I just got caught up with this one. It's a good story so far. It is a little disturbing. School shootings are a serious problem these days, yet some people seem to be numb. Sacha, I must give you props for writing. The story is well done, and you should definitely be proud!
I forgot to mention muscle types. The guys like Arnold look like they could crush you. Plus all those extra veins are just plain disgusting to me. I don't mind some muscle, but I'm opposed to the Mr. Universe types.
The fact that you are more comfortable with 3rd person is not surprising. I liked ASOB, but LiS remains my favorite. You increased interest in LiS is quite obvious to me. As for me, I like them both in different ways, but I trying to improve my 3rd person. I seem to be better at writing first for some reason. It may be a genre issue though.
I do find some older men attractive, but I am unlikely to date anyone over 35. That is simply because I do not think I would have enough in common with someone that much older. However, if others my age want to date a 50-year-old man or woman, that's what works for them.
That was a great chapter, and I'm sure you enjoyed writing it as much as we enjoyed reading it. Zorac is back, and I have a feeling that things will get much worse before they get better. If Worthington is scared of a demon, you know he has to be a powerful threat. I'm just wondering if Worthington's uncle has something to do with Zorac. It would be an interesting twist.
Only people with really dirty minds have a problem with breastfeeding, because they associate breasts with sex. Most of the guys here don't care about that anyway.
Well, I think 1st person can be good. I do believe ASOB was one of his first stories. Authors often use 1st for their first story. I am included. I think we discussed in another thread about that particular issue. I think Steve does a wonderful job in either, but I think he's actually more comfortable with 3rd.
It most certainly was. Things were looking bad for Instinct in the earlier chapter. I was glad that they managed to survive. Now that they know about The Scar, perhaps the authorities will be hunting him down soon.
I agree whole-heartedly. Kevvers, I was joking with my earlier post. Jamie, I think it takes a lot of courage for you to take a stance in the deep south and I applaud you. You are truly one in a million. Standing up for what we believe in is the only way to combat those who hate us. You should definitely be proud of yourself on this issue. Anyway, a man would be a damn fool if he didn't want to have contact with you.
I think it will be that way too. That's because I suspect the goat of being doing something EEEvil to ruffle our feathers a bit. That's not something I would ever do though.
Welcome to GA! It's always great to have new members! There are plenty of great people to get to know and plenty of stories to read!
I see your author status! It's good that you like to read stories as well as write. I'm in a reader mode these days, but I will have a new chapter out soon! Also, if you need an editor, you can go into the Editor's Corner. It's also a good place to find a beta reader.
Welcome to GA, and good luck with publishing a novel. The same applies to you with the advice I gave to Dion. Before I forget, you can pm JSmith about your author tag.
Well, I know one solution, but it does mean it takes a bit longer before we see anything at all, and that's to finish a story completely before starting to post any of it. Now, it's too late for me to do that with both of the stories I'm working on now, but I intend to do so in the future. I just know that several notable authors, including dkstories and Jack Scribe, do so.
I agree. Okay Steve, is there going to be a sequel? I noticed it says final shot, so I guess that's supposed to mean the end, but it could use a sequel some day.