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  1. BendtedWreath
    This had me laughing so hard. 🤣 Looks like Nos found his way.
  2. BendtedWreath
    Thank you. They got there. Hopefully the epilogue will answer that.
  3. BendtedWreath
    Yes, that was as close to an apology as Orion could get. 😂 It's definitely a start. 😂
  4. BendtedWreath
    Chapter 11: Nos’s Gift Cal explained everything from the moment he received the photograph of Nos to the odd give-and-take he had with Andrea. Nos wished he had his phone with him to snap a photo of the shocked expressions on Luc and Sven’s faces when Cal recounted how Andrea had apologized to him directly, but he’d left it behind during the festival since Cal had his. The dhampir wondered whether Cal’s determination to reach Nos was what ultimately won her over. It was already the Hel
  5. BendtedWreath
    I second this.
  6. BendtedWreath
    Writing for specific genres would be challenging and great practice. 🤔 Everyone has different strengths, and the hard part is figuring out themes that the most amount of authors could participate in... What about genre crossovers or thematic mash-ups?
  7. BendtedWreath
    Surprisingly, on both counts!
  8. BendtedWreath
    More on that soon. Andrea leaving the people in her life that actually wanted her in their lives was her way of pretending she no longer needed anyone, that if she continued to live as if they no longer existed, she wouldn't feel the sting of the pain whenever they do die. Brenda knows better. She's been trying to help pull Andrea back together.
  9. BendtedWreath
    Yes. Their markings are now a solid red. Nos realized that even though Andrea took Luc and Sven’s friendship for granted, they still care about each other enough to worry about one another. That's what Nos himself has to find out. 🤞
  10. BendtedWreath

    Chapter 1

    BendtedWreath commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 1

    In that case, my goal was accomplished.
  11. BendtedWreath
    Chapter 10: A Mother's Shadow The lighting shifted abruptly, pain lancing through Nos's head. He blinked, disoriented, catching Brenda's remorseful gaze and his mother Andrea's imposing form. At least she was fully dressed this time. Moments ago, Cal's arms silenced Nos's doubts. Now, ripped away, their connection severed, he clenched his jaw. "Send me back. Now." His words were so commanding that Brenda instinctively stepped back. Andrea's eyes flashed; a warning, a challenge. Sh
  12. BendtedWreath
    There are only 12 chapters. Updates mid to late Mondays depending on your time zone. 😂 Thanks for commenting.
  13. BendtedWreath
    Pretty much. 🤣
  14. BendtedWreath
    She just plucked him right up out of nowhere.
  15. BendtedWreath
    Yes, what terrible timing. We'll find out what she wants soon.
  16. BendtedWreath
    Yes, Andrea had terrible timing. I never thought of it as retail therapy. 🤣
  17. BendtedWreath
    Chapter 9: Moonlight Glass Nos and Cal arrived at Hot Hooves, awed by the store's vastness. Footwear-filled shelves stretched into the distance. The escalators climbed to the second floor, and, in the center, cobblers bent over their workbenches, focused and busy. "My nephews!" Savvie greeted them as she approached and gave them both tight hugs. Her perfume lingered for a moment, reminding Nos of freesias. "If we order matching pairs, can they be ready for the Glass Moon Fest?" Ca
  18. BendtedWreath
    I figured that there had to be a few cultural differences, and he did miss out on some of the information that would have helped.
  19. BendtedWreath
    This is true. And yet, still faster than Nos’s attempts. We can only hope he's starting to learn that.
  20. BendtedWreath
    They are definitely trying to work it out. We'll find out what Nos chooses to do soon.
  21. BendtedWreath
    Chapter 8: A Taste of Trust Nos noticed Cal's tail finally relaxed into its usual S-shape, and the sight filled him with relief. If today counted as the first day out of the week Zuma had granted him, then he was already off to a rough start. He only hoped Cal would give him a crash course in incubus etiquette soon. Savvie relayed their previous conversation to Sven the moment he returned, and his reaction was priceless. “Of course you can call me Uncle Sven!” Sven said with warmt
  22. BendtedWreath
    All of those shows were always playing in my home, so maybe it was all subconscious. 🤣 The guys needing a smack upside the head is also a common feeling.
  23. BendtedWreath
    "Get it together soon, guys!" Seems to be a unanimous feeling. Friendly finger-waves are generally safe gestures in our cultures. 😂
  24. BendtedWreath
    I think what you wrote here sounds like a better synopsis. 😂
  25. BendtedWreath
    Yes, not that Nos himself even realizes it yet.
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