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The young ones needed their time together in a combined family setting.
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Kevin was scrolling through the photos on his camera when Cameron moved to close his laptop. "Cam do you have a SD card reader on your laptop?" "Yeah, I do. Why?" "I thought I could share the photos we took out on the water." There was enthusiastic general approval. Kevin slipped the card into the laptop and opened it. A quick search brought up the file and he opened the first photo. Everyone's focus returned to the morning's event. He scrolled through the photos he had taken
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So Garrett and Kyle are going to double date Finn and Orel. Way back in Chapter 1 we found out that Lydia wants a double date with Orel and Finn and :: ? :: as an in to having Orel as her partner at Steve and Kenny's wedding. How is Lydia likely to react to Orel being involved in a double date that doesn't include her? She's not a lady to be crossed. Even more interesting is how Orel will cope with Lydia's intentions.
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To be honest @Bill W, this Aussie has never been to a Denny's so my "knowledge" was a combination of google search and imagination. But then it's in the future Denny's could have morphed into any sort of restaurant. Sorry Denny's fans, but I'm too far away for you to get to me. Hmm a Scottish accent for Randy? I think I've got enough problems with Denny's fans without riling the Scots as well.
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Orel is a survivor, a survivor (as previously commented) with a touch of magic. He was a chrysalis surviving the torment of his father and Tarquin and the ineffective protection of Oliver. Having emerged he is now using those survival skills to forge his own life. A life that involves working rather than the family money. At the moment what he lacks are the skills required to survive love.
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resonance - Word of the Day - Wed Jan 28, 2026
Paladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Definitely $. You would notice I did not refer to Hellmark as "artistic works" either. -
resonance - Word of the Day - Wed Jan 28, 2026
Paladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
The masterstroke of Hallmark is resonance with very large numbers of greeting card buyers. -
They locked the barn but it is still there. Can the barn be a bonfire for "the gala"?
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Tarquin is so real. I have met people just like him, and more of their victims. They are the foundation of domestic violence. Tarquin's fatal flaw is his arrogant belief that he will always win. Let's hope the goodies can exploit that so he doesn't see the hit coming.
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emphasis - Word of the Day - Sat Jan 24, 2026
Paladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
You mean all sound and fury signifying nothing? I know a number of world political leaders like that. -
I noticed that Greg did not let Grace know about his mind-to-mind ability, which seems superior to Mercury when it comes to contacting his council and inner circle. Now has Athena been listening in and knows about Greg's abilities? I also noticed that Alex remained very quiet. Does that mean that he doesn't foresee any problems with the technology or the Coat of Arms?
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Without my glasses everything is out of focus. Sometimes things are out of focus because of too many glasses.
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Quote: Then, below the map, he started a list in his tight, blocky script. LYDIA. Resources. Intel. Ruthlessness. OLIVER. Access. Ledgers. Motive. EVIDENCE. (What? Where?) TIMELINE. Founder’s Day Gala. Pressure point. EXIT STRATEGY. For Orel. I would prefer" Lydia, Orel, Eliminate, Tarquin, Excruciatingly
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Phoenix and Billy are certainly an awesome fated couple. So Billy is adding additional fetish ideas to Randy's porno script. I hope Phoenix and Billy rest over the weekend. Monday could be very exhausting.
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What is Randy scripting for our two ticklish fetish porn stars? Now, searches online for . . . . no, not for that 😊
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I love the frozen leg of lamb murder. It was first published by Roald Dahl but I remember the Alfred Hitchcock adaption for his TV series.
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Maybe enhanced recycled water
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5'9" that's nearly enough to bury a problem.
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You left out Brian and Alex. Poor Alex. He'd hardly tasted Merrickville water before - poof Somehow Lydia can wade through water.
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All those gay guys in Merrickville. I knew it! It's in the water!
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There's an old saying: The first generation establishes the business; the second generation builds the empire; and the third generation squander it all.
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A line has been drawn and Lydia and Finn are ready to fight. Allies are being gathered. We are about to see the start of Operation Overlorded Orel. Rescuing Orel is the mission. Collateral? Tarquin.
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I was thinking of it as the highlight of the parade float. Something colourful and dramatic for his exit.
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I would prefer to see him fired from the cannon with the gilt edged confetti and into the sinkhole he wouldn't repair.
