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    The taxi pulled up at Miracle's house and he looked out of the window. "Thats it." Miracle said. "It's funny how it doesn't look like it's changed." Issac grinned. "Because they usually don't unless you move out, let it go and it gets ugly and becomes a good haunted house." He bumped shoulders with Miracle. Miracle laughed and opened the door, climbing out, Issac followed as Dayna got out on the other side and they moved to the trunk to get their luggage and then headed for the house. "Hey
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    Thank you so much for your kind words. They mean a lot to me and I am glad that you have enjoyed the story. I have been surprised, very surprised by some of the responses that I've gotten for it, yours included. Though I am always one to believe there is always room to get better in one aspect or another but it feels good to know that I've done some good things in regards to this story. Again thank you so much.
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    "I can't believe it's almost over." Miracle looked at Issac, sitting out on the football field during lunch period. "Are you going to miss it?" "Not really, you?" Issac asked. "I'm kind of the sentimental type. Plus, it's like my biggest fear is the closest that it's ever been." Miracle laid back in the grass. "And what is that?" Issac laid beside him. "Being just out and...without a direction." Miracle said. Issac frowned. "So long as I'm here, you will have something." He looked up.
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    Tanya is funny to me! I just think there are those few people in the world that never grow up, not to mention that she is dating a guy that still is in high school! As for Eric, Faye and Daniel? Haha, that is story to come. Some things have been evil plots while others have been coincidence by chance.
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    Miracle walked around in the main bed room at his Mom's house, he looked down at the locket that Jaemin had given him. He closed the locket and looked down. "This is the first time I've...ever been on my own." "Miracle, you're not on your own." Aiden said, watching Miracle from the door. "I mean..without someone from before..." Miracle reached up and wiped tears from his face. "And why should I cry? I made him leave, I asked for it." "I'm sure you never thought that he really would." Aiden
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    Lmao it's the town of sibling cruelty! Lmao at least Aiden and Jennifer get along! And yes Jaemin did, though I think for once it was an impulsive move, especially regarding graduation but in the reality of it, I think he was at a very low point and made a bad decision because of it. As for Faye, well she hasn't been mentioned by actual name until now but she has been mentioned a few times, more in relation to another character but an answer to a long awaited question finally comes to light but then it creates another question.
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    Lmao yeah, this chapter was all about fucked up pranks and angry revenge. Though Jaemin seemed more happy and satisfied when he walked out of the prom. And yeah, Miracle made a mistake in Cali, sure did but his idea was to appear as if he was hopping around the country, that doesn't work when the payphone is grounded. Miracle robbing the store, that whole thing was extreme but I think it was about more than revenge on Tara but about proving that he could be relatively smart if he stopped being impulsive and carefully thought about the steps he takes.
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    Lol Sean is more of a sidekick which is funny. He's like Tanya's puppy dog. And David is Aiden's real father! Quite the odd predicament that it puts Miracle in. And yes, Miracle and Tara are friends! Sometimes mean girls exteriors aren't always that tough.
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    Tara opened the door to the guidance counselors office and walked in with Miracle right behind her. She grinned and sat down in one of the chairs beside Miracle. "Okay, we're friends. Am I valedictorian now?" Tara asked. Sally looked between the two. "Did you write the papers?" "Oh come on, lady. We know your real goal. Did we really need them?" Tara asked. Sally smiled at Tara and pulled out a certificate and looked at Miracle. "And you?" "We cooked a cake together, I have to say that
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    "Aiden!" Tara called out as an officer took her through the front, handcuffed now. Aiden's head lifted and he looked up. "Tara?" "They're arresting me!" She said before being pushed out of sight. Aiden let out a breath and looked over at Jaemin and Miracle. "Really? Guys? Really?" "Shes the dumb bitch that confessed on a text." Miracle stood up and walked towards the door. "Ready, Jaemin?" "Don't worry, she'll...maybe just get probation." Jaemin half smiled and then walked out with Mir
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    Jaemin sat on a bench inside the auto garage below Damien's apartment. "Oh, I'm inside Miracle's head." Damien rolled out from under one of the cars and looked at Jaemin. "What? How do you do that?" "When you bond with someone long enough, learn so much about them, sometimes you can predict certain things." "Nice super power." Damien grinned and rolled back under the car. "Senior year was so important to him because of prom." Jaemin grinned. "If he is getting together with Aiden and they
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    Lmao I know, right?! Aiden plans a special place and then they end up in Jennifers dorm! As for Jaemin, I don't think he'll get in trouble. I think he's a pretty smart character in comparison. So long as he keeps a good head on his shoulders and doesn't let emotion get in the way to much. Though anger might end up being troublesome for him!
