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Jack’s Reality Check
methodwriter85 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Jack’s Reality Check
Methinks that Marie and John are about to get a little half-sibling in the near future. I remember Television Without Pity called that "secondary off-spring." LOL Speaking of, I wonder if Ace and Bianca wound up giving Courtney a little half-sibling as well. We haven't really heard much from Ace since he left for Italy. Then again, Bianca isn't a younger trophy wife (she should be in her early 40's like Ace), so maybe not. Yeah, I'm liking that both JJ's counselor and his current love interest seem to be onboard with calling JJ out on his crap. He really needed that. Like, seriously needed that.- 36 comments
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Relationship Hurdles
methodwriter85 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Relationship Hurdles
Chapter 14 -When Brad and Claire go riding, and talk about Jack. "Dreams" by Fleetwood Mac -When JJ very regretfully goes with Kris to the singing diner. "Big Girls Don't Cry" by Franki Valli and the 4 Seasons -Travis performing "Kokomo" with JJ doing a back-up assist. "Kokomo" by the Beach Boys -When it slowly but surely dawns on JJ that he fucked up. "Stupid Girl" by Garbage -
Relationship Hurdles
methodwriter85 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Relationship Hurdles
As a visual, this is the face that JJ was trying to use to intimidate Kris with: Yeah, I can see why it didn't work. LOL In any event, way to go Kris. This was like Taming the Shrew, or "Taming the Bitchy Ice Skater." Alex never got to see JJ's bad side because he always acted like an angel around him, Tony let JJ be a total bitch because he knew that's what JJ needed, and Zanie and JJ were too much alike to ever actually challenge each other. I also liked that as bitchy as JJ was in this chapter, as soon as the light was on him, he went into performance mode in his duet with Travis. It was also a nice "continuity yay!" moment, because it was established during Brad and Robbie's wedding that JJ is a decent singer. Probably not to the level of Travis (which would probably added to his annoyance), but he wouldn't have had anything to be embarrassed about when it came to singing. -
Chapter 13 -When Kris gets his slowmo "wow, he's hot" entrance. "You're So Damn Hot" by Ok Go When Brad and JJ say their goodbyes, and Brad remarks that JJ is the happiest he's been since he was a little boy. "Maybe This Time" by Liza Minelli That is a damn good theme for JJ and his general character arc/development. -When Will tells Travis about his plan for a threesome, and Travis decides to go for it. "I Want Candy" by the Strangeloves I really do love that adding Travis in makes me think of a lot of 1950's/60's tunes. Such a great era for music.
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Right, Beach Movie era.
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Travis is hilarious, though. He's so anachronistic. Like he belongs in the 1950's and I like that about him. He reminds me of the Civil War re-enactment guys I knew when I was a teenager.
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Chapter 12 -When Will cheers on Ian Thorpe, who wins his race. "Let's Get It Started" by The Black Eyed Peas -When Travis apologizes to Will. "Let It Be Me" by The Everly Brothers When JJ spirals mentally about Brad showing up. "The Worst Day Ever" by Simple Plan
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Yeah, JJ is the only son that Brad can actually cower into doing what he wants him to do. I think that's why JJ is so scared about this visit, because he's worried Brad won't like Kris and will want him to dump him. Because deep down, JJ probably would do it if push came to shove. At least at this point.
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JJ doesn't really care about controlling money or making it as long as the flow of money remains constant.
