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Maybe not the only one.
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Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy the story.
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Oh, I think uncle's lawyers are very interested in the money, as well as what they hoped would be an enhanced reputation in criminal law.
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Thank you @Ticklishboy30. I had many problems posting this chapter on Storylovers. Pleased you got to read it.
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I thought it was obvious. Blake is old enough to be Kyle's father, and yeah the siblings, especially Steve know how to exploit an opportunity.
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Yes I agree, Kenny isn't just an attached boyfriend. He is the missing part of their business, and they need him. I don't see Clovis as being dumb. And his job? Picking up and delivering money to businesses around town. Follow the money to find out whose behind the action. Clovis might hide behind his paper because it stops him telling what he knows.
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I'm barely game to comment. However now I just have to stick my neck out. Fortunately, I can see love lasting longer than lunch swapping. Of course Steve would turn the student art work of the event into a Merch opportunity. He just forgot the golden rule. Offer the school a commission. Now, did he get a copy of the drawing Blake likes? Kyle is gorgeously out of his depth, but points for trying. I'm sure he'll find his DILF soon enough. I'm pleased Lydia doesn't trust the Patels. Very wise. I'm not going to comment on the goalie baker in the Home Economics class that Lidia already has plans for.
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Chapter 3: Meet the Monroes!
Paladin commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 3: Meet the Monroes!
I would have gone for unmarried. I can't imagine anyone surviving dating, long enough for a wedding. 😅 -
Defending himself would be entertaining. What's that expression? Anyone who represents themself in court has a fool for a client.
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Yes Horse now has enemies everywhere. When he ends in prison the other inmates will only befriend him in order to get close enough to . . well your suggestion would be appropriate.
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I'm sure the Border Force guys at Sunshine Coast Airport will become "persons of interest" in the expanding police investigation. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Chapter 3: Meet the Monroes!
Paladin commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 3: Meet the Monroes!
I've been wondering the same thing. She still uses the Monroe family name, so she is either unmarried, divorced or didn't chamge her name for marriage. She referred to Adrian as "your cousin" when he met Zayn on arrival, so he is probably not her son. She invited Harry to the gathering, knowing that he is Zayn's ex from an unsatisfactory relationship. She is blatantly trying to match them again. If anyone is the troublemaker, it's Veronica. What is her game within the family, and what else is Harry to her. Leonardo, quiet, observant and thoughtful has turned out to be far more interesting, I agree @Cane23 that he is the one most likely to spot that the relationship is fake. At this point I like him. -
This in memory: “You’re crazy.” “Yeah, crazy about you.” “Try this stupid line on that chick you’ve been texting all evening.” Brad dropped Lyn as fast as he had picked him up. “Right. I should head over to her place.” Reminded me of this in present: “Luke?” Brad seemed as surprised as if they hadn’t been talking about the same guy until now. “Nope, never. This is a first.” “How do you know? You haven’t known him for long, right?” Lyn pressed on. Brad lost his smile. “What’s with the third degree, Lyn?” Even in College Brad had a problem with Lyn standing up to him, even if moderately. It's only got worse.
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While it's not being mentioned, many of the others involved, including those paying to watch the videos are being arrested and charged in the background. Protecting Joshua and Daniel from being portrayed as offenders is essential.
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Yes the support of a girlfriend and a boyfriend is important for Joshua and Daniel. Uncle Phil just neede some lawyers who will convince him he needs to plead guilty.
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Just as important is that they accept that they need counselling. It certainly is helping them move on, however the trial will being the past into focus again.
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Very true @pvtguy. It is amazing that so many people who know they are guilty, believe they will get away with it, no matter how much evidence exists.
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There's a truism: The walls we construct to keep out the slings and arrows also keep out the hugs and kisses.
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Yes @Summerabbacat and @Mark Ponyboy Peters Uncle Phil's legal are facing their own challenge. They accepted a case that they thought could bring them glory and now find that glory can be very elusive.
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Oh I so want to hear about your Kinky socks. Before your post I had this vision that Kenny had a kinky obsession about socks and would only have sex with Steve while wearing one of his own carefully and significantly curated pairs of socks.
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Yes the Horse has bolted and is being sought. Monitoring his accounts could be more effective than freezing them. It will let authorities know where he is and potentially where he is going, along with any other money moving. The case against Uncle builds along with, as you suggest, the possibility of rorting the tax system.
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Hang on there. By size??? Who has different sizes of socks in their sock drawer? Is it to fit their collection of different sized shoes? Oh I get it! As well as owning half an intersection, Steve also sidelines as a clown in full costume complete with make up, red nose and big feet.
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Depends. Organizing by having socks together in pairs is sweet. Organized by colour is weird.
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So much fun in this chapter as the adults deal with their chaos and Kenny accepts being Steve's boyfriend and part of Steve and Lydia's business operation. A shoebox full of cash (was Steve really organised enough to tightly roll the wads of notes) a problem for Kenny? Not at all. Just ignore "keep out" stickers and fling it at Lydia to deal with. My favourite quote: She patted Steve on the cheek fondly. "And you can get something into you..." Kenny went white as a sheet. And Steve went red as a beet. "I meant a sandwich," Sally rolled her eyes. "Boys, I swear, one track minds."