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    April 2009 "So! Spring break." Aiden walked into the kitchen. "My sister left for college last year, California, and I was thinking of going to visit her. Do you want to come? I know every chance out of town would..well be great for you." Miracle sat at the table, slicing an apple into slices and looked up at Aiden. "Sure, that would be cool." "Um..Miracle? It begs me to ask you something." Aiden walked over to the table. "Have you thought of where you're going to college?" Miracle looke
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    Eric is smarter than that lol. And Miracle decided to cut the trip short. It was just a mini time jump, I decided not to write the parts about the plane ride, though maybe I should of or at least did some kind of goodbye piece between Miracle and Lacey. It might have been a little jarring. I may just slip a little something in to fix it if you want to give it a little look towards the end.
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    Eric is smarter than that lol. And Miracle decided to cut the trip short. It was just a mini time jump, I decided not to write the parts about the plane ride, though maybe I should of or at least did some kind of goodbye piece between Miracle and Lacey. It might have been a little jarring.
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    "Aiden!" Miracle ran out to the jeep and grinned. "Woah!" Aiden climbed into the driver side and laughed. "You're excited, why?" "I don't need the gang anymore!" Miracle climbed into the jeep. "I've come up with a plan." "Really, what is it?" Miracle thought about it. "Well it's complicated but I have this best friend from New York and...he almost got framed for killing my other friend and then killing my evil jock ex which I don't know if I should even call him an ex because it wasn't r
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    I definitely some of myself in Miracle, very much so but the other characters, I kind of try to make them as different as possible and I feel like they are definitely not me and none of me is in them. Thank you for the welcome back! Glad to be back!
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    Miracle was comparing Jaemin to David because of the locket after he had the mood swing when Jasmine disconnected from Skype. That's why they are having conflict right now, or at least that is what initially caused it. And yes the bachelor party was fun! And again, like I said, Miracle isn't the brains of the bunch! And I think Sterling and Jasmine feel as much desperation as Miracle to be together again so I think that is why they are kind of all on the same bandwagon together. As for Jaemin getting caught? He's still getting away with Brad's murder!
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    Well it's no surprise that Miracle isn't the brains of the bunch, why do you think Jaemin shoots down every one of his ideas? Lol but Miracle does what he does.
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    "How do I make the pain go away?" Aiden asked. Miracle turned towards him and stepped closer. "I'll show you how." He reached up and wrapped his fingers around the back of Aiden's neck and pulled him closer and kissed him. Aiden closed his eyes and kissed Miracle briefly but quickly realized what was happening and stepped back. "Wait, this can't happen." Miracle looked up, confused. "What? Why?" "You're hurting." Aiden said. Miracle stared at him. "I know..that's why I need you." Aid
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    Miracle stared at himself in the mirror, fingering the black leather spiked collar around his neck as he eyed his new out fit which consisted of low rise denim jeans and a form fitting V neck black leather vest with criss-crossed chains on the back of it, a bit of skin around his waist revealed, and a pair of black leather boots on his feet and matching spiked leather cuffs on his wrists. "And now the final touches." Jaemin grinned as he approached with the eyeliner pen. Miracle's eyes widen
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    Very lucky for him but as says the prologue, that luck only lasts for so long without consequence, it's all I'll say spoiler wise! And as for Detective, well ya know those dirty cops? Well I would say the title Dirty Detective doesn't quite fit but they are human and have feelings too. And yes it is funny that Miracle and Jasmine are on the same wave length lmao but they are my crazies of the bunch, I love those two characters! Will have to find a way to bring her back in for a scene! Though one more thing spoiler wise. Miracle could possibly be setting them up for some huge trouble. Wait for the next chapter!
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    "I can't believe no one told me about this." Kyah stared at the dead bodies. "Oh sure, think of yourself. I'm the one that's going to go down for this!" Ryder reached over and yanked at Kyah's hair. "Ow! What was that for?!" She looked over at Ryder. "Putting some of your DNA in the room. You want to be in it so bad." Ryder held up the few strands of hair and went to drop them in Kyler's hand. "Stop!" Miracle grabbed Ryders wrist. "If you do that, it'll ruin it! I am telling you, the pla
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    Miracle walked back inside the cabin and looked at Jaemin. "Good news." Jaemin looked at Miracle after he had the couple blind folded with one of his shredded black tee shirts and their hands tied together behind their backs, binding them to each other. "I had enough of Melanie's drug left to keep them unconscious for a few more hours...but seriously, that was it. Not another drop left of it..." Miracle closed his eyes. "Thanks Melanie...for one last save." "Exactly...last save. You'll do
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    Now that you mention the pros and cons of the crimes, a jail house scene would have been funny. An evil looking face on Miracle as he stood there at the bars lmao. And yeah, totally sucks about the van lol.
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