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Chapter 11 -When Will uses his panic button to take care of the homophobe. "Jesus Walks" by Kanye West -When Will and Travis are reunited. "Heat Wave" by Linda Rondstadt -When JJ is given some food for thought by Will. "The District Sleeps Alone Tonight" by Postal Service
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JJ being scared shitless that Brad will find some way to fuck up his honeymoon era. Lol
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Chapter 10 -When JJ and Kris get ready for the Tom Ford show. "Make Me Believe In You" by Curtis Mayfield -When Sebastian throws a big fit and Kris explains the situation to JJ. "Le Freak" by Chic -When Kris swears an oath to JJ who wonders if they're making love now, not just having sex. "Is This Love?" by Alison Moyet -When Will pulls the "Do You Know Who My Father Is" trick and is annoyed that it doesn't work. "Move Bitch" by Ludacris
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Surprisingly though, he hasn't hooked up with as many curious straight guys as you think he would. Just a couple, Ryan and John Hobart (I'd guess John Hobart to be a little more then just curious) being two of them. I would bet he would have if he had been involved in team sports. In Crosscurrents, you get the vibe that Andy is able to pull so many straight guys because he lives such a straight boy life, so that makes straight boys comfortable with Andy. I don't think you could get the same deal with Will.
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Chapter 9 -When Marie gets her "Damn, she's hot" entrance. "Naughty Girl" by Beyonce -When Will hooks up with Ian Thorpe. "Dip It Low" by Christina Millian
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Chapter 8 -When JJ decides that he and Kris mesh together perfectly. "Accidentally in Love" by the Counting Crows -When Will checks out the crowd in sun-dappled Greece, enjoying the scenery of the Olympics. "Heaven" by Los Lonely Boys That feels like such a perfect summer song. -When Will gets to flirt with Ian Thorpe. "Oops Oh My" by Tweet
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Travis is probably the weirdest CAP love interest Mark has written, and I mean that in a good way. LOL
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I'm looking forward to what Private Tim is going to think about a bipolar teenager moving his boyfriend into his condo after 2 dates.
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Isn't he a criminal defense attorney? I imagine he's busy as fuck right now.
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Chapter 7 -When Travis and Will DTR but in like a weird roleplay way. "Braveheart Theme" -When JJ travels to his therapist. "The Only Living Boy In New York" by Simon & Garfunkel
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That's why you don't have a lord courting you, Mike.
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Chapter 6 -When JJ finds himself getting woken up by a blowjob by Kris. "I've Been Waiting for A Girl Like You" by Foreigner -When JJ sends Zanie on her way. "Cold Hard Bitch" by Jet -When JJ shows Kris Carullo's old room and basically gives it to him. "I Want to Know What Love is" by Foreigner This is my JJ/Carullo love theme, so it feels apropos for here. LOL -When Will and Travis wrestle and then have sex. "Turn Me On" by Kevin Lyttle
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Prince von Schullenberg
methodwriter85 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Prince von Schullenberg
I don't read Kris as a gold digger so much as someone who prefers the finer things in life and appreciates the lifestyle that money can buy. He intends on going for that life with hard work, but it would be nice to have someone that could maintain a beautiful home like what JJ is able to do because his money. -
Prince von Schullenberg
methodwriter85 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Prince von Schullenberg
I've always likened JJ to being a child star, except he was the child star athlete. Now that he's done with skating, he doesn't really have a strong purpose or direction in life. Which is understandable given how much of himself he put into figure skating. He could have looked into coaching, but I think JJ likes having his freedom to do fuck all now. A lot of people don't have that luxury, see: his new boytoy Kris. -
Prince von Schullenberg
methodwriter85 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Prince von Schullenberg
The "not wanting to grow up" thing is pretty much right on, I think. Anyway... Chapter 5 -When Kris tells JJ about his plans to go by his title, and JJ encourages him. "I Got A Name" by Jim Croce -When Kris cuddles with JJ, they talk, and he makes JJ feel better. With sex. "Dear Prudence" by the Beatles -When Kris reveals more about his life trauma, and JJ invites him to stay. And they have more sex. "Lonely People" by America -
Prince von Schullenberg
methodwriter85 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Prince von Schullenberg
I think of Mark as coming up with ways to gently nudge JJ out of his comfort zone to make him grow up. Like he's Walt Disney explaining patiently to a child star that he has to grow up and can't be 12 forever.- 36 comments
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