wasn't so much surprised with Anthony's reaction. Actually, I've expected something like - Oh, you've put Todd in bed to hide Sabrina. She must have been left this morning in secrecy! But ok, he is not that stupid! Jenny being older than Anthony might be exactly what he needs - not exactly milf but, serious lady who can be both girlfriend and 'mum' to childish Anthony. Woman who can handle his 'stupidity' and 'immatureness'.
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Yes, end it here! We like depressive, sad ends... Now I'm going to drown myself in alcohol... BULLSHIT! Of course we want HEA! Continue this book or write another one, just deliver it to us!!! Please! 🙏- 19 comments
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'Exchange students' from Norway - sure!!! They learned in self-defense course how to disarm bandits with guns... They live in luxurious house with Finish sauna and jacuzzi!!! They are here to improve English knowledge - of course they are!!! Well Mett, take care what comes in package with Oscar! 😉
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Three of them are like three divas, God help them with this 'ingenious' plan of fake boyfriends! Channing has to grow up too (as Anthony), maybe Dillon's 'down to earth' mentality could be a good boyfriend material for Channing... If he could only see...
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I feel so sorry for Anthony, he is such a big child. Big, unhappy child, living to please his father, living his father's dreams and acting in some ridiculous way just to show his father he is man enough. Mother knew... She knew Todd needs protection as gay guy in cruel world of hate, but also, Anthony needs support and somebody to look after him. If Anthony could only rely more on Todd and Barrett, and less on authoritarian and old-fashioned father!
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Even lamer is that Anthony, actually, bought it! 🤪
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Exactly! BBC - Barb Broadcasting Corporation!
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The complete gossip session between Therese and her friends leaves a feeling of bad taste, at least. It's so provincial with no class at all. Oh, maybe I expect too much of her! I should be happy there was no malice... It's nice watching Ralph getting comfortable with himself and his own sexuality. I mean, comment like this: ...would be impossible for Ralph to say not so long ago. Must be feeling relief to make such a comment with confidence and without shyness.
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Yea, but poor guy doesn't have a clue! He's oblivious and doesn't see any problem with himself or his behavior!
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If there is anything good out of this 'parenting thing' it's getting rid of Alex! Parenting is a huge challenge, even for couples; but for a single guy, soldier, faced with prejudices...it is going to be a roller-coaster ride!
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Anthony doesn't want to hurt his father's feelings so, he is playing 'political correctness' around him. At the same time Todd and Barrett don't want to hurt Anthony's feeling, playing dumb to his stupid, infantile behavior. Who is winning here - nobody, except they might get some vision problems out of rolling their eyes constantly! Guys, stop playing curtesy and help each other with honest talk (as much as it might hurt somebody's feelings). The truth will set you free (and Anthony might get a girl finally ).
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Chapter 18: Jeremy's life is in danger. Will he make it?
Cane23 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 18: Jeremy's life is in danger. Will he make it?
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@vanalas at hist best! Love, passion, hate, betrayal...everything is there, suspense from the very start with many cliffs! Join the ride and enjoy its excitement!
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OMG, they are so beautiful together. Ok, sex is always hot bat there is also something charming in their insecurities...so realistic and cute. Now Dillon - another idiot in the room trying to please his parent!!!! It sounds like harmless favor, but it could cause a total mess and epic misunderstandings!
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Chapter 18: Jeremy's life is in danger. Will he make it?
Cane23 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 18: Jeremy's life is in danger. Will he make it?
What kind of woman enter a hospital and slap injured person?! Oh Laura, what secrets do you have, why Carter makes you so angry?! And Dexter - he's completely insane...going around and introducing himself as Jeremy's fiancée?! These bastards will do anything to keep Jeremy and Carter separated! As @Mancunian has said - I'm sangry too! (although it sounds like Spanish wine 😁) -
No, because Berret hasn't explain this to Todd yet! And there is some of his own idiotic behaviour to explain: Memories of my comments I made to Richard during sophomore year resurfaced, and I felt like complete shit. Anthony was more observant than I previously gave him credit for, and I was the insensitive asshole back then saying derogatory slurs at someone who was only being himself.
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I have sympathy for Synthia because she reminds me of my daughter. We are teasing her sometimes that she reminds us of terrorists with dynamite around her waist - wherever she goes, there is explosion!
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A preview and a press launch
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in A preview and a press launch
Back in 2012 I think, I saw the exhibition in Vienna's Leopold museum "Nude Men From 1800 to the Present Day"! The really exciting thing were placards put all over the city, including bus stops, showing explicit full-frontal photo montage of three footballers by French artists Pierre & Gilles! The Freud Museum is not far away too... -
Barrett's search for his mother brings some interesting intrigue to the story. Although clumsy, Cynthia might be good choice for this job. She is well motivated to continue search for Barrett's parents. Both due to her personal background and wish to prove herself. Dillon and Todd had an argument. What could it be - is it about Barrett or something else?
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Chapter 17: Danger is close. Will Carter and Jeremy escape?
Cane23 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 17: Danger is close. Will Carter and Jeremy escape?
As danger arises, arises the closeness between Jeremy and Carter too. When Lopez hit Jeremy, I've been thinking - oh no, not amnesia again! 😉 -
Did I really write that?! 😱
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Somewhere on the Pacific, after accidentally finding himself overboard, Logan is in a cold water, looking his boyfriend's boat sailing away. Eric finds him surrounded by dolphins and rescue him. Two guys, disappointed by their boyfriends, connected by destiny and unusual circumstances find the love of their lives. This amazing story is story of adventure, salvation and love. Thank you @P. E. Knapp for sharing this little masterpiece before the scheduled anthology.
