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Happy New Year! Lol this was a fun chapter to write and I think things for the characters are getting very interesting, on a psychological aspect, that is. Personally I loved when Kevin just threw Jasmine's phone in the water, I can just picture her stomping off mad! Skylar is crazy though, even if she is semi normal with Hunter in my opinion but when she brings consequence into the game, one has to wonder if or when she will pay hers and how? Melanie sure didn't get away scott free even though she had started to change towards the end, despite still having her flaws. Next chapter I am enjoying writing right now but over all I think the group keeps getting tossed up in the air and no one knows what the hell is going on lmao.

Skylar stares down at Brian who laid on the very same table that Miracle laid on so many months ago in the very same warehouse, three of her Daddy's hired men standing about in wait, dressed in all black with masks on, appearing as hired robbers. Brian being trapped with handcuffed restraints by his wrists and ankles. "Oh I see he finally wakes up." Skylar looked down at him from the end of the table where his head was. Brian's vision began to clear as the drugs wore off and he looked up at

Thank you! Lol the chapter was a bit sedate in comparison to most chapters but I felt with as much action as the couple of chapters before that had, a little down time was needed. Plus I needed a little planning time to figure out my next moves. Those are some good questions regarding Hunter and I think that might make quite a mystery for the time being, as Miracle said, they could just be playing each other, but who really knows? I don't even know at this point! And Robin and Cody's story, that is sort of as unpredictable to me as much as it is to anyone else as well. Working on the next chapter and getting to the point I am on it, I can say one person is going to definitely serve a consequence lol so look out for that one!

Miracle sat on his bean bag chair beside the window, looking out at the sunset. "The things that go in my head when I'm allowed to think to much." Jaemin walked in just in time to hear Miracle. "What is it?" He asked, closing the door. "How some things just stay the same and never change even though you feel like you've been through hell, you come home and it's like a sanctuary." Miracle looked over at Jaemin. "I have an idea." Jaemin walked over to the bed and sat down. "What do you say c

Because maybe Sterling advised no one to tell? Sterling and Jaemin think she is mafia and for her to be spending the evening texing hit men as if she were playing video games, they have to assume she could be in a position of importance. If they sent her to jail, thinking shes in the mafia, they might pay some consequences. As for Skylar and Kyler..LMAO they are going to be confusing to write. Should of thought about that when I made her but it's going to get really interesting with that one. I actually really feel sorry for my characters..Skylar is so mean to them. But here is a clue, I hate what I have to do with those who have disappeared, don't take Kyler's words lightly.

Who knows what is wrong with Skylar lmao.

"Miracle! Please can't we just talk?!" Jaemin followed Miracle into Hunter's room. "No!" Miracle turned around, throwing his cell phone onto Hunter's bed. "Tell my big brother what you did so he can beat you up!" Hunter muted the television, his eyes widened at the sudden weirdness of what just came upon him and his arm just remained stuck in the air and he simply dropped the remote. "What?" "That's right, tell him, Jae. Tell him what you did." Miracle nodded as he took a few steps back, h

Skylar looked at Robin's ride and her eyebrows lifted. "You have got to be kidding me." Her eyes gazed over the old fading red pickup truck with a serious need for some major glamour work. "Do you want to come or not?" Robin stared at the girl. Skylar sighed and pulled the passenger side door open and then grinned at the patches of silver tape used to cover the rips in the seats and then she climbed in and closed the door. "About time you got here." She lowered the sun visor and her hands br

Melanie needed a replacement! With Jaemin on the borderline of good and evil (At least I think) we needed another female villain and yes she is very much like Melanie but I like to consider her a little more hardcore, for one she is not to shy about what she wants done, when, where and how. Though she does fulfill Melanie's place in continuing to pick on Sterling! With the group sort of starting to fall apart, new players and back scene characters just might have to take some places and I think that will be really interesting to see. Working on 25 now, wonder if Skylar will lose again? That seems to really piss her off!

Hey, thanks for writing back! And no, Sterling is still alive. That is a character that I sense that the readers like so he isn't going anywhere...for now anyway. Never know where my mind will go!

