I just read the story tonight. I actually did not consider Cole a bad guy. He made a mistake, one that cost him and Luc dearly. Just because someone contracts HIV does not mean that he or she is a "whore". It only takes one encounter to contract the disease. Now, I must admit that I was taken aback by the reversed order of the story, but as I kept reading, I understood why it was done that way. Slowly, you wanted to reveal the reason for the deaths and the resentment. I, too, left a review in E-fiction.