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Chapter 31 - Another Day Out
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 31 - Another Day Out
If only the legal system was so cut and dried. -
Chapter 31 - Another Day Out
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 31 - Another Day Out
Thanks, well spotted @quttzik. I think all corrected now. -
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Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 31 - Another Day Out
True, as Simon observed 'Martin, the amount of money alone will get the fraud squad interested '. Maybe Noah could be the winner in all this. -
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Thanks @Summerabbacat, I also heard the music when writing and worked to avoid Jaws tropes. -
Chapter 31 - Another Day Out
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True shit happens @Summerabbacat. Let's see how it plays out. -
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A busy and successful day on the harbour. Martin and Simon are about to turn the fraud information over to the police and we'll follow what happens. -
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👍 More to come on Natasha and her legal team @Flip-Flop -
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Chapter 31 - Another Day Out
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Chapter 31 - Another Day Out
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 31 - Another Day Out
Thanks @chris191070. More to come on Natasha. -
Chapter 31 - Another Day Out
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 31 - Another Day Out
Sorry @Lynx003, Jonathon here isn't a link to previous stories, although there are other links between the stories. A future story will cover the painting and those surfers and lovers. -
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More on the police investigation and action coming up @CincyKris and @dboggs9700. Also more on Noah. -
Brock did not leave the flight in Singapore. When he arrived at Heathrow, he was met by his elderly parents with his name on a sign and two young police officers with his name on a warrant. Christian Charters' legal team had worked quickly to secure charges relating to profiteering from his party cruise scheme. Back in Sydney the KYS employee who had authorized the payments for the use of Get Knotted was wishing he'd also bought a ticket to . . . . . actually to anywhere without extradition
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Chapter 30 - All Hands on Deck
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 30 - All Hands on Deck
Yes @Summerabbacat, in London Martin said he felt his life had been turned upside down and he was working on coming to terms with the changes. This is probably his final challenge. Martin went to London a divorced, straight, middle class, male psychologist. Since then he has accepted his mother's love affair and his greatly extended family. He has embraced his sexuality. He has managed being wealthier than he could imagine without flaunting it, and now he has to come to terms with having a role in British Nobility. He didn't think titles were important and now he has one many people believe is important. -
Chapter 30 - All Hands on Deck
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 30 - All Hands on Deck
Maybe @Summerabbacat, a cruise outside the harbour where they could "fall" overboard. -
A lot depends on when this story is set. If this century, then there are statuary check requirements. If last century then Tony's approval would be enough.
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Chapter 30 - All Hands on Deck
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 30 - All Hands on Deck
Those newly erected obelisks would be looking for happy endings without obstacles -
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Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 30 - All Hands on Deck
Well they have transport, they now just have to find the island. -
Chapter 30 - All Hands on Deck
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 30 - All Hands on Deck
Not sure what they needed it for but we know how it was being used. I'm sure the guys will find uses for it that benefit the company and provide some fun for themselves. -
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Chapter 30 - All Hands on Deck
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 30 - All Hands on Deck
I'm pleased people are concerned about Noah. He hasn't been forgotten. Maria and Noah are both still living with 'the vindictive ex.' and attending the same school. Natasha was angry that Noah insisted in going to the party and he didn't want to face her while was still angry. Importantly, Noah has witnessed first hand that Martin's home is safe and welcoming. -
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If Brock arrives in London KYS will be able to take action against him. 🤞 -
Chapter 30 - All Hands on Deck
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Benjamin and Justin are enthusiastic. -
Chapter 30 - All Hands on Deck
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 30 - All Hands on Deck
With Rick in charge of a cruise to a gay nude beach wouldn't you expect champagne and a great time, -
I just assumed that Matt and Luke had passed formal 'working with children checks' before the visit. The Centre could not have allowed the visit if they didn't.
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