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Miracle headed to the science room and took a deep breath. "Okay, here it goes." He smiled, putting on his game face and then opened the door only to find several other students sitting scattered about at the other tables. "Nice of you to show up." Drew smiled from his desk. "You can take a seat, anywhere you like." "Oh my god." Miracle looked like a deer caught in the headlights and everyone looked at him oddly as he let the door fall shut behind him. His eyes then narrowed on Drew and he w

LOL I had intentions on the beginning being real but then when I finished the scene, I was like...nope, this is a dream! They did enroll in school, they decided to go with Miracle's idea of using West Virginia as a home number one unless Eric or his people find them or Robin's parents discover them and chase them away, then Nevada is their back up place. And no they wouldn't need any sort of guardians, not if they claimed to be homeless, the school would have no choice but to accept them (I know from personal experience.) As for the records, they could be sent electronically to Miracle and Jaemin's email accounts as scanned images, TIF files if you will, to be burned to a CD to which they can then turn in to the school, Craig did take guardianship of Jaemin when he moved in, as an FBI agent he has the power and authority to make those reaches happen. All valid questions to be asked though! As for Ryder lmao. He has a mess on his hands and he knows it and I thought it would be interesting to make a character who is a little more resisting to Miracle, someone on the edge but can stop themselves from falling so long as they take their precautions. It'll be interesting to see where that goes! Wonder what Max will do? Miracle might be wrong about him not having a big mouth...

Jaemin stared at the television and then stood up, moving around the hotel room to the ice bucket and picked up a small plastic cup. "Okay, make the phone call." Miracle picked up the phone and grinned, dialing Jordan's number and pressed the phone to his ear. Jordan picked up the phone. "Hello? Jordan Bryant." Miracle grinned, looking at Jaemin. "Oh thank god it's you Jordan!" "Miracle? Where are you? I tried to GPS you but your phone disappeared! I was worried to death...Miracle you re

Oh this is an authors secret and now that you point it out, it shouldn't of been kept a secret actually, it should of been known, thank you for pointing out this flaw, I feel horribly about this, poor Jaemin lmao. Now he looks bad. Nick didn't give him any money until after, so he didn't know how much he would get, if that helps any lol. And I do agree with everything else, all valid points. Fucked up or not, he shouldn't of done it. I think part of him was wanting Miracle to make some sort of "subconscious" decision. You know the saying "The truth always comes out when you're drunk" but then he also made the point that he wanted a reason to be mad, for all the reasons you have said. But yes that is true, it's not Miracle's fault but he does need to learn to say no, he needs to break out of that mind set that he has been in for most of his life and not hide behind what David did to him as an excuse. Yes that was messed up, he was young, still in developing years, understandably that embedded into his psyche and personality but now that he mentally knows the truth he has to figure out how to teach his emotions and impulses the same and Jaemin's passive way of dealing with it isn't helping. Next chapter is going to be fun...in a semi deja-vu kind of way lmao.

"I think this is it." Miracle said as he pointed out a camper that was on the other side of the bumpy dirt path from the lake, there was a gray pick up truck and a black jeep parked out front. Miracle pulled his seat belt off as Jaemin pulled along side the jeep and parked the van, shutting the engine off, seeing bright lantern lights and a few tiki torches lit around, enough to illuminate the whole area, and the three guys standing outside around a wooden picnic table near a grill that was buil

Lol it was a sad scene to write but a happy one at the same time! I guess that's what makes it all the more sad. Yep Jordan is as bad as Eric, though in a kind of pathetic way, as smart as he is or was at analyzing Miracle, he couldn't trick him with that phone call, it just made it worse! And the GPS thing..yeah I saw it in a movie or TV show somewhere but I don't remember where but that was where the idea came from. As for those guys...I'd question their intelligence, Chad doesn't seem to be the brightest of the bunch. TJ might have some common sense but if he does, he's not really sharing it by cautioning his other two friends but then he can always ditch them if things go bad lol.

