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SO GOOD! love it mark!

OMG Love it!! but i seriously feel like this is a cliffhanger. Me wants more!! More! more! more! Mark you Cheeky person your adorable in your passion of writing! Keep going!

okay at first i was abit frazzeled that it was another chapter of St. Vincent, but i'm thinking this story is almost over so i'm fine with you continuing to post this story. However i am surprised freddie hasn't had anything done to look at what he has before. talk about an intense feeling but wow, he will love granger afterword....i couldn't imagin a life only getting erected but never finishing. So sad. Either way count me excited for the next chapter, plus i'm sure you'll let granger stick around freddie and davina long enough for him to find out the results of his doctors surgery??? and possibly cast his own inheritance to granger??? SO EXCITED i really hope granger gets a ship-of-the-line. but im not sure he's qualified for that kind of command, if you wouldn't mind sharing, what is possible for someone this famous to get as a command? another frig? or bigger?? i really hope he keeps his crew. anyway Keep Writing mark!

This is great! i so want to know what happens when a legito bonds with a centurion! and i think he's definatly onto something about there bones... Either way!! Excited!!!

Okay first, i pretty much died, was born again, and died once more. SERIOUSLY this was like the BIGGEST ROLLERCOSTER EVER!!! i love coming out. Fortunatly my coming out wasn't because i "Exploded" but more like hey dad can we talk oh yea i'm "Gay". But fantastic chapter i can't wait to see how he handles his new Courage! and Freedom!! Woo! So Excited com!

I love all of vlista's work! i've been waiting oh since i joing G.A to see if he'll ever finish one moment....but alas....he is away.....one day to hopefully return! LOVE this story too. A million stars an kudo's to the author.

Mark if you scrap chapters 34, and 35. i'll put you in a re-build wardroom look alike and burn you in it Just kidding! But i'm excited for what Granger Aquires as his "Next command" They'd be dumb not to let him go ahead with a bigger ship. Who knows i guess, He's got some work to do getting one. I wouldn't mind some Drama of him commanding a ship-of-the-line. I think it would be great fun to see what chaos that would create! I can only dream. And so can you! i await the next chapter. as for right now im going to go read book 3 of the Hunger games...

Fantastic. I like Ryan. His being whole closet case kinda sucks. i'm currious on his family life though. can't wait to find out more. i'm guessing his dad might have "Molested him" that's why he's such a anger ball. Oh well. Can't wait for the next one probably be a weekish from today. as St. Vincint wiill probably be ready friday.....oh wait...am i saying mark's predictable? I think i should shut up now!!! Either way can you blame me i love it alll and just can't get enough.....now i'm gona go listen to nicki minaj "Stupid Hoe"! Have a Wonderful rest of your day Happy Writing!

FANTASTIC!!! i hate waiting for chapters!! they do take a while but in a way im glad they go because it's TOTALY worth it! Love it Com!!

That was awesome!! i hope someone asks wade how he's so rich after his last comment now we onto the meeting of assets...probably some riley info, maybe some mother wade. Either way should be an excited next chapter. but this one has definatly stood out for it's emotions and where it takes place, because who can't relate to being in a change/room someway or another. once we picked our seats to change by in the gym change room, it was just tradition to keep them the same. if someone change there spot (it happened when someone wanted to be a dick/idot) there was hell to raise! Tradition is so awesome in some cases. Love this chaper! 10/10 :D

WOO A FLEET BATTLE IM SO EXCITED!!!!

If that's JJ who wouldn't want to kill/hit/beat/tease him? i'm sorry but that is one not cool looking kid. Lucas till i feel as if he's too masculin if you have seen him in "Hannah montana: the movie" Or X-men First class. If anyone is though i'd say u'd have him close but just with a better face. I'd fantisize that after he's around 20 and figure skated all his life he'd look like this to think this guy is actually 6 months older then me in real life! and smokin hawt. (alex Pettyfer) anyway i like the fact wade is giving carl a hard time. but i see major drama coming at one point. Sean Massey seems like he could be a fling for matt. We'll have to watch were that goes. Least it's finally someone who's organized like wade. although comminalities usualy don't attract. But yet i have heard Marrying your best friend is a Good option. Wade also has 450,000,000 ish million so he's loaded, no big deal though these people r all rich. Mark next time you write a story i dare you to make it about a non-rich person. (and not ever getting this rich) course i guess this is fiction, but gawd at the rate were going everyones RICH! where's my millions? P.S when is someone gona die? there are so many people in this family that i'm surprised something doesn't happen to someone. Right now we know Will is trying for a new friend/boyfriend, school, and some family issues with jeanne, gathen is hockey & school (as far as we know), Wade is riley, tiffany, jeanne, brad, robbie, JP, Will, Gathen and Matt's current life. what about Isadore. i havent heard about her in AGES much less frank? unless he's dead? :S What about Jim and crampton construction. or the re-building of (Enter name of the city here) lol. as always i await the next chapter.

ive read this whole story so far, tonight! and it's pretty awesome! can't wait to see what happens next!

