Findecino

The movie is Crocodile Dundee

I hope you resume this story. I love it so far.

I read this story years back when it was free. I wish it wasn't premium, as I can't afford to read it, atm. Can't wait until I can afford premium content again, so I can continue reading.

I read a lot of this story the first time it was up and wasn't happy that it was taken down before I got to finish it or read the sequel. So glad it's up again and is the only reason I paid for a premium account. Always love reading your work and this is one of my favourites.

Amazing story. It's a setup to the type of story I love. I so hope you consider writing it. It is still great, as it is but still has so much more potential as a long story or even series.

I have been waiting for the next chapter for ages and just realised that there are no reviews. I read enough to know how important it is for authors to know their work is enjoyed and trust me. This is one of my favourite stories. I finishes the prelude in like 2 days. Couldn't stop reading it. I love this story and please start writing it, again. I think I have but gonna check out your other stories, now. Just to get my fix. You're an amazing author.

I literally groaned when I got to the end. I love and hate cliffhanger endings. Through all your stories it's like what happens next, and then, and then? I drives me crazy but you are my favourite author and you are truly talented. Was an awesome chapter and can't wait for the next one. Just as much as I want to see Savage Moon and GFD updated.

I loved this story and at the end was like nooooooooooooooooo!!! I really think there should be more to this story and maybe break it up into a few chapters. I agree with the grammar and typos needing to be fixed but other than that it was amazing and you are very talented. I think the end would be a very good end to a chapter and I really hope you expand the story.

This is my first review. Nothing I have ever read in literature is so sad. I'm sad that I'll never read about him again. I'm scared of what will happen in the future with the weight of the grief on everyone in the lot. This is an amazing chapter and the same as jadelilac it took me three tissues. The detail and emotion in this chapter is so strong. Never before have I actually been worried about finishing a chapter. Hoping Dylan would go in the next chapter. Hoping that the light in Justin's head was a way to save him. :'(