Miracle walked down the winding stairs to see the crowd already gathered within the large ball room so he assumed the party boat had already arrived. He reached the bottom of the stairs and he felt completely lost. This was completely out of his element, he was alone and he wasn't exactly sure of where to go or what to do. He might as well have been alien. "There he is." Erica said as she walked towards the entrance, her arm looped with Miguel's and she nodded towards the grand stair case. M

Miracle stood in the parking lot of the marina and looked at Sterling, fiddling with an envelope with Jaemin's name on it. "You're really going to do this?" Sterling asked. "I don't have a choice." Miracle took a deep breath. "I don't know what will happen from here but Eric will keep his end of the deal." Miracle looked at Sterling and then slightly lifted his shirt to show him Hunters pistol tucked inside his jeans, near his hip bone. He lowered the shirt. "Just make sure that..when Jaemin

I actually agree with you. Since picking the story up, I think the chapters have been better in quantity and hopefully in quality and content. So I can see why you would like these chapters much better than the earlier and older ones, I wish they had been better. Unfortunately some of Miracle is me as far as his mentality traits (I have Borderline Personality Disorder) which he features to some extent but other than that, the characters are completely separate from me and I enjoy writing them and making them their own people. Now I hope seeing a taste of what is to come you can read straight forward because I hope this has made you feel that it's worth it but if you wish to continue reading it backwards, I will understand, either way I just want you and all of the other readers to enjoy it in whatever way they want or can. Anyway thank you so much for the compliments, again they are much appreciated!

Very good point. Again it goes back to the fact of his mentality that he believes sex will gain him love which as to why he has that belief is further explained in later chapters. So it is a possibility that if he does go towards people who treat him badly, it's because either he thinks he can change them or again, there might be some part of him that feels unworthy that he is not aware of. Lisa is correct that to some extent he does equate sex with love, he places them within the same category and doesn't differentiate, he believes sex gains love, you have sex with a person and then they fall in love with you. That is his twisted belief. As for his name, that is also explored in further chapters, a great deal of it has to do with his birth Mother and has nothing to do with his adoptive parents as he was already named. He didn't end up with this family until he was around ten years old. And I used Australia as my own personal preference and that location is really insignificant to the story since they move very quickly in the beginning but I love the accent so I wanted the character to have it.

I said I get nervous about writing these scenes, plus this one in particular was more of an opening more or less of what the character is like, a classic example of the psychological aspect of the pattern he goes through, he meets a person, sleeps with them, expects love and when it doesn't come, ultimately it leads to crushing disappointment. Though already being 30 somthing chapters in I am afraid you might be disappointed before you even catch up because I could take your advice now but it's not going to change how I've written what I've already written unfortunately. I hope that wouldn't be the case, what I can say is that both characters, the man and the woman do get explored much further in and play much bigger roles, far bigger roles than one would expect until they get to that point. The story is just as much about the psychological as it is about the sexual, if not more so about the psychological aspects. Though I do appreciate the encouragement and the thought that not all readers need "poetic" sexual scenes. I will try to take your advice, again though, I can't change whats already been written and so until you catch up you may get disappointed with a few more of those type of scenes because of my intimidation by how I've seen other people carry out such writings. Thank you for the honesty, it is greatly appreciated.

It'll be interesting to see what happens to Miracle lol and how Jaemin reacts to the sacrifice. And yes it's good Sterling was there, what a creepy way to almost die! As for the phone call, I think it's possible that police could leave a phone there as a tactic for extracting information. Kind of in the same way they leave a person alone in an interrogation room and just record them sitting in there, I figured they might leave a phone in there too, just to see if they could get anymore information. We'll see how it goes!

Thank you! Writing these scenes, I tend to get rather nervous actually because as a reader, I've read other stories and people tend to be so poetic about it, I guess or so that's how I see it. Maybe I'm to self critical with myself when it comes to this subject. I guess as a story writer, it's a different aspect because a lot of my writing experience came from doing text based role playing and writing stories in that way is very different than writing your own stories and so being less poetic was okay. So again thank you! It's surprising that someone actually not only found it okay but nice enough to compliment. I really appreciate that. Thank you so much!

