Mark M

OMG mark i feel for you. a temperature of 9 is terrible so very very terrible. I hope your fingers are still safe, allowing us to read more of your wonderful stories!!! I can't believe Will didn't hookup with austin, i thought after the kiss it was a done deal. As for Tony i'm still unsure about this guy and Will's infatuation with him, It's odd, and tony just doesn't sit right with me. It's still weird not seeing much of Robbie anymore. Sad that he died but alas, the living have to deal with the loss of the dead. I'm surprised that Brad is launching into a battle with his security over being stopped because he's gay. That's so dumbbbb! In Canada i think it was legal for a same-sex relationship since 2005. Only recently did the common law requirement change. IT first said that if you live with a member of the opposite sex for six months and you wish to declare yourself as a married couple (without the church or government saying you are) your considered "Common-Law" or kind of married, It gives you some of the tax benefits of marriage anyway. then 2005 hit and it was changed to "Someone that you wish to declare as a common-law partner" which was cool, however i think it was this year that the six months turned into 2 years. I here there was alot of "Fake" common law partners without any proof to the point they were actually common law. Anyway random thought about Canadian laws with the whole brad launching into the security thing. But alas 2000's are the fight for equality for everyone. LGBT for the winnnnnnn in the end. (other then india and austraila(unsure about this country) & russia where there progress backwards apparently?) Oh and by the wayy....the temperature here was -31 C or -23.8 F. Now lets talk about fingers and leaving electronics outside......

about due time he returned home. YAY!

Loved this chapter! so curious to see how the relationship will develop!

I would love anther chapter, this is fantastic. Can't wait to see what happens next.

so nice to see this story have another chapter. and such a powerful builder of a chapter too. I'm currious to see what the future brings

I probably frowned through this whole chapters because i was like "it's stories like this that kept me in the closet" and even now im like UGH i don't like the stats. but its a good way to inform people of the brutal honest truth of "what could" happen. Either way the way you spun it was fun. Im currious to see where this progresses. On a side note i'm an adult now and know how to get out of bad situations, so this doesn't phase me. But i've never heard of a steriotype with the names kyle or tyler....

Dont you dare wrap this story up! otherwise there will be a mob of angry fans vs a mob of girls like in this chapter. and fans can leave a PERSON STARK ASS NAKED pretty quick. :D

So good. I can't believe it yet. I still expect there to be that phone call in a day or two that oh hey we found someone, alive. But i doubt anyone on the bottom floors especially....lived. Either way, it's a hard impact to take, especially since I started the CAP series at Be-Rad so robbie & brad and me are pretty close people. Either way, as all the characters are in this story right now. It is a very somber mood. Hopefully some good comes out of the bad.

Omg............................................................................................................................................................................................ I don't really have words. I'm Truly loving ever minute of this. Like it's based on a true story which means every reader can connect so much better with it. Ugh i just want the next 10 chapters like now. So brutal. Unfortuantly, there's not going to be a major "Life insurance" talk here because everyones already filthy rich, so getting richer is a moot point. The lives lost will truly be missed. Even though when it comes to smaller families even though someone dies, the estate typically helps celebrate that persons life. With Robbies, Hanks and Jeanne and Mr. danfield i don't think money will do anything. Anyway! please please please more more more more more more...................i don't even know what to do withmyself other then refresh the home page 20 times a day.

OMG so many emotions. Fantastic. Can't wait for more. I'm just going to end my review here and keep it short and simple, as i collect my emotions off of the walls of my place.