Cody laid there in the bed, a smile on his face. "That was incredible." His head twisted to the side. "Miracle...I don't know what to say." "You don't have to say anything." Miracle grinned at Cody. "It was for you, there is one thing I want to do though." Miracle stretched his legs beneath the covers. "I want dinner with your lovely family.." Cody's smile slowly faded. "Maybe." He then looked down. "Miracle, I feel like I used you. And then there's the other part that I don't understand at

Jasmine walked out of the club with Kevin, Miracle and Cody laughing while Robert helped an unconscious Robin outside. "Well I guess I'm going to go home, wait and see if or when the police are coming for me. Maybe the school will have mercy for me and choose to handle it themselves. It's that teacher I am more worried about." Jasmine laughed. Robert grinned at Jasmine. "Well I'll pray for you." "Oh my god! Don't say that! It's what your counter half would say." Jasmine squinted her eyes a

So many questions to be answered! I will say one thing, what did happen is that Jaemin used Sterling's car to chase Melanie down and wreck her, luckily not injuring himself and then managed to put Sterling in the driver seat. What will come out of that is a mystery! As for Jasmine...OMG I laughed so hard when I was writing that scene! From the moment Melanie mouthed off to the teacher to the moment Jasmine attacked the teacher and they pulled off their escape. So yes I guess she can be considered possibly a villain in the making but in a way I don't know, she has shown she can be mean to strangers but loyal to the group so I am not sure how she could be perceived. I think she was probably on a better path taking food orders but then she also lacked confidence and was kicked around too. The next chapter is in the making though and well there are a few more surprises in the making, I'm just wondering how long it will take before Miracle slips to the bad side of readers views. I really would not like for that to happen but I feel like his vulnerable desperation has to remain intact, at least for now. As I always say, we'll have to see!

Miracle sat at his desk, fingers tapping against the surface and he frowned as he stared out the window. He didn't know why but he couldn't stand moments like this, the slow moments, the times when the rush stopped, even the dangers of last night that he hardly remembered, he was sure that he would have gotten some twisted excitement out of the thrill. The thing about that, the horrible thing about it, was that it got Sarah killed and in a way it was his fault, he willingly went into that room a

Hahaha, go back and look at your chapter 12 review and read it over again. And now come to see that they are brother and sister! Hahaha! That was the idea that you pretty much inspired me with and then I built it within a grand design! I do like how you caught onto that very fine point, did Paula say Melanie and Jaemin's father was one in the same? Well she didn't say one way or another. Then again she didn't refer to Melanie as half sister either. So that one you will just have to wait to find out! And Martha, haha. That idea really jumped me. I was typing Jaemin's dialogue and my mind was going and it was almost as if I had went into that sort of free writing state where you don't think, you just write and then I looked up and saw what I typed and I was like "Wow, that is such a good idea!" And I say this for many reasons. For one it explains her nervousness and the anxiety within it, we don't know what her past was like and now we just got a serious piece of it and for a person like her that seems really sensitive, being involved in crime and then escaping with one of the children that are deemed "property" well yeah, could make a woman nervous. And two it explains why she adopted Miracle over having a biological child, it's because either she can't have a child at all or it would be a rare event if it did happen. Point with that? If that bag was turned over and that piece of candy was dumped out, it would be the sour one and Martha would sure get it! I am enjoying the shifts though, the way the characters to me seem to get tossed about, I mean it was so easy to categorize them in earlier chapters but now they seem to be harder to do that, for one you didn't bash Jaemin this time! And you actually questioned if Melanie would be good! Hmm doesn't look that way unless she realizes money isn't everything and that is a possibility.

Miracle laid in the bed, he hadn't been admitted to a hospital room but instead was placed in a room within the ER since he had remained somewhat concious and he looked at Cody who sat in the chair beside him, watching television. A sigh escaped as his vision started to clear. "What happened?" Miracle asked. Cody immediately turned his attention to Miracle when he heard the boys voice. "What do you last remember?" "Being in Eric's room. We had champagne and then things got hazy, we did thi

Killing Sarah was actually a hard choice to make, it was really hard for me. She was spoken of in earlier chapters and to finally get to write her was really exciting. Thing is that I knew with this sort of plot that I knew there had to be some sort of sacrifice otherwise it's to good to be true and I feel like Sarah's emotions fit the bill. She lost Brad, found out he had an affair and was a total liar, jerk and cheat and then even after finding it in her heart to half way forgive Miracle, she felt so little of herself that she couldn't contribute to the "mission" to save him. Really it was because of her that they even found him but I don't think she realized that and she was going off of pure emotion when she made her attempt to try and stop Eric's escape. To bad he had a second escape plan. Gotta keep the bad guys around though, right? As for Melanie, I think she really tried to be a good guy in this one, she was really expressive in how she felt everyone treated her and in how she wanted to make up for it by putting herself on the line and right out in the open even if it was partly to be the "star" of the show, she knew that if anyone were to get shot by a sniper that it would be her beyond the others and she still did it anyway. I am glad that this chapter was perceived well by you, given little show from the main character but I really thought it would be interesting to work the dynamics of the rest of the group. Overall I do think aside from partly wanting to be a star she did partly want to seek redemption by how she belittled herself. In fact Robin's description of Melanie was well on base, she would make a good psychologist. As for her staying good? Hmm we'll just have to see! I can say her partnership with Jaemin is going to become fairly interesting!