"Okay, who splurged the money to rent a conference room at city hall? For real?" Miracle walked in and looked around at Robin and Cody who already sat at the long fancy table. "And to call it an emergency meeting?" He squinted his eyes and then looked over at Sterling who had walked in soon after him. "And where is Jaemin? He didn't even come home last night." "First of all, I splurged." Jasmine grinned as she walked in and laughed. "Robin and Cody wanted to have a meeting so I decided to use

Thank you! I was actually creeped out when I was writing Jaemin's scene with the father. Like when he was going towards the hall, I pictured the father calling the cops on him and I literally felt the fear that Jaemin would have felt. Though I do think you are right, that he is being to calm about it and that might be something I should reconsider in future chapters, won't say what might or might not change though! As for Jordan, that was a fun scene to write! I enjoyed that one! It was actually one that I wrote but then I thought of more ideas and added some more stuff into it to make it a bit more telling, at least I hope so, I wonder myself where their sessions will go from here. Sterling was also a big help and I think Miracle is now trying to correct or at least prevent himself from further actions in the only way he knew how by distancing himself from Kevin. As for Cody, well either he will turn out to be the joke of a Kyler prank or Robin might end up being sorry for not listening to him. Skylar is still being a big reference right now and I think everyone is trying to learn as much from her as they can. Aside from Kevin's stabbing, it's clear that Kyler might turn out to be way more subtle than many of them might expect.

Thank you! I was actually creeped out when I was writing Jaemin's scene with the father. Like when he was going towards the hall, I pictured the father calling the cops on him and I literally felt the fear that Jaemin would have felt. Though I do think you are right, that he is being to calm about it and that might be something I should reconsider in future chapters, won't say what might or might not change though! As for Jordan, that was a fun scene to write! I enjoyed that one! It was actually one that I wrote but then I thought of more ideas and added some more stuff into it to make it a bit more telling, at least I hope so, I wonder myself where their sessions will go from here. Sterling was also a big help and I think Miracle is now trying to correct or at least prevent himself from further actions in the only way he knew how by distancing himself from Kevin. As for Cody, well either he will turn out to be the joke of a Kyler prank or Robin might end up being sorry for not listening to him. Skylar is still being a big reference right now and I think everyone is trying to learn as much from her as they can. Aside from Kevin's stabbing, it's clear that Kyler might turn out to be way more subtle than many of them might expect.

June 2008 Jordan watched the video until the white snowy screen appeared and sat back in his chair. "Well..that was interesting. Your behavior seems more intense. And you were like this...with Brad in the beginning?" Miracle grinned. "Oh come on, unless I'm assuming wrong but I don't think I am with how fixated your eyes were on that screen the whole entire time, it wasn't just the behavior that you were interested in." Jordan grinned. "We're not here to talk about me." "But I want to ta

Thank you so much for liking this chapter! As I said before I had hoped you would surprise me with your feedback regarding Skylar's last act beyond the grave! I thought you would still think she is crazy! This chapter was filled with information and since things have been so action packed and caused the death of so many characters (I miss Melanie! So many references to her reflect that!) I thought chilling it down would be nice. This chapter was one where you had to really pay attention to the smaller details. Yes the flash backs of the apartment were written in real time in previous chapters. They were not meant to be put in there as filler writing but simply the reflection I think one would get after they go to a place where they spent the last time with someone they cared about so much. I can understand if someone might not want to read stuff they had already read so I only tried to place the most important points of that scene. The entire thing held many clues. One where Skylar mentioned about digging up files. The reason she had the letter that was put in the mail box of Brad's house is because she is Eric's daughter so..it could be a possibility that she really did some digging? The letter she wrote to Hunter? It was also really touching to me to, I cried as I wrote it lol but she did leave a clue there as well which left them with a way to find it and the momento for Hunter. But yes the question is, who had the folder from Brad's mail box? And who would trust Kyler with it and why? Remember he asked for her to share her life with him and now she has done that, literally. A diary is a persons most private of thoughts. So this chapter has a lot of questions and answers but I think a lot of smaller things need to be looked at and I think you have caught some if not all of those things. As for Jordan, I think that is going to be an interesting relationship. I thought about bringing Miss Carter back into the picture but I wanted someone who would be more direct and more challenging without being pushy and demanding. He is a student but I think he is definitely capable in what he is learning, one of the better students in his classification. Of course while Miracle should probably be with a professional and I thought about that at first, my mind went back to the guy that Robin met at the diner and for some reason I like to take small characters like that and make them into something more. The question now comes up is, why did he lie about his name to Robin? Or is the name Jordan a lie? Speaking of Robin, she also has opened her eyes to acceptance which I think is at least one good thing that came out of her experience and it did bring to question whether or not Skylar had any control of what happened to her after she was taken or if it was even her doing to have her impregnated. I'm going to keep writing chapters like this, try for a little while anyway, keep things a little more low key for the sake of little to no death counts for a while lol.

