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Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Sorry @Flip-Flop , bush cooking will be of only little help. The lyrics of 'Waltzing Matilda' will be more help. Also some interesting points, especially regarding the boys living with him and the business trip.- 34 comments
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Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
I'm pleased, @Summerabbacat that I have brought back, hopefully, enjoyable memories of your time living nearby Forest Lodge. I, of course , will deny any knowledge of the Liquorland at broardway. -
Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
Sorry @Summerabbacat . our first meeting with Natasha is a couple of chapters away. There is other turmoil in Martin's life. Yes, I also like Pavlova made with chick pea brine.- 34 comments
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autonomy - Word of the Day - Sat Mar 21, 2026
Paladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
There are many people who believe they achieve autonomy through sovereign citizenship. -
The next morning Martin was making coffee and preparing breakfast when Rick and Simon entered the kitchen. Rick breathed in deeply and sighed, “Ah, once again one of your fabulous breakfasts,” and then cheekily added, “brings back memories of your flat in London.” Simon and Martin blushed appropriately, as Martin responded, “Help yourself to coffee. You obviously need it. Food coming up shortly.” After a breakfast of scrambled eggs on toast with bacon and grilled tomato, Simon tha
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Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
I think between the drinking, food and swimming the evening was more social than drunken. I'm sure they had a satisfying night. -
Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Ah yes! That demon alcohol who enhances the desire and steals the ability! -
Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
You'll have to wait a few chapters before seeing Natasha and her reaction. Meanwhile more turmoil for Martin. -
Turmoil Chapter 4 – decisions and revelations
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Turmoil Chapter 4 – decisions and revelations
Yes, I've had all of that. -
shamrock - Word of the Day - Tue Mar 17, 2026
Paladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Don’t miss what’s happening People on X are the first to know. . -
Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Justin is very grounded and good for Benjamin, so you will learn more about him soon. -
Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
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Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Bert has told us he is an Earl and suggested Martin assume his subsidiary title of Viscount. Martin is reluctant to use his doctorate title. Don't expect Martin to flaunt his title, but there may be occasions when it could be useful. -
Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Thanks @Gary L I'm hoping readers will have a few laughs while following Martin's turmoil. -
Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Thanks @Cane23 for commenting on the fun aspects of the chapter. I probably should explain that here, the age of (sexual) consent for both heterosexuals and homosexuals is 16. The legal age for consuming alcohol is 18. Yes, legally, you can be fucked before you can be drunk. So far the kids don't know about Martin's changed circumstances. Martin stopped Rick disclosing their familial relationships. Time will tell if they want to change their surnames. -
Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Expect turmoil! Benjamin (and Justin) could always rely on support from Rick and Simon. -
recognition - Word of the Day - Sun Mar 15, 2026
Paladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
The polls here, for some politicians, provide recognition of just that. -
recognition - Word of the Day - Sun Mar 15, 2026
Paladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Of course in Australia the Tab is a betting agency, and politicians consider polls and betting statistics, recognition of their popularity and re-electability. -
Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Exactly, regarding Natasha. Two brothers and four ex-sisters in law! Multiple questionable tastes in wives? -
recognition - Word of the Day - Sun Mar 15, 2026
Paladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Recognition is important to politicians and in recognition of that we could have a political tab. -
Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
More on why Natasha allows Benjamin to spend Friday night away from home in the next chapter. She is very self-centered. Remember she dumped all three children on Martin so she could have a holiday in Cambodia, despite being so negative towards Martin. The world is as she sees it, or in some cases, how she doesn't see it. Keep speculating @Summerabbacat some of it is very close, and I agree, she has no intention of making life easy for Martin. Given that, is Martin likely to let her know much about himself? -
Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
I'm not going to try to guess who was the more shocked. I think Martin would have been more shocked if he hadn't enjoyed his times with Simon and Rick. Certainly is and surprisingly, it worked out OK. -
Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
You are so right @Davide. Simon's comment "We're not having a lot of luck with gay venues." is not generally true, and only regarding finding a lover for Martin. -
Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
All good questions, @Flip-Flop and yes some explanations in the next couple of chapters. Martin sorting out his sexuality will take longer. -
Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Yes the business side is under control. It's just Martin's personal life that's out of control.
