Nephylim
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God, what's with all the crying? I like Frank a lot. He's honest and forthright. Okay, maybe he's a bit insensitive, but Billy needs it. Bottom line - Billy is being a total sap. What on earth was all that girly panic about? Definitely 12 year old girl with a crush. Take a chill pill Bill. Billy needs to decide if he can really handle what Cyd is asking for. Cyd asked for Spring and Billy has set his sights on Christmas. Not on the same page. Sounds like Cyd is trying but Billy is being way too clingy and spongy.
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Hmm Don't know quite what to think about this. If it had been entirely in Billy's pov I would have said, cut your losses and run for the hills. .But knowing how Cyd is taking things....hmm. I'll wait and see. Great story building
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I like Frank. He's a good guy, looking out for his friend. I wonder if he likes crows
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Oh dear. My worst nightmare. I hope Cid manages to shake Kurt pdq, but knowing you probably not
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Interesting story beginning to unfold
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Oh my our Cid is definitely not the most social creature. Human contact! Eeeew
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I LOVE that word, adorkable, and it definitely fits Cid. He's a complicated little buddy.
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Interesting. Something's brewing
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deville took the words right out of my mouth
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Thank you! I'm just so very sorry it's taken me so long to respond. You've made my day, too
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It was about five or six years later so they would be in their late twenties. Opps, forgot to say thank you. Thank you!!!!
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Chapter 29 - It ends... It begins.
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 29 - It ends... It begins.
I have to admit that I've neglected GA horribly and also, I used to get notifications in my email when anyone commented on a story but that doesn't happen anymore and it's made me lazy. However, I very much appreciate every single comment I receive and I try my hardest to respond to them all. Thank you SO much for all your comments. I'm very glad you enjoyed the story. IT was a complete departure for me. An experiment that I think worked better than I could have hoped. It's a testament to my readers and proof that readers are not lazy and can keep up with a complex story. -
It's always the quiet ones you have to watch
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Chapter 27 - The Choir and the Wheel
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 27 - The Choir and the Wheel
An angelic choir can do anything, including the impossible. It can create and destroy matter, which is why it hardly ever happens. It's is very rare that angels, at least those powerful enough to summon a choir, involve themselves in human affairs at all .Except, of course, this is not a human affair -
As with everything else - It's great but has its down side. There is a certain peace and power in ignorance, and you can never go back
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The fight never ends.
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Chapter 24 Fading and Shining
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 24 Fading and Shining
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Chapter 24 Fading and Shining
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 24 Fading and Shining
Just breathe and remember I rarely kill major characters. I'm glad you get so invested in my characters. That's he highest praise any writer could receive so I thank you so very much for making me happy. Aaaand I still haven't got to this new system and I responded twice. Ah well -
Chapter 23 - Sam and Alex
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 23 - Sam and Alex
Sadly, there are way too many people like that about. -
I think you're probably right that and he knew Luma just wasn't ready to hear it
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Me too
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The key point here is that these beings are cursed. This doesn't happen to everyone, by any means. Most of the main players in this story were involved in a huge event that happened a very long time ago, As a result of that event most of them were punished by being cursed to live out of time. With the exception of Sacha none of them are human, and if you think about it, he's the only one who doesn't have a nightmarish back story, so I don't think you have anything to worry about.
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Chapter 19 - Past Meets Present. True Nature Revealed
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 19 - Past Meets Present. True Nature Revealed
I'm not sure if it's possible to time travel. My brain wasn't quite able to get around that one. The spiral is "The spiral of rebirth/reincarnation". Every life is a turn of the spiral. You start off and end in the same place birth/death, but every time you're a little highter, a little purer, a little closer to the top where you can step off the carousel. I could TOTALLY see Astaria and Lauralei. -
I was hoping it would come as a shock Luma is this all powerful, often cruel, always arrogant, very much in control vampire...who looks like an angel
