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Eh, I think he was just being more sarcastic, not so snappy. Seth and him staying in ari-fricking-zona most definitely helped him out (assuming him and Seth are still together). Always helps to get along with the kinda the in laws. Jon

oh yeah, I'm so glad I was still up at 3 in the morning and saw the announcement. Definitely a good month for Dom Luka fan's everywhere. I'm so in love with Taylor and luke's relationship. and Look, Dom's a TLITEr too Definitely pleased, can't wait for the next installment. Jon

Shhhhh, don't give him anymore horrible ideas

Definitely enjoying this story. Can't wait to see things progress a bit more. The ending scene was hot. I'm kinda glad their isn't no detailed sex scenes in they story cause it leaves it up to our imagination. Can't wait to see them exploring this world and saving what/whom needs to be saved, it'll be interesting watching them learn their abilities and becoming a force for the light that they are so obviously their to serve. Regards, Jon

Definitely another good chapter. I do hope Jansen and Eric hook up . Hope everyone survives their various situations as well, it'd be pure evil to be killing em all off. I think Brian and Keithers would be good for each other too That way everyone ends up happy ever after. Least we don't have nuclear warheads involved (yet) Not such a cliffhanger after all. I'm sure the boys and Jim and his wife will escape the island before the volcano erupts, which'll put a screwball in Eric's wedding plans for Brandon and Chase, but oh well. They shoulda gone to England instead. Thanks for the wonderful chapter, Jon

ooh poor travis is gonna be sleeping on the couch for awhile....if he figures out where Dennis is going. Can't wait for the next chap, and Now i'm in love with Dennis and Travis. I hope things work out soon between all of them. Jon

LoL. Keep reading bud, Rory does begin to grow up. It's worth reading it all the way to the end. You'll appreciate it. He'll have a few more moments of teen angst, but, I love the story. Definitely one of my top Faves of Dom's stories Jon

Oh dear lord, I've been off and on all day and checking DomLuka's site every other day to see if a new chapter was up and I missed it. I'm slipping too I think . Off to ch. 24 now. Jon

Wow, reading this topic now is starting to answer some of my questions, I was going to add a new topic discussion but this one looks like it'll work. I'm in the process of writing Sunny's Angel, and so far the 1st chapter concerns a bit of an intro and the afternoon, 2nd chapter concerns the evening, and 3rd chapter concerns after dinner and late that night, and the 4th chapter will consist of most of the next day, jumping certain points in time as I move from one character perspective to another character perspective. The character perspectives are also a concern for me because I'm afraid that if I keep jumping from one character perspective to another that it'll turn off the few people who are reading my story, and then I have the concern that I have to introduce some minor characters that are playing a small role to allow people to get a better feel for Devin, and people may not like that either. (Is this making sense?) Is doing things like this acceptable, because I'm gonna have to start jumping points in time, but am not sure how to go about doing that, while fleshing out relationships for my characters. So far for a story I feel I've done ago, but it's those "fillers" that I am needing to develop relationships between characters that I am lacking and I'm not quite sure what to do. Anyone have any ideas???

Not quite what you were looking for but it's the closest thing I could find, I read this the other day and actually kind of enjoyed. http://library.gaycafe.com/nifty/gay/highschool/quiet-boy/ And now that you said that, I'm almost tempted to try it, as an author and a person, I never really thought about what it would be like to not have your hearing or to not be able to communicate with the "norm" of society. Now that I have started to think about it, I'm finding it kind of daunting, and am tempted to go take some sign language classes. Definitely interesting. Jon

yay, I'm glad chapter 6 came out and they finally managed to make it home in an odd sort of way. While not home home, they're on the right planet at least, even if they are out of time. I can't wait for the next chapter in this series. I've always been a fan of fantasy and every now and then I diddle around in my own fantasy worlds, but like Verm I sometimes confuse myself, and it's only recently I've taken to writing it a little bit, alas, I won't ever be as good as David is. I'm definitely looking forward to more. Jon

Just wanted to say that I've read both stories within the last 3 days and thorougly enjoyed them. Rich Boy 1 was the first DK story I read and I was completely surprised that it turned into a modern day fantasy story, but again, I thorougly enjoyed them. I can't wait till the 3rd one comes out, and we hopefully get to see Worthington and Jamie come to their full potential as grey adepts, with more people beginning to follow in their paths, especially Kyle. Thanks much, Jon