It's like that moment in lord of the rings the return of the king, where Gandalf the White and Pippin are sitting in minas tirith and pippin says "I don't want to be in a battle.....but waiting on the edge of one i can't escape is even worse" Thats how i feel, it's like withing the next three chapters all hell is going to break out! and worse yet, you PUT this wedding into one of the towers. However i believe you mentioned that the wedding is scheduled for 9/11/2001 at 9:11a.m, I believe the first plane hits the north tower at 8:48a.m New York Time, so this should mean that they will have plenty warning (less then a half hour) before the wedding at 9:11 a.m. However it looks like they have about 10 minutes to decide what to do, some dummy over the P.A system said for everyone to go back to there offices that the building is secure shortly after the first plane hits the north tower. Then at 9:03 the second plain hits the south world trade center. I have no freaking clue how your going to do this, and who or what your going to kill/do. Either way. This is going to be EPIC and insane! I'm so freaking excited like i even did research for this event to get my times right I'll post the time-line link i looked at. I hope you don't kill off everyone! cuz that'd be terrible....and your not doing another billy moment because Marie is not at this wedding. Now i wouldn't be mad if will ends up in some intense situation trapped inside a trade tower, cuz that would be freaking amazing. And for his whole rest of the family be panicked and worried, maybe that would snap marie into gear. However DO NOT KILL JP! if you do this whole family will be ripped apart because of the unsolved problems its currently having....(least i think it would) UGH as i said waiting on the edge of this, and i can't escape and get it over with is dreadful. in all honesty you could do like 30 chapters just on this. My only request during the posting of this is to please post in a way that it's not leaving us hanging dreadfully. I remember where i was and everything that day. So brutal. anyway! FANTASTIC lead up to this event!!! when you introduced Hank i had a feeling it might lead here but wasn't 100% sure cuz everyone (in this story) on the west coast, rather then the east. Maybe lou/Marcel will be there due to the fact there only in Toronto? SO EXCITED! Keep it up! Oh and here's my research link to back my time sources. it probably may not be very accurate but HEY i was only eleven at the time of this incident. Not sure if i'm allowed to put a link on this but if it's not allowed SORRY, please don't click the following link http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timeline_for_the_day_of_the_September_11_attacks (It's just wikipedia)

Whoa! this was an intense chapter, especially the ending. Like i review and ask for more isadore and the not so main characters and you do this? a Divorce? I hope she gets deported. Maybe JP should tell the government there marriage was a sham. (sure he might get finded) but she might get deported. and good riddens. However i have a feeling that for all intensive purposes she actually probably wants to marry frank Hayes and isn't actually doing this for shallow purposes. Otherwise you can kill her off for me anytime. Put her in the 9/11 towers. >=) I'm very evil when it comes to her being a bitch, ever since billy anyway. Will REALLY needs to control himself. Gay people are supposed to be all calm and understanding and accepting. Least it's a sterotype, i couldn't imagine someone being like "I'm gay" and "oh i'm raciest and bigoted too" Either way Will IS SO not repping very well with the anger issues. I would not date this kid. Might sleep with him but never in a million years, date him. Right now Matt and Wade are probably my wet dream Just cuz there probably around the early 20's age like i am Either way! Lets see how this plays out! Great job Mark! Have a good one

I saw this picture and Had to post it. It is great. Otherwise I'm still kicking around and reading every chapter! Sending all the love Mark's way!! We the readers, love you

Ah! i love it! another great chapter. I do wish they'd be longer. but at least the average time i get to read them is shortly after midnight. I have decided the gang should one day make it to Canada. After all once gay marriage is legal in Canada surly someone will make the travel up here to become unionized. Course that's on your timeline, which has slowed down dramatically however 12 books from 1968-2001 is pretty decent! (i may not have that totally correct) however Kai's a dick, Mason is Hawt and rich, so money's no object. Tony i just don't like anymore. Brad i'm still head over heels with because he's ripped, hung, and rich. Oh and he's kind have got the best personality and logical mind out there. Scott...or Lark or alas Mark, is awesome, i love how he comes into the story every now and then. If only lou and Marcel were just a lucky, but it hasnt been too long since they've been in Anyway! how are we getting to new york dear sir??? and who you killing, or putting in the rubble? Alas i don't see you doing spoilers LIKE EVER, so i don't expect a reply there....i'll just dream and dream until it happens. Keep it up Mark! You know your readers love you

Ashers totally! a slut! this tyler character is totally going to be a one night stand.....now the question is how to get around all this with micheal! I love this storY!! please keep it up!

