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Mark Arbour

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  1. Mark Arbour

    Engagement

    A little info on Robbie's truck. 😀 https://silodrome.com/back-to-the-future-toyota-hilux/
  2. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 46

    Lucky for you, I did that research, but i didn't post the hot photo of his son. 🙂
  3. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 20

    I actually pick things up the same way you do when I re-read them. If Matt wasn't emotionally linked to Wade, the two of them would represent perfect contrasts to illustrate what you're saying.
  4. Two songs by The Smiths, but you missed my favorite.
  5. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 41

    No shit. About once a year or so I have to go back and re-read the series just to keep up on everyone.
  6. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 42

    🤣.
  7. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 43

    Like I'm the only one.
  8. Mark Arbour

    A Pregnancy

    I love that you posted these in the comments!
  9. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 9

    Ok, now that’s impressive
  10. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 32

    I’m with Indiana Jones on the snake deal.
  11. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 28

    I remember hooking up with a dude at Laguna Hills. I’d forgotten all about both of them!
  12. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 34

    This!!!😂
  13. Damn, you nailed both of those.
  14. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 76

    March 12, 2004 Malibu, CA Will “I hope we didn’t screw up all your plans for this trip,” Marie said sympathetically. She’d called me last night and told me that Bongo and his girlfriend, plus Mike and a friend were coming along. John had also latched onto some new girl at Menlo named Brittany, and he was bringing her with him. With those people in addition to me, Travis, Crawford, Sierra, Marie, Ryan, and John, we were tapping out on rooms. “It’s fine,” I said.
  15. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 33

    I don’t remember that.
  16. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 75

    Sex as recreation cheapens the act: You are generalizing here. and becoming unable to curb your libido costs relationships: That's not a libido issue, it's a relationship issue..meaning how the relationship handles sex drive issues and libido size. It is the chief cause most relationships end: Silly Republican, everyone knows that the leading cause of breakups is money. 😀
  17. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 75

    Why would he want that when he's 17?
  18. I have some good news and some bad news for you all. The bad news first. There probably won't be a chapter update for at least six weeks, probably two months. The good news? I'm putting off writing more until I get back from vacation. I'm going to England this summer, and even plan to spend some time in Portsmouth seeing the HMS Victory. That should inspire me.
  19. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 75

    I almost think it would be hard to change the minds of those who like Zach because he hasn't really changed. What he did to Travis is basically the same thing he did to the dentist in Claremont. Zach is more complex than that, and as I mentioned above, I don't think he's changed all that much.
  20. In case you're curious, most of the chapters in this story were about 5000 words long. If you look at the word counts for the revised chapters, you can tell which ones have changed the most by looking at the higher word counts.
  21. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 75

    There is absolutely no way Zach would change schools. If he did, he’d have to sit out a year and not play football.
  22. Got that fixed about 10 years later. 😂
  23. A really good pick for Big. Perfect resemblance to Travis.
  24. Get rid of the facial hair and he’s spot on.
  25. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 33

    That will not happen. In that family? Wade would lose it.
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