I can't believe how short this chapter was. like i want more!!!! it's sooo good. i dont like the idea of the bud....but w.e i'm worried on how it's removed....but whatever works i guess. to cultures coming together is kinda hard. at least he wasn't casterated. :S So excited for them to talk!

I guess since mark asked where the hell i've been maybe i'll try and post in the forms more often? sometimes life gets in the way but i usualy always find a time for a story (if there posted). I just had my 2nd Wisdom tooth out today. Lets hope no one in these stories face that, it's not the most pleasent. Hopefully no dry socket either....(worse pain then child birth, because it's always there). but so far i'm all roses and healthy. lol Anyway to the Story paternity. I think Jeannine (how is the pronounced? I always think G-anne) will be a little unhinged and she'll be a wirlwind to deal with, however i think cody has the worst possible future because i think jeannine might just take her rath out on him. I can see him just balling right up and closing off from everyone with her. Hopefully not but probably. I think/hope wade works a teather on to matt and who he has sex with. Will mentioned in the last story that wade just is super faithful and matt is not, that bugged me a bit. okay i lied, alot. Maybe wade/Matt have a breakup moment? I'm also currious if Gathen will go to wade and ask wade why matt is being such a dick in hockey, then matt will spill his side of what he's doing, who knows? oh yeh...guess mark does. I also hope someone fucks up and has sex with an EXTENDED FAMILY MEMBER. like that drama sounds like SO much fun One thing that bugs me is no one in these stories have been to the zoo seeing two tigers humping? like mark you gotta put yourself in these storys a little more litteral. Anyway i await the next chapter as usual.....just think be-rad was posted every other day. now we are waiting for story's ever 5thish day. Oh well the quality is superb Keep Writing!

Beautiful, i love this new twist as wade as narrator, i didn't care so much for the will/gathen combination. but it was okay too. this looks like it will be a blast because wade is well....from money and well had to learn alot more when Gathen is to young to think out-side-the-box. IE: he's just a college freshman just starting life.... Wade however is probably in the middle or in his senior year. Either way he learned way more then anything else because of his family.

Awesome! so pumped for the next story!! Although i wonder if will be a bad thing he ran after him??? I'm thinking Jacobs past has something to do with this whole damn set up.....did q have an Ultimate love back in the day??? could jacob be that person who is like somehow the "king" or could he be a Skai as the oracle or w.e said "The light hunts you".....so currious......so maddening!

thats awesome!

i love this story!

Priceless, i've never had my heart sore so much with a story before. you are very clever with words. one would hate to meet you in person and try and convince you of something. i betcha you could sell an egg farmers his own egg to him if you tried. words that come to mind are fantastic, supurbe, glorious. The concept of it all. Where did you grow up? What books have you read that inspire you to write like this??? i dare say, if you ever think of a future and it's in writing i think you will be successfull. However alot of people that are good at one thing would rather just enjoy it rather then change it and make it into a job, thus defeating it's enjoyment. Either way. Brilliant.

Oh my god!! i'm freaking out, that was amazing. i would really like to know the explanation after he's done showing him. SO INTENSE. Anyway, i also like the speed your posting the chapters. and i definatly can't wait for the next one. Thanks for Existing!!

oh my god, what do i think? freaking nuts! we finaly learn Q's name. And That he could be king, but some bratty prince just awoke. Something about Jacob and mirrors has a conection to his past, and somehow he lights up and somehow ends up in a bed. I'm Beginning to think that the light is after jacob because he is part of this "orb" and as it is Circular it could mean no beginning and no end. or some sort in there too. Either way i think when Jacob Remembers his past he will be relitivly important to the brotherhood, either under or over Q. Since there's this major attraction i wouldn't be surpried of jacob wakes up to be Q's Lover from a million years ago or something. Either way! Awesome so far. I think CJ needs to be swatted, someone like MIKE should get the big Dildo. As for a Review i loved the chapter, hated the ending. I am Delairing another "cliffhanger" because now something BIG will happen, maybe an explosion of pledges or something i duno, i just hope something happens BEFORE they leave the mansion. I'd rather not go to a normal story where they have to deal with school or college at all. Anyway 8/10 Stars (due to cliffy, and i know theres gona be awesomer chapters in the future!) I await the next chapter!!

Gawd, where do i start? That was Priceless and Amazing!!!! I LOVE IT!!! enough said.

Omg i loved this and the last chapter! Things are developing so Nicly!!! I loved getting to know Ant, he's a hero of mine now cuz that sucks to be put in that situation. I'm sooooo currious to the max on what happens next! with Jacobs Story! I'm So interested!!!! being 'born again' just seems strange.....to be re-born seems something like re-encarnation but yet he's already older, so i'd have to say i'm very currious as to what the hell is going on and to here what the story he tells, lets us into his life farther. LOVE IT ALL!!! (P.S) i hope the dildo is Q's Size......but unfortunatly i have a feeling Jacob is a top so Q having that monster would be a waste....but maybe there both as big and versitile??? Either Way I DeCLAIR A CLIFFHANGER!!! please don't keep us waiting long!

Wow, the money situation with gathen is intense. now can you someone teach some of my friends about how to manage there money!! Gawd awful they are.