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‘Chess Apocalypse’
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Who better to restore order after all the chaos? The dynamic father and son duo #teamJasanny.
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Blake likes Steve. I suspect he sees a lot of himself in Steve. We saw that just now when grading the assignment and when he set the assignment he was enjoying the thought of creating utter chaos in the carefully ordered ranks of the school’s social cliques. So, I think he will probe the truth from Kenny and stir Steve but unlikely that he will do anything to really harm either Steve or his lover's son, Kenny. But now stand by for the clash of the two forces of chaos. I'm looking forward it it. It should be fun.
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I like that it's Kenny who suggests they shower together and it's chaotic goofball who is concerned about his parents knowing. Kenny counters by suggesting his place when his mom's out. Steve didn't immediately agree, but I hope he does. There's nothing wrong with shower sex and even when it gets dirty, it's clean.
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I am sure that when the time comes Kenny will be so completely emotionally involved that Lysol won't even make it to his list of priorities.
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While I'd like to think so, I'm not so sure. He would certainly know about Steven's money making schemes (Indeed the school administration are leniently aware) but there is nothing at this stage to suggest he knows about the above the nail shop enterprise. That is unless 3000 words of disclosure lands on his desk.
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I'm sure they have more in common with what they like, than Brian's cakes, doughnuts, fairy cup cakes and cream puffs but probably not beaver-tails.
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The Barista and the pastry chef! Hang on there. What's this about the neat plate of pastries the Goalie always seemed to leave on Mister Wolochowski’s desk? Do these boys have more in common than we know?
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Will this 3000 word, whatever it is, expose the the existence of the above the nail clinic enterprise? Lydia won't be happy and and the boys won't like that. 😏
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Do we also have #teamBryle or #teamKylan? Strangely I don't see Lydia skipping school as a problem. I don't think there's anything in the high school Business Studies curriculum that she hasn't already mastered.
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And they're not telling.
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What! More than the fresh salt breeze?
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Patience. Wait and see
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Maybe not the only one.
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Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy the story.
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Oh, I think uncle's lawyers are very interested in the money, as well as what they hoped would be an enhanced reputation in criminal law.
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Thank you @Ticklishboy30. I had many problems posting this chapter on Storylovers. Pleased you got to read it.
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I thought it was obvious. Blake is old enough to be Kyle's father, and yeah the siblings, especially Steve know how to exploit an opportunity.
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Yes I agree, Kenny isn't just an attached boyfriend. He is the missing part of their business, and they need him. I don't see Clovis as being dumb. And his job? Picking up and delivering money to businesses around town. Follow the money to find out whose behind the action. Clovis might hide behind his paper because it stops him telling what he knows.
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I'm barely game to comment. However now I just have to stick my neck out. Fortunately, I can see love lasting longer than lunch swapping. Of course Steve would turn the student art work of the event into a Merch opportunity. He just forgot the golden rule. Offer the school a commission. Now, did he get a copy of the drawing Blake likes? Kyle is gorgeously out of his depth, but points for trying. I'm sure he'll find his DILF soon enough. I'm pleased Lydia doesn't trust the Patels. Very wise. I'm not going to comment on the goalie baker in the Home Economics class that Lidia already has plans for.
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Chapter 3: Meet the Monroes!
Paladin commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 3: Meet the Monroes!
I would have gone for unmarried. I can't imagine anyone surviving dating, long enough for a wedding. 😅 -
Defending himself would be entertaining. What's that expression? Anyone who represents themself in court has a fool for a client.
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Yes Horse now has enemies everywhere. When he ends in prison the other inmates will only befriend him in order to get close enough to . . well your suggestion would be appropriate.
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I'm sure the Border Force guys at Sunshine Coast Airport will become "persons of interest" in the expanding police investigation. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Chapter 3: Meet the Monroes!
Paladin commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 3: Meet the Monroes!
I've been wondering the same thing. She still uses the Monroe family name, so she is either unmarried, divorced or didn't chamge her name for marriage. She referred to Adrian as "your cousin" when he met Zayn on arrival, so he is probably not her son. She invited Harry to the gathering, knowing that he is Zayn's ex from an unsatisfactory relationship. She is blatantly trying to match them again. If anyone is the troublemaker, it's Veronica. What is her game within the family, and what else is Harry to her. Leonardo, quiet, observant and thoughtful has turned out to be far more interesting, I agree @Cane23 that he is the one most likely to spot that the relationship is fake. At this point I like him.
