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Dolores Esteban

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  1. Jason and Leonard arrived in London late at night. Exhausted and tired, they climbed the stairs of their apartment house. "Oh my God," Jason called out as he opened the door. "Bastards. They've searched my apartment." He moved on and entered his living room. The room looked like a mess. Every cupboard and sideboard had been opened and the contents were sprawled on the floor. The furniture was moved, the desk was searched also, and sheets of papers covered the desk and the floor. Jason went t
  2. Brother Nicholas, Brother Gregory, and Brother Thomas had fled the Abbey of St. Denis soon after Brother Philip had escaped the cloister. The three men left by foot and they walked fast and only stopped at nightfall. They were outcasts now and they would outcasts be until the day they had found a safe place of refuge. The men had settled in a clearing for the night. They were sitting in the darkness. The moon shed a creepy light. "We must leave France," Brother Gregory said. "The abbot will
  3. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 15

    Yes, was it really a wise decision to go back to England? We'll see. Thanks again for reading.
  4. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 15

    I guess you already have an idea. Thanks for reading. Glad you liked the chapter.
  5. Jason changed lanes and left the motorway five minutes later. He drove up a drive. "A motorway chapel?" Leonard asked in astonishment at the sight of the small building. "Much appropriate, I think," Jason said drily. He parked the car at the far end of the place and looked back, studying the place carefully. "The driver of the Bugatti won’t see my car from the motorway," he said. "But we can watch out and see if he drives by. Come, Leonard." They climbed out of the car, left the drive
  6. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 14

    Thank you, Daithi. The tour guide suspected Lambert wanted to publish his finding, but we must assume Lambert rather wanted to hide the letter.
  7. Thank you, slytherin. Glad you liked the story.
  8. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 13

    Quite true. They need to find a solution soon. Thanks again for reading.
  9. Brother Philip confided to the abbot of Saint-Martin-des-Champs. The abbot spoke to him in the chapel. He said that only the Lord could judge on Brother Philip’s failure. He asked the man to give up his misguided belief and trust in Jesus Christ, Son of God, Saviour of the world and redeemer of mankind. He said that Brother Philip had broken God’s Commandments, but if he did penance, prayed to the Lord and honestly asked his forgiveness, then the Lord would show mercy and have pity on his soul,
  10. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 13

    Yes, they definitely need to do something. Just driving around in France won't solve their problem. I would have liked to post more, but was asked to not post two and more chapters at the same time. Thanks for your patience.
  11. Jason and Leonard arrived at Saint-Martin-des-Champs and, to their great disappointment, learned that the priory was dissolved. The place was now a museum. They entered it. Jason studied the leaflet they had gotten at the entrance. "The priory was suppressed in1790 under the new laws of the French Revolution and the buildings were used as a prison. The monastic walls and dormitories were torn down. The surviving structures became the home of the Museum of Arts and Crafts. It opened in 1802," h
  12. Lol. Thanks for your feedback, Bill. Glad you liked the tale.
  13. Thanks for reading and leaving a review. I'm happy you liked the story.
  14. Thanks for your encouraging words, KC Grim. I'm happy you enjoyed the tale.
  15. Thank you, joann. Glad you liked the piece.
  16. Thanks for reading and commenting, carringtonjr. I'm glad you liked the story.
  17. Thank you, comicfan. I'm very happy you enjoyed the story.
  18. I'm enjoying the stories.
  19. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 1

    I was just about to post the same thoughts. A beautiful story. And I also thought Will was the right one.
  20. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 1

    I was appalled at the turn of events, but I'm shocked at the final line. I can't really express my feelings in words. You're very courageous.
  21. An unexpected but quite appropriate approach to the theme. We see that a matter of life and death should never be dealt with rolling a dice. I wish the Elders had used their magic to free the monks.
  22. Dolores Esteban

    Worth It

    We're tempted to indulge in wishful thinking and not acknowledge the facts. It won't do any good, but I understand his thoughts. Well put.
  23. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 12

    True. They would have have chased him forever and sooner or later they would have found him. His death is tragic, nonetheless.Thanks for reading.
  24. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 12

    I could not have him suffer. The poor boy stumbled accidentally into an evil plot. Luckily, Jason heard his call. He and Leonard won't give up on their search. The past and present events are connected.Thanks for reading.
  25. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 12

    I like Simon a lot. I would have never sent him into the darkness. But his fate is truly sad.Thanks for reading.
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