Lmao this idea actually came out of no where. I was thinking about it and my mind drifted to the first two chapters and I was like "Hmm Eric was such a small and insignificant looking character." And then an idea just came to life! It was awesome, I was so excited to spring that to the readers! It's going to get really good, I promise you that! And I am really glad you enjoyed the Jaemin/Sterling bonding. With Miracle helping out Jasmine and Sarah, I was trying to think of who he would suggest to replace him for the trip and Sterling seemed like the perfect match to me. And yes it does seem that without the rivalry they seem to find a common ground. You never know though, when little insignificant "Erics" pop up, just about anything can happen!

Sarah stared at her phone, watching Miracle's GPS and noticed it was moving down the street behind the hotel. "What the fuck? Oh no, either he is running or the man has him." Sarah looked up and then started her car and wildly pulled out of the parking space, speeding out of the parking garage. Robin and Cody keep knocking on the door. "Hello! Is anyone in there?! We have something special for you! Can't you atleast check it out? It will enlighten your life!" Robin screamed at the door. "I

Sarah and Jasmine were parked along side the road a little ways down from Brad's house as they spied Kyler putting an envelope inside the mail box only to get back into his car to drive off. Sarah swatted a hand at Jasmine and both girls slid down in their seats so as not to be seen by Kyler as he drove by. Once Sarah was sure that he was gone, she gave a light tap to Jasmine's shoulder and slid up again, her eyesight taking on the mail box. "Maybe we should split up, you can take my car and f

A lot has happened, I think, well I know a lot of new mysteries have been raised and if not all the questions have been brought up yet, they will be. Miracle was at Sterling's when the drive by happened but I can't tell you who it was lol! Just think though, would Kyler really have a motive? Then again so little is known again and he did pull a big disappearing act. I will leave a small clue that the parents roles in the drama are going to be more significant than they have been. As far as Jaemin needing Brian out of jail? Well he needs him for a very good reason, a plot that might not seem so justified at first glance but later on, despite the horrid means to get there, in the end it might be seen as the best. After all "This is Craigs mess." Why should everyone else have to deal with it? And yes Sterling had made the statement about Jaemin being good with Miracle, given he hasn't seen much of them together so his opinion is based on little information but I think there is a lot of hesitancy to put his heart on the line again, to fight for Miracle when he believes Miracle's feelings for Jaemin were stronger all along. I think he wants to keep a distance. And yes, poor Sarah. She was doing so great, it's fun to write her, for a while she was only spoken of so to bring her onto the scene was super cool. She is still part of the popular clique but I think with Brad gone and Melanie and Kevin pretty much running the show, she does feel a little bit left out, being why she seemed closer to Jasmine who seems to be in the beginnings of acceptance after Jaemin and Miracle fixed her up a little. Jaemin does reinforce Melanie's acts and she finds a lot of use for him but then at the same time the only joy Jaemin finds in it is the joy Melanie gets from it and the fact that it all seems so pointless. Melanie does bad things just to be bad, Jaemin does bad things with a purpose and is more serious in what he does. So in helping Melanie, it's like playing child's games to him but he does it because she is still beneficial to him as she is with getting Brian out of jail and of course getting the drugs. I do have to agree that Sterling and Cody pretty much are the sane ones in their own right and I think the scene on the beach was the best part. It not only shows that Miracle is an overly affectionate person and still doesn't quite understand boundaries but it's the fact that Cody doesn't love him or want him right off the bad. There is maybe an admiration but there is an innocence between them as well in that they could kiss and then continue on just as friends without getting really intense. With Sterling, it's obvious there was an attraction from the start and their first kiss was quite intense and caused a lot of feelings in him and I think it brought him to sort of the same level as Jaemin in that he and Jaemin both were a little possessive of Miracle, one wanting to win him and the other wanting to protect him and keep him way to close and sheltered. So with Cody being thrown in there too, I think it's an interesting aspect. We'll just have to see what happens, like I said, a lot more questions and mysteries on the horizon. What's in that envelope and what's this about Brad's Dad having another son? Who could that be? Miracle's birth Father? Possibly, but then that would really be obvious of me then again it could be a surprise by being obvious when I'm expected not to be or it could be entirely something else altogether. Oh and there is so much more...

