Nephylim
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Sacha is a mother hen. He is so absolutely in his element being able to keep his little family happy. He definitely definitely deserves to be loved and to be told that he's loved. Everything that's happening at this moment in time int he story is designed to cement the family closer because they will be tested. Oh yes, they will be tested.
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Chapter 16 - Blazing Star
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 16 - Blazing Star
Because they're all being punished for something that happened a long, long time ago -
To be fair, it did start off very small
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Love it!!!
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Generally, that is true. However, in this case, Luma is not the kind of person to have any regrets about killing. In fact, he is the sort of person who would never be able to rest until he knew the man who hurt Bridge was dead. There is so much back story to this book that I never wrote into it I'm not sure if sometimes I rely on it too much and make it confusing for readers. As a tantalizing extra just for you - almost all the characters in this book are being punished by hardship and torment in this life for things that happened in another life.
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Oh, if you had been Serif, you definitely would have Serif is far more than he seems and he is a monster
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Chapter 11 - Worry and Trust
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Worry and Trust
Bridge is an eternal optimist and so positive that sometimes it makes my teeth itch I would LOVE to live in this household but not as one of the boys. There is no way I'd handle being dominated. No way -
Ah, a lot of people misunderstand Luma. He's such a dark, tortured soul - literally. His name has no connection with luminousness or light in any way an neither does he I absolutely agree that "little flower" is a lovely nickname. It's quite poignany here as Luma has plucked so many flowers in full bloom and crushed them while so many others have wilted
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Yes, I suppose you're right. A lot of what goes on around Bridge is poignant at this point.
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Thank you!!! This story was a big experiment and it's coming off better than I hoped - somewhat like the clothes in the story (I wish they had a smiley emoticon with vampire teeth)
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Chapter 7 - Bridge's Story
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Bridge's Story
I know what you mean. Yes, Bridge is special. They all are as you will see later. There is a reason they're being brought together. Also Luma/Radu has been an inhuman monster for a very long time, using boys, killing them thoughtlessly, then throwing them away without a second thought. It would have to be a special person - more than one special person - to bring him back to humanity. -
Like so many super rich people, Radu has no interest in his staff. Chancey takes care of all that and he knows to keep the workers out of Radu's sight. I would imagine anything that was hard to clean would just be replaced.
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Thank you No, Ara doesn't speak a lot, unlike some of the other characters
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Bridge is one of my favourite characters I have ever written. He is...adorable
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Aqua is the only person who can resist. Everyone else is in the vampire's thrall, No one can say no to him. Part of the reason Radu is so fascinated with Aqua is because he can resist
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Aw thank you for the vote of confidence. I'm really glad you enjoyed dreading about Daniel and Rayn. I certainly enoyed writing them
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Thank you. That's exactly why I write
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Thank you. So sorry for the delay. There is a similarity between Daniel and Silver. Not that Silver has a mental impairment like Daniel but he has the same simplistic way of looking at the world, and the same wonder for all that he finds in it . It was a joy to write Daniel although the first place in my heart will always go to Silver. When changing my pseudonym for writing I chose Nephy Hart (Hart being Silver/Matthew's name) I'm up to book 5 in Enigma, although I've only published 3 so far. Silver just won't let go. This is the only series I have ever written
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You're more than welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed the ending. i think it was important for Daniel's development to show Rayn's faith in him and his own faith in himself There is no greater expression of love and trust than to share your life with a child (In a way Rayn's got two )
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I'm so sorry it's taken so long to say thank you for your review. Somehow I've stopped getting notifications. I'm really glad you emjooyed the story. It's scary to see how long it's been since I posted. I'd better get my act in gear and start another one soom
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Thank you. I think the epilogue was important because Daniel has been struggling throughout with what he'd been told he can't do and it was important to see just what he could achieve with encouragement. I think he will make a brilliant father
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I'm sorry I've taken so long to respond. For some reason I stopped getting noticiations. Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed. i'm very fond of Daniel and I was pleased to get to tell his story.
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I think Daniel would be amazing with children. He is very patient. He loved talking to the children at the Iron Age event. I'm not entirely sure about him being totally in charge of a child, but he could certainly be trusted to care for his own child with supervision. I also think he would be a brilliant teacher of young chilren. maybe that's something he would explore
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I'm so sorry for the delay. I stopped getting notificaations of reviews but I hope my thank you will still be of value even though it's a year late.
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I'm so sorry I'm so late in giving a response. For some reason I stopped getting notifications when there was a review so, a year late, thank you for your review!
