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Nephylim

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  1. Joe was angry, very angry: so were Ben, Sean, Luke and Isobel. Although they were angry for very different reasons, they were all angry with the same person – Ephraim. At that particular point they were all hunting for him, baying for blood. He couldn’t have cared less. He was letting himself in through the back door of the house as everyone else was converging on the front. Isobel was angry with Ephraim because he had stood her up. They were supposed to have met for dinner and then a movie a
  2. Ephraim is an enormous success. He's a well known model, is about to launch his own fashion collecton which is receiving a lot of good attention. But in the middle of that is a gaping hole in his life that can only be filled by going back to the beginning
  3. I don't think that anyone in Luma's stable had become childlike. Bridge has always been that way.. he's fey ie faery, Star is certainly not childlike, he's getting more and more manlike. If you are talking about Serif... all I can do is giggle. Serif is a force of nature. Think about the name The Fall was a long time before the pyramids As for Luma's house... it doesn't exist so it doesn't have an architect... that's why new rooms can be added just by bending reality. It changes and grows according to Luma's will
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    Chapter 21 - Fey

    Yes, the vampires live forever but he hasn't changed any of the boys into vampires they are being kept alive by the healing qualities of his venom to which they gradually acquire a resistance so that after about 100 years or so it doesn't work any more and they start to age again. If and when he turns any of them then they will become immortal as well. Of course some of them have been with him for a lot longer...but they are special
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    Chapter 1

    Thank you for commenting. I'm glad you liked the story. It was so much fun to write and I'm glad you were satisfied at the end.
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    triforce

    Now that it worrying.... I mean you getting better with computers I like pretty pictures
  7. HAPPY BIRTHDAY DARLING Have a GREAT one Make sure everyone spoils you rotten as you deserve :wub:
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    Waiting For Death

    Thank you for the review. I'm realy glad you liked the story. I think you are right about leaving it as it is. There is more I could write, in fact there is whole scenario surrounding it that I could put down. But in the end the story was written around a painting and if it moves on then it isn't about the painting any more. I think this is it, the way it is, the way it's meant to be
  9. I can't say I noticed... there are a lot of things I don't notice but that's a terrible thing to do. I mean whether reps are important to you or not then to have someone deliberately drive it down must hurt. I mean, if it was ten or twenty then it's creepy and annoying but you shrug it off... but 100 - that's totally out of order. If you find out who did it I'l join the queue to kick his (or her (have to be PC here)) ass
  10. HAHA No muggles in my world Yeah, the years weigh heavy when you know they are never ending. Seven thousand years is a long time to live, especially if you are not happy, always yearning for something you can't have and trying to find satisfaction in things that can never satisfy you. I don't know about vampires in general but Luma is certainly not your average vamp
  11. I'm still keeping everything crossed, although the eyes are getting to be a bit of a problem and I am being forced to uncross them occasionally
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    Is it Only Me?

    Who can argue with Lacey? :) I concede that perhaps I was overreacting
  13. How could I understand when you spoke to me of love? A child, I had sat gazing into the pool and waiting for my friend. Too large now to sit on your shoulders, raised above the corn, Burying my face in your sweet hair, the colour of honey scented with fresh air and the sweetness of angels. How could I understand when you spoke to me of love? A child I had thought myself too old for your stories. Too impatient to grow up and experience for myself the touch of a man Lost in
  14. The moon was bright The night you died The night I wached the dying of the light They would not let me come to you The swords were bright The night you died When I watched your soul take flight They would not let me come to you Your eyes were bright The night you died Before they tore you from my sight And they would not let me come to you The moon was bright The night I died The blood pooled on the ground and dried And I did so want to come to y
  15. My poor attempts at poetry on a subject that consumes me but is crazy even by my standards.
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    Chapter 1

    From the terrace a long lawn stretches down to the banks of the lake. Behind me the sounds of the party spill out along with the warm yellow light that nudges at my back, pushing me away from the house onto the cool green grass. The moon is almost full and the cool moonlight is so much more alluring than the harsh brightness I am leaving behind me. I take a deep breath, glorying in the pureness of air untainted by the stink of bodies and cigarette smoke. I take off my shoes and socks and
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    Deadly Song

    Daniel was preparing to give up his life when he was offered another choice. He has three days to decide whether he can find one thing in his life that makes it worth living.
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    Chapter 7

    Gah!!! Still no confesstion. A nice chapter though. So Christopher is an artist and lyricist. Interesting.
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    Chapter 6

    That was a roller coaster ride. The ending was so sweet. I'm glad there's another chapter up. I'm wondering when the hell they are going to admit their feelings.
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    Chapter 5

    Somehow I felt that the first part was a tiny bit stiff and stilted. However it was only the very beginning The rest was tfabulous. You have such a way with conversations. I loved it. You have me intrigued now as to what Christopher's big secret is.
  21. Looking again does anyone else think that he looks like Kiera Knightly (no idea on the spelling
  22. See.... now that is adrogynous. You look at that picture and think... that's a very beautiful woman...and then you look again and think... yeah, that is obviously a man
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    Is it Only Me?

    I think I'm with Eva on this..... totally
  24. Sorry but for me I can't say that any of those guys are androgynous... pretty in their own ways but not truly androgynous, they are way too masculine
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