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@Summerabbacat, Cane is halfway to Greece; on Ohrid lake, with good internet connection luckilly! So, less of me next two weeks; with more typos unfortunately! 🤪

On a half way to Lefkafa GR, on a beutiful Ohrid lake in Nor. Macedonia! Gooood internet, but bad typing on the phone so sorry for that! Anyway, guys did great, two broken hearts and one broken soul need healing! I think they are going to be ok!

"I’ve been thinking. Maybe we should plan a road trip together, somewhere neither of us has been. What do you think?" @kbois 'Hide and seek', ha! 🤣😂🤣

Oh, are you going to tell us the name?! 😂 So, not Kai, but Megan is secret admirer... When she finds out (I don't know how, but I think she will) it is going to be hilarious! Intimate acts are great, now that you started, don't stop writing them! 😉

Jeremy is not a"grumpy boss", he is a bully! As others have mentioned, we can understand his grief, but worse things happen in life and Jeremy should ask for some professional help to control his anger and deal with his pain. Without a doubt, Jeremy is very intelligent and passionate man, but he can be jealous, he can easily explode, and he can be very cruel! He is the master of self-destruction and Carter, due to his similarity with Ethan, is going to be collateral damage! Carter has to develop some self-protection skills. He needs some people to support him, too as he is so desperately alone! We will see the reaction to Carter, especially the reaction of Ethan's mother! Is this going to be the first time Carter will see Ethan's picture...hm, like reflection in the mirror. That will rise some questions!

Larence of Arabia party #2 - is this going to be topic until Francis spend all the decoration he has bought for the first one?! And then, Vaughan and Dan, both aroused, hiding in a bush to have sex! Priceless!

Aww, how romantic! I LOVE this kind of Dirty Dancing moments! 😍 Snowy's amazing support for the guys has made me think - does Snowy play for the same team...maybe?!

Lifechanging events in this chapter. As much as losing both parents is sad, it is actually a new beginning for Ollie. With married Andre and Chris, they are going to be a real family. With the support of extended family and friends, it is going to be a life every child deserves.

Sucess of the story is usually combination of few factors. First and foremost is your remarkable and polished writing style due to talent and lot of writing practice over the years! Then, there is a topic - something refreshing and different. You are very organized; publishing schedule is very helpful for readers who are following the series. Timing can be very important too. At this moment, your story is one of those who stands out by its originality. For example, I've been following five teenage high school stories, they are all good, but I had to drop two because it was overwhelming and confusing (not to mention never enough time to read everything). At the end, you've chosen an excellent editor. @kbois's reputation as author and as a supporter is well known! She's celebrity at GA! It is not secret, where she goes, crowds go too! 🙂

Oh, mushrooms! 😉

They are still very hesitant and reserved to each other. Understandable knowing the circumstances that leaded to their meeting. Something has to break that dam, is it alcohol or right surrounding...but deep, honest, maybe even painful conversation has to be done to clear the air. If it includes anger and tears, so be it; but for the sake of them both, this 'political correctness' has to stay in this chapter only!

Teenage drama! Duh! 🤪 I watch it almost every day. The protagonist is my daughter actually but basics are the same! Everything is going to be ok!

Oh Jamie, he repeats he has been honest with all guys he was with. But nobody accused him of dishonesty! The truth is, he wants to be LOVED but doesn't want to confess that to himself...or others!

Yes, that was beautiful and very sensual. It was very realistic too. Two men, having their 'intimate act' for the first time, knowing each other, learning about preferences and what arouses them. Overcoming the physical limitations Kai still has. Adam is not 'innocent' but seems that his partners were quite selfish in bed. Kai will love him, cherish him, adore him and satisfy him.

@Ronyx is known by stories exploring social issues as - racial issues, homophobia, abuse, illness etc. Going one step further, this story deals with illness affecting older people. Rehabilitating after stroke, Phil is lying in hospital bed waiting a Death to occur and take him to final voyage over the river Styx. Luckily, it is a young man Collin who shows at the door, becoming Phil's confessor and friend. Reveling his past, Phil slowly becomes physically and psychically better discovering that the sunset of his life doesn't have to be depressed and dark. During this emotional and touchy journey, you will cry, you will laugh and at the end, you'll make a farewell to this tale with feeling that age is just a number!

I thought it has been addressed to us!

This is epic line, so deep and meaningful -you have a VOICE! Reminds me of famous line from the movie The King's Speech. Well, a motivation speech can be a part of therapy, why not. I have to say there are readers more perceptive than me. I've really thought that, after resolving his own issues, Matt will go back to Scotland Island where Andrew will wait him. Well, “If the Mountain won't go to Mohammed, then Mohammed must come to the Mountain", and I like it! 🙂

As long as he is the only male nurse in the house! * Just saying *

You know, this situation did remind me a bit of your characters Pete and Mitch. Not that Guy is necessarily selfish prick as Mitch but, this expectation to have anal sex and assuming that he is going to be top...it is all a bit presumptuous. Teen age is still young and insecure. They are experimenting, many guys are not even sure they are gay at all, let alone are they bottom or top. If you want to take, you have to be ready to give, later on, if they find the roles they like, so be it. Bottoming, without preparation, in park, for the first time - forget it!

Tim could give Jason some credit. He could have made him a huge problem in his life, but he didn't. There is always some rivalry between siblings, but what I said (and what Jason didn't say) speaks a lot about Jason's character.

The most charming jealousy description I have ever read! 🙂 Kai and Adam are good together but, there is something about their dynamic that cannot last. I suppose Adam is going to be in nursing mode as long as Kai is on rehabilitation and still not totally capable to do everything healthy grownup man does. Kai is NOT a guest in that house anymore. They are not quite in d/s relationship but, it is obviously Kai is an alpha. But...you cannot be alpha and have a sugar daddy at the same time. Both financially and organizationally, their duties will have to be more balanced in the future, otherwise, Kai might feel really bad and unsatisfied - like lion in the Zoo. Adam could go on like this forever. He is Florence Nightingale reincarnated!

I like it. We have something similar - don't defecate around your neighborhood, you might step in the shit!

I'm in Greece on holiday for the last two chapters! God give me good wifi!!! 🙏

Just to make it artistic, Francis must put theme for the event - Caligula maybe?! 🤔

Before him were the wind-swept trees of Windy Island, and a figure was only a shadow in the distance. As he walked toward it, the ghostly shape turned and opened its arms in welcome. As he drew closer to it, the dark form faded more and more, and when Matthew reached the place where it had stood, it was only smoke. Disappointment rocked him. I think therapist will help Matt get Andrew out of the smoke! 🙂🤞