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Chapter 28 - Can you keep a secret?
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 28 - Can you keep a secret?
Nathan also sees it as their jointly owned place. -
Chapter 28 - Can you keep a secret?
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 28 - Can you keep a secret?
Yes, the family all had time to understand and accept Nathan and Martin, but if Nathan and Martin had been warned they would not have suffered as much angst as they did. -
Chapter 28 - Can you keep a secret?
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 28 - Can you keep a secret?
The party Benjamin attended was the official one Natasha planned so we can guess how it went. -
Saturday morning was organized chaos. Everyone was up early. Martin fell into the role of providing a continuous breakfast as Justin’s friends started arriving. He looked up as a man in his forties asked if he could have a coffee. “Not a problem. I’m Martin by the way, Dad to Benjamin and Justin.” “I’m Russell. Nice to meet you. I’m delivering the steel.” “Oh, you’re the guy who did all the steel fabrication. How much do we owe you?” “Yeah, that’s me and you don’t owe me anyt
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Chapter 2: The Ministry, the Massage, and the Mollusk
Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2: The Ministry, the Massage, and the Mollusk
An agent of chaos waddling hand in hand with an agent of order. Sounds perfect for dealing with the gremlins in the system. Charlie and Pip are moving closer. Is Cecil likely to accept a third father? Things could get heated! -
patience - Word of the Day - Sun Aug 23, 2026
Paladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
I've noticed that when the events in a story are calm readers often comment in terms of the calm before the storm. Patience is required while waiting for the story to reveal all. -
Yes @Doha a little push could help,
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And thirsting for more 😉😉
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Sex education has to be age appropriate and geared to what the child wants to know and needs to know. I love the story of the boy in about Grade 2 who rushes up to his mum after school and asks "Where did I come from?" Mum thinks OK this is where I start the sex talks and launches into what she thinks he needs to know. When she's finished she looks at her confused son and asks, "Is that what you wanted to know?" Her son looks at her. "I'm not sure. It's just that a new boy started at school today and said he came from Canada, so i wondered where I came from.
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True, there will be more coming.
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There can also be psychological turmoil. Martin is still facing changes to his own identity.
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Something for Martin to think about. maybe after he sorts out his sexuality and love life.
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continuance - Word of the Day - Fri Aug 21, 2026
Paladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Remembrance Services regularly include reciting all or part of The Ode to the Fallen by Laurence Binyon. The lines: They shall grow not old as we who are left grow old At the going down of the sun and in the morning We will remember them Is a beautiful example of continuance acknowledging the absence of continuance -
I wouldn't say no!
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My problem @Summerabbacat is remembering to keep the characters in the right story(s).
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Chapter 10 – Moving has its Moments
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 10 – Moving has its Moments
Thanks @Doha Benjamin and Justin have found a caring home. -
It was the catalyst for Justin asking Martin if he could call him 'dad'. That was when both Justin and Benjamin started calling both Martin and Nathan, 'dad'.
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True @Summerabbacat I didn't properly introduce Hamish. At the dinner where Maria announced she would be living with Lachlan the following year, Hamish was mentioned as capable of running the business. He is Lachlan's brother. Calling Martin, Uncle Martin, could be courtesy or acknowledging a family connection through Maria. Remember Maria calls Lachlan's parents "mum" and "dad".
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Yes @Flip-Flop they seem to have contained the Turmoil faced by Mark and Liam. They seem to be getting better at dealing with turmoil, but that doesn't stop there being more turmoil. Meanwhile, they are getting on with their lives.
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Yes @dboggs9700 Nathan is growing in acceptance of himself and in confidence.
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Rundle Mall has an art instillation of three large bronze pigs titled "A Day Out". Martin and Nathan took photos of of themselves with the pigs when Martin spent Easter in Adelaide.
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Monday morning in the kitchen was busier than usual as Martin and Justin prepared breakfast for the regular six plus Mark. Then Shane and Hamish came in through the back doors. They were offered breakfast. Shane took Martin aside. “We got this urgent request to install temporary cameras I didn’t realize you wanted everything so quickly. We will put in the temporary cameras today and can do the two houses on Wednesday if you approve the quote.” Rick overheard the conversation. “Shane, i
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Turmoil Chapter 4 – decisions and revelations
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Turmoil Chapter 4 – decisions and revelations
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In Sydney in the 1950-s. 1960s and early 1970s the Queen of etiquette, poise and deportment was June Dally-Watkins. At her school of deportment for young ladies aspiring to be models or socially competent, she taught poise by requiring her students to practise walking with either a volume of an encyclopedia or a copy of the Sydney phone book balanced on their heads.
