Nephylim

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I'm sure I could find a loophiole in that.

It depends who's in there. Sometimes the conversation gets deep, sometimes it's just fun and froth, sometimes it's both. I've had some really deep converstions in there. If you want to have a deep converstaion try starting one and see what happens. There is private chat though. If you click one of the names on the right it opens a private window and you can private chat. Not sure if you can bring others into that chat but you can have more than one tab open at the same time.

You had to didn't you !!! you couldn't have ended on something sweet I'm glad you didnt. I am so sorry this story has ended as I have looked forward to chapter more than any other story I have read on here. It was an amazing story told with incredible delicacy given the content. Thand you

Strange... but right

Now I have to admit that I didn't expect that. Expect the unexpected they say and I seem to have lost my touch in that department.

WHAT!!!!! Awesome chapter. Cam was a hero. But I doubt that Gabriel is going to appreciate it.

How much more can I stand. This story is like a drug. I am so excited to find out how this ends but now that the end is in sight it's disappointing and I want to stop and ration my reading... not that I am going to

Red and black Don't know how to get a photo in here

Ravishing is an aweome word. Technically the definition involves rape but it is far too good a word to use it in that context. I love this chapter because I love the idea of being ravished which, of course, is why I wrote it

When we pull apart his eyes are wild and hungry, the red flame flickering albeit lazily. “That was some ride.” “You asked for it.” “I did, didn’t I. Don’t let me ask for it too often. I could get addicted.” “No chance of that my love. I enjoy making love to you straight too much.” “Straight?” he asks with a twinkle in his eye and raised eyebrows. “You know what I mean.” I retort slapping his shoulder. He smiles dreamily and snuggles into me. “We need to get up and dress for din

“Star, our time is growing short. As much as I would like to stay here for a very long time we must soon part and all go our own ways. Make no mistake my dear boy, one day we will meet again and that time there will be no partings. One day I will travel the paths of the spiral back to you and so will Lauralie, but for now we will soon have to go and there is something I need to talk to you about before we do.” Star frowns. “Do we really have to go?” “Very soon, dear one.” “But it’s been

I loved it. I love the way that the lust is turning to friendship and that Christopher is ... turning into something too. At the end there I so thought he was going to kiss Jo. Loved it.

That was easy to read but very powerful. You have really caught the emotion... the pushing and pulling... the hope and hopelessness It's classic but interesting and new and fresh. I am so getting into the story.

I know I've already reviewed this but not here. THis is an extremely powerful start. So few words say a lot. The force and energy of it sucks you in immediately and makes you want to read on.

It's set out a bit weird and maybe you want to look out for that. It's in kind of chunks that make it hard to read However, I still liked the story. i LOVED the dream sequence. I loved the way that Christopher simply said. 'You can have it' It was so simple but so powerful. I was holding my breath. Nice work

Thank you. I sometimes think that having a strong back story in your mind when you write is a double edged sword. It can add detail and make it more three dimensional but it can also be confusing. This will be even more so later on when the story gets stranger so I hope that my readers will let me know if they lost the plot. Cia tells me that it makes sense to her but she's as weird as I am so... :)Did I say thank you for the review? I'll say it again just in case... thank you for the review.

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At your own risk Aggy I talk enough as it is but it's impossible to stop me once I'm drunk and as for having inhibitions... what are they?

Less exciting though.

I have always had very very vivid dreams and for a long time I had a dream diary. Last night I met a woman who was running a home for runaways. It was getting very run down... parts of it were just being built by the older boys, a wooden frame with lots of timber around. The boys were really hot... bare chested like the werewolved is New Moon. Strangely I ended up sleeping with the woman who was running it... she was totally cute... all stressed out with wild dark red hair.. Mmmm. Anyway. I met her on a dirt track on the way to the house. She dropped her shopping and I helped her pick it up. I felt really strange, almost smug as if I knew things she didnt. I was telling her that things were going to be okay and that I would help her figure things out. I knew it was true and that I would and for some reason she just completely accepted what I said. In the house there ws a games room where all the kids gathered, there were loads of them and all really cute in very different ways. I told her that we needed to fund raise and that we would have a ball. She said that no one would come and I told her that I knew the right people to make them come. She was reluctant but I went to speak to this woman with a big floppy brimmed hat with a feather on it and she nodded Then we had to clear all the furniture out of the games room and pulled back the carpet and there was a really great wooded floor underneath. We scrubbed up the room and then there was the ball. There wwere women in sparkly dresses and men in tuxedos and at the end of the night they all presented the woman with envelopes with money in them ,She was so excited, It was enough to save the house and finish it and run it for a long time. After the ball we went upstairs and made sweet sweet love. When she was asleep I got out of bed and places a long. white, silver tipped feather on her nightstand. I walked out into the night. It was really cold with a completely clear sky with all the stars very clear. A bright light began to shine and I realised it was coming from me. When it got so bright I couldn't see I woke up. There was a lot more to it than that but that's pretty much what I remember.

Welcome Sneeze. I love the name, it made me smile. I hope you are going to very much enjoy yourself around here.

OMG... forget the shy. Your stories are dark and twisted and the most awesome ever. I am TOTALLY hooked to Ice Blue Assassin. I consume chapters and every one has me on the edge of my seat gasping and leave me begging for more. It's the kind of story that given the chance I would read the end first so I could bear the suspense of getting there. I LOVE this story to hell and back. Welcome to the forum. Stop with the shy and let us get to know your fabulously twisted mind What he said Welcome to everyone I missed... I frequently do but I LOVE to meet new people so drop into Nephy world whenever. Where is it? Wherever I am Feel free to pm me if I can help you with anything

That was a beautiful chapter, really beautiful. I was there in the water seeing the fish and there are yet more clues about Blake and his problems and Haze and his. I am growing to love this story very quickly

Curiouser and curiouser. I'm quite excited about this one and it will certainly be one I will be following. You are certainly a storyteller. There are writers and then there are those who write... you are a writer and I really like your story