Merry Christmas Steve and everyone else Jon

Merry Christmas Everyone Jon

Merry Christmas and happy new years CJ Jon

Ooh, I missed the reawakened volcano. this chapter is pure evil. It's definitely a cliffhanger. Mayhaps we'll get the next one New Year's Eve...... Now that we know Keithers is gay, and Jansen and him are brothers, the question remains, is Jansen gay? Hrm.....I do hope Brian and the General survive. Thanks for the chapter, can't wait for the next one Jon

good story, i liked this alot Jon

I love ninjas And I'm relatively new around here too..like...12 days ago I think I joined, so i decided that's it's still not to late for me to actually say Hi Jon

Thanks guys, I appreciate it. Gonna be a quiet night for me though, (I hope) I'm to old to be partying like i'm a teenager anymore, the hangovers get to be too brutal. Instead I gonna go listen to my cousin and his girlfriend argue at my bday dinner in an hour instead, but that's okay, cause my 19 year old cous baked some brownies as my bday cake lol Thanks much, Jon edited to add: My cousin has a marine friend who came back home on leave from overseas, brought a few bottles of absinthe with him. I gotta say, nasty stuff...blech. So that was my birthday shot

Does anyone know what song that is by Tom Jones. I'm trying to youtube it and can't find it anywhere, and I wanna listen to the whole song before i go back to reading and uh...yeah...anyways...help appreciated. Jon Nevermind I found it finally. It's titled: You can leave your hat on and by clicking the link you can see the youtube video where he's doing it live somewhere. Sorry, just had a strange desire to hear the song, not many authors reference songs for something and when they do, I think most of em at least leave a lil side note..Thanks.

I tried to get into the prologue to start reading the other series C James wrote (i ran out of stuff to read and hit a point where i wanted to stop and start thinking things through on the story I'm writing) and ran into this problem...Is the prologue not there anymore or what? HELP please...Thanks Jon <H2 align=left> Quality Gay Fiction Stories</H2> window.google_render_ad(); Error 404 - Wrong Page OOPS! The page you are trying to reach: /http://cjames.gayauthors.org/FTLhtml_files/ftlpro.php was not found. You might try using .php instead of .html Your IP: REMOVED THE IP ADDIE HERE, NO ONE NEEDS TO KNOW IT Your Broswer: Mozilla/4.0 (compatible; MSIE 7.0; Windows NT 6.0; FunWebProducts; SLCC1; .NET CLR 2.0.50727; Media Center PC 5.0; .NET CLR 3.0.04506) <H1 align=center>Gay Authors Home</H1><H4 title="Stories at Gay Auhors Site Navigation" align=center>Gay Authors Navigation</H4> Home Forums Blogs Stories Authors eFiction GA Store Anthology Story Archive Teens FAQ Friends Site Map

awww poor dom...If you could make it down to Nebraska I'd take the kittens off your hand, but as it is you have to wait at least 8 weeks to get rid of the kittens so they can build their immune system off of mommy's milk, unless you took the mommy and the kittens to a new home together. If I were you I'd just call your ex up and tell him to come get the damn things. Anyhows, Best of luck to ya Grandpa Jon

I got to thinking more and more about this, how similar they are in age, and growing up together, and they even look alike in alot of ways, so here's the way I have voted on choice number one They're brothers (i'm thinking prolly half brothers) No they ain't out to hurt instinct Keith's the gay one We'd better find o ut before the stag party (otherwise i'll find some trash to leave out for the goat to munch on..i'm thinking disgustingly full baby diapers) I think Linda does know something about the boys, but i don't think it's bad, so I voted No. I'm thinking we shoulda had a question about who we'd want to end up with Eric if Eric does turn out gay (Bi)....Keith, Jansen, CODY!!!, The Generals son, can't remember his name now..hrm..EDIT: --> Brian (I don't know what i was thinking, Brandon is one of the main char's, but most of this story seems to be revolving around Eric ) but I'm sure the rest of the boys will be getting more and more involved as Eric begins to try and figure out what the General is up too Ah well, off to the chat, thanks for the poll Steve Jon

It's viewable. Completely awesome. Good Job Jon

I just got an error message too, even after i tried clicking on the sig Jon