Miracle sighed. "Couldn't find my phone, no way to tell the time. I have my appointment and then we have to show up for Kevin's graduation and we might aswell visit Brian while we are here." Miracle sighed, looking up at the numbers in the elevator as they changed. "I snagged your Dad's watch." Jaemin grinned. "It was Erica's idea." Jaemin lifted his hand to show Miracle the watch around his wrist. Miracle looked at it. "Those are so unreliable, how do you even know it's set right? I don't e

I stopped watching for a long time. I didn't start watching again until around the time Rafe was being held captive and they had a twin Rafe who was being mean to Sami and I think that was in 2011.

Lol Skylar might just be lurking around like a Freddie Kruger (Not sure if I spelled his name right.) But if she did live and managed to get outside and rolled the fire off, her skin would be broiled, Fable will have delivered her a consequence! Hahaha! And yes 911 is free, I just think poor Robin's stress levels are to high. Her college funds were swiped and then when you use the last bit of change to call Jasmine and she just throws the phone down and starts arguing with Kevin? LMAO. Not to mention she ran away because she ended up mysteriously pregnant. Who knows who the Daddy is? lol. The next chapter will be out soon though I doubt with what comes out about Skylar, I doubt Hunter's feelings for her and Skylar herself will be given any more sympathy but who knows? You might throw me a surprise by what I throw at you? And there is more mystery to come. As for Days, Will is getting recasted. Wondering who they are going to recast with.

Lol it's funny you say that about Miracle and Jaemin. (Kind of reminds me of Sami and EJ with how you said it LOL) And yes, Skylar is wacky but I can say that things are about to take a whole different direction! I also finished chapter 30 and I posted it so I hope you enjoy that one as well!

Jaemin made his way into the flaming house, he looked around, the entire downstairs was almost engulfed but managed to make a clear path up the stairs. "Hurry up now before I open anymore windows! Oxygen!" Skylar's laughter echoed throughout the upstairs. Jaemin kicked the door open to find Jasmine in her Father's study positioned in the middle of the room in a kitchen chair with her arms bound behind the chair and tape over her mouth and he imagined a gag beneath it. "Kept me waiting long

Wow omg I did not expect another review on this story, I wrote it such a long time ago! Date says it was 2011 but that was because of the new system, I actually wrote it in like 2007 or 2008 lol I love that you liked her character, she was fun to write! My favorite part was the party when she turns around after catching them together, pretends shes devastated and then throws a pillow at...I think it was Steven she threw the pillow at, her reaction was awesome. I wrote a similar character to her in my story "Like A Train Wreck" which is a really good story too that you should check out, her name is Melanie, though she doesn't come in until like chapter 9 or 10, somewhere around in there and she is kind of somewhat a villainous in a way, more of a mean girl or a manipulator, for a little while but I know for me and I think for the readers you can grow to love her over time. It's a really good story, a work in the making so if you are interested in that one, I hope you could check it out, it's my third story. My second one, it's kind of an..eh..story. The first scene of that one came from a dream really that I wanted to write but since this is a story site I couldn't just write a one scene story so I had to turn it into one and I don't think it was my best work but definitely I think my newest third story is a work in progress and worth checking out. Again, I am glad you are enjoying this one this one though! It was such a long time ago and you surprised me with this review! Thank you so much for your comments! They are forever grateful to me!

Miracle felt the morning sunlight hit his face just as it was rising and his face tensed up and then slowly his eyes opened, he looked around, finding a large blanket was covering him and he pulled it tightly around himself. He then looked up, seeing black booted feet on the pier and a pier, at first he thought it was Skylar but then he noticed the jeans draping over the tops of the boots and they were soaking wet, his gaze continued roll upward until he found it was Jaemin, staring down at him.