Alright stones/swords at the ready. Wherever you live Mr. Arbour your fate will be the same as Grangers if he were to pass during the night (not a legit threat, please do not take it seriously!) . However foreshadowing a bit here and him being the main character I can't see him passing overnight. But in all honestly a curve ball out of left field is all we need. I will declare a cliffhanger, and probably one of the worst yet. You don't leave off on if he's gona die or not, like really. >=( ^ me being this angry means i care you only get mad at people you care about and as a typical statement: I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!

OH MY GOD! so thankful everything has turned out good for right now. I hope you continue with this for the long term because the characters are so well written i could read for ages. Anyway Keep it up! it's so so so good!!

Uhhhh i love this STORY! Keep it coming!

That was FANTASTIC, i was like hooked on every word! brilliance!!! Can't wait for the next chapteR!

hehehhehe i forshadow that vinnies boyfriend it BERTO! i just wonder what this will cause! :D

Hey there's no syndromes going around right now it's all good! George will just have to find a hot guy and hit the beach for a month, and then he can come back to his boat

I like that you started a new story with CAP, though i was expecting more of a Granger Push forward. Anyway now it's 2001 and the first of the worst disasters in my lifetime occurred in that year, i still am not sure which was worse in my opinion 9/11 itself or the war that has followed from it in Iraq and Afganistan for years afterwards. Either way, such a pivotal point in history i'm curious to see how you work this into the story line. Currently no character has any ties to NY yet....Brad possibly could have with his company, Robbie may have a very important film to go to NY for I guess. However Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone came out that year, so it wouldn't be a bad thing to have Robbie involved with that! lol, Maybe will become's an actor? so far we know will could be a professional surfer but for a career move i'm totally lost for what he wants to do, in fact Wade or Matt don't really have a career that i know of...i'm sure there both studying something towards a career but i get lost in the relationships and the lusting rather then focusing on remembering what they do, especially since there not our focus right now. Wade probably has a good chance of being around 9/11. I have no clue how this will work. I enjoy the suspense and of course any guessing i can do that's for sure. Either way I predict!!!!!!! -=dun dun dun=- that the characters, wake up tomorrow morning. <SHIT I CAN PREDICT THE FUTURE!!!> Anyway Will is a grand character, he almost rivals brad for me in be-rad. One day i will re-read that story for a 3rd time... Anyway! keep it up and have fun while you do it, every chapter almost gets up to or close to 20 reviews. Here's a question....what chapter of any story in the CAP saga has the most reviews?? :O Congratz on the 4,000,000 words! and a big THANKS to your TEAM! there all awesome!!!! Even though i don't post much i still check G.A daily to see what's been updated. I'm glad your still around and hope you continue to be around and active. =) -Mark M

Great Start! i hope we see more chapters soon!! they seem so wonderfully hot.

Fantastic ending to an amazing story! the ups and down of this are amazing!! I'd very much like to be in Jeff shoes now as a narrator i think! he seems like such an awesome guy. Anyway i await for whatever you have on the table for us next! new story new CAP chapter, Something with granger? whichever i love what you do and hope you enjoy it as much as your readers! Thank you for existing.

Well as a start to a new story i might as well offer the first review. I'm curious about the original author that you basing this story on, it seems like it could be a good read. I'm so far enjoying the read so far, but the concept of turns confuses me, is that in relation to one year=one turn? or one day = one turn? cuz two hundred turns seems like alot of years.....probably too long. I'm also wondering what this young character will bring up as a dragon....i'm sure it won't be anything but the rarest of dragons....or so i can hope! even mightier then the Golden's You also surprised me with the start of a brand new story and not book II of the "dreams of humanity" series? I do hope you continue you it one day it was a great read. KEep it UP!!