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So far no one has commented on this: Jason, having finished his muffin, walked over and sat next to Brian, helping himself to one of the pumpkin puffs. “Blake,” he said softly, looking up at his agitated former lover. Is Jason planning to return to the quiet order of family life.? With son-in-law (sort of) Steve in the mix, it won't be as quiet and ordered as before.
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I hope Blake is prepared for this. No wait there. Maybe I don't. Can we play Go instead?
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They need somewhere private and uncluttered. Ruling out the Volvo back seat and the church, their only other option is Kenny's room after the joint shower Kenny suggested.
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So the reality is a clown's fake gun and an actual game of skill. I wondered if Chess-pocalypse… had some rules that Steve didn't disclose, but that's not like Steve. In all his chaos he's been honest even when it wasn't believed. Like when he tried to tell his parents he was gay. This really is a chaotic battle of intelligence.
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You tell us! You're the author. Unless you've forgotten
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Come on. Steve said the pieces explode not that they are mushroom cloud atomic.
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A beautiful description of natural Australia at it's best and enjoyed but still preserved. A very nostalgic chapter for me. Hiking in the bush, tracks,streams, cascades, water falls and clear ponds. Ahh yes. Memories.
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Assholes Aren’t Supposed to Be Yummy
Paladin commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Assholes Aren’t Supposed to Be Yummy
Jack is absolutely smitten. He can hardly glance at Theo without lust. Theo is no better as he feels possissive concerning Jack. They are fated to be mates with Vince in there somewhere. But fate is rarely that simple.- 18 comments
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I'm just annoyed that this tsunami of comments rolled in while, in my timezone, I was tucked up sleeping and unable to respond until now. If Lydia really wants to punish Blake all she has to do is let the whole student body know that he is the author of “GHOST PROTOCOL: REPLICANT CITY” and is available to personally autograph (no auto pen) every student's copy of the books along with a personal message. Of course they would need a personal message. Blake would have to cope with being mobbed by students brandishing copies of this books. Combines his two dislikes, students and Ghost protocol.
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Don't forget Blake was warned : "Lydia! Her name is Lydia! She's the mastermind's sister, and she's terrifying!" Denis looked wildly around him at Jason, as if begging for help. Yes, Blake isn't just confronting Steve but also Lydia and she seems to have lessons for everyone.
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I wanted to cobble together a comment for this word of the day but tripped on a cobblestone. Now what was that word again?
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“They’re all protecting a kid who is running three businesses while getting a 62 in my class!” Wonderfully personal. The kid's brilliant and doing poorly in my class. It must be deliberate and an attack on me just like the sloth with a monocle debacle.
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If this is an example of Blake's skill as an investigative journalist, I'm not surprised he's now a teacher.
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‘Chess Apocalypse’
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Who better to restore order after all the chaos? The dynamic father and son duo #teamJasanny.
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Blake likes Steve. I suspect he sees a lot of himself in Steve. We saw that just now when grading the assignment and when he set the assignment he was enjoying the thought of creating utter chaos in the carefully ordered ranks of the school’s social cliques. So, I think he will probe the truth from Kenny and stir Steve but unlikely that he will do anything to really harm either Steve or his lover's son, Kenny. But now stand by for the clash of the two forces of chaos. I'm looking forward it it. It should be fun.
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I like that it's Kenny who suggests they shower together and it's chaotic goofball who is concerned about his parents knowing. Kenny counters by suggesting his place when his mom's out. Steve didn't immediately agree, but I hope he does. There's nothing wrong with shower sex and even when it gets dirty, it's clean.
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I am sure that when the time comes Kenny will be so completely emotionally involved that Lysol won't even make it to his list of priorities.
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While I'd like to think so, I'm not so sure. He would certainly know about Steven's money making schemes (Indeed the school administration are leniently aware) but there is nothing at this stage to suggest he knows about the above the nail shop enterprise. That is unless 3000 words of disclosure lands on his desk.
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I'm sure they have more in common with what they like, than Brian's cakes, doughnuts, fairy cup cakes and cream puffs but probably not beaver-tails.
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The Barista and the pastry chef! Hang on there. What's this about the neat plate of pastries the Goalie always seemed to leave on Mister Wolochowski’s desk? Do these boys have more in common than we know?
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Will this 3000 word, whatever it is, expose the the existence of the above the nail clinic enterprise? Lydia won't be happy and and the boys won't like that. 😏
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Do we also have #teamBryle or #teamKylan? Strangely I don't see Lydia skipping school as a problem. I don't think there's anything in the high school Business Studies curriculum that she hasn't already mastered.
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And they're not telling.
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What! More than the fresh salt breeze?
