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I feel obligated to see the movie (due to the time I've spent playing the game), but I'm sure I'm going to find it rather amusing. Best comment I've seen on it is, "This is so unreal. That dude just mounted while falling."

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I never know how much input I should give when reviewing things in a community setting. Most of the time I just list things off the top of my head, so just take everything I say with a grain of salt because really, I don't have the credentials to back up what I say other than the fact that I have read a fair amount . That and I'm reviewing this as if this was a first chapter of a book as a whole. What I like about the story so far is that the characters have a lot of unique elements among them. The extremely jaded warlock who would rather cling to a semblance of normal before more change ensues, the play on 'puppy love' werewolf that has the loyalty of man's best friend, and a vegan vampire. The only thing I'd like to point out about this is that it felt a little rushed. Rather than feeling of world building, this first chapter felt more like a chapter of introductions. Think of it like a bottle of really good wine vs a tray of shots of liquor - they both get the job done, but the latter is more for the end result rather than enjoying the ride. Nitty-gritty stuff: Dialogue. Mmmm - descriptive beats vs dialogue tags and commas vs periods. I don't really want to get into this because it's not really my place since I'm not an/your editor or whatnot, but I'm pointing it out because maybe no one else has pointed it out before. Whenever I used to write stuff online, I cherished critiques that would help me become a better writer. But as a reviewer, I noticed that some would see such as negative criticism instead. So this is all I'm going to mention on this unless you further inquire. Overall, I hope