It was dark and only bits of light shined through the trees from the moonlight, heavy breaths escaped as the leaves on the ground ruffled with the sound of running feet. It was the feet of Melanie as she turned around to look at the masked man following her and then she tripped and fell down. Her face nearly hitting the dirty ground. She laid there for several seconds, trying to catch her breath and her stamina. Melanie rolled over only to see that the man had grown ever so closer, enough to s

Thank you! I am glad that you liked it. I enjoyed writing it and I feel like it was really different from the other chapters, maybe it's the calming down effect from all the drama? Not that there still wasn't some but I was happy to not have to write a cop! I guess I have a similar feeling about the story, if I am understanding you correctly. Melanie and Robin have turned out (to me) to be the living example of the yin yang symbol. I think they are both bitches but in two very extremist ways. Melanie is evil, really evil and she takes pride in that, she doesn't care. She likes being the bad girl, it's fun and she wears the label with pride. With Robin, so far with how I've gone with her she seems like she is going to turn out to be actually more of what Sarah was meant to be. Originally Sarah was meant to be Melanie's polar opposite but actually now she has become the balance between the two. Robin is the extremist in that she thinks she is good, to good and a bit holier than thou but it's not so openly expressed in dramatic ways as Melanie. Robin is more subtle about it with how she talked to Miracle at the nature trails. It was very passive aggressive but he knew she was throwing hits at his homosexuality but then she did have a softening moment when Miracle broke down but it still didn't change her for life. Would Melanie ever have a moment of goodness? Who knows, it's safe to say that she has yet to reach the level of evil that Jaemin has committed as murder is the ultimate but then I kind of view him as sort of balanced as with Sarah (So long as he has what he wants, that being Miracle) but he's more than willing to be ruthless if that is what it takes to keep things the way he 'believes' they are supposed to be. So I think with the characters there is a lot of blacks and whites being tossed about and dabs of greys. And Miracle, it's a curiosity to see which blend he really goes in because the story is very psychological with him, he started out as a mini Melanie who was a bit feisty, even broke up an engagement seemingly for fun but then crashes not long after, he was innocently bad I would like to say and I think that innocence remains as he goes into a now innocently confused or rather just innocently desperate. Definitely as far as Jaemin is concerned. Now Jaemin is a winner, I think a real romantic when he wants to be but after finding out what he did, Miracle struggles with the "ideal" decisions versus hos true feelings but then you have to wonder too if the fact that Sterling basically told him it was over is also a factor in making Jaemin a rebound. So yeah there are a lot of elements going on, keep reading and I'll keep writing and we'll see how they all play out!

I'm sorry but no Melanie never slept with Brad, I am sorry if that was confusing. I reread the chapter to try to find the spot where that might have confused you. I think it might have been Robin's sudden theory at the nature trail? If that was it, what she meant by "the guy that her boyfriend" the "her" being Sarah. I'm sorry if that was the spot that confused you. Melanie really didn't care for Brad and Sarah at all, sure she was part of the popular clique but she was even a bully to them in a way by doing evil things being why Sarah always hated her but then using sex appeal to get the guys to always forgive her, mostly Kevin and for that Brad would forgive her because Kev was his best friend so it always kept her in the group. (Sonny and Will are together and Will had a baby with Gabi as far as Days goes!) And as far as everything else, I think Miracle is still rolling with the punches or as he later described, riding the waves and "tossling" to the next and I feel that he is very confused on many levels, I also think his choice to forgive Jaemin also had a lot to do with Sterling claiming that he would not put his heart on the line any longer and really, who could blame the guy after Melanie and Jaemin both did what they did? And not to say Miracle was a bad guy but I think he should of had a little more faith in Sterling and I think that was his point. As for Melanie, yes her bitchiness continues, I did want to have her win the fight against Robin! I really did but for the readers who hate her I decided to let her take a punch for once! So I hope that was joyful. Miracle as noted by Cody seemed to have been trying to walk the fence between being friends with him and Robin and then being friends with Melanie and Kevin and it was also noted that it needed to be merged because it's just wrong to lead a double life. That's how the lunch came about. Though I think the most interesting part was the waitress and what I might decide to do with her. It was quite nice of Jaemin to offer her such nice things!

Cody parks the gray van in the parking lot of the nature trails and grabs the camera, it was a big camera, one of those highly professional ones. He had requested to borrow it from the school's film club along with a professional audio recorder which Robin would use to capture all the audio. Cody got the camera and climbed out of the driver side and shut the door, holding the camera up and managing to stuff the keys into his pocket. Robin had been sitting in the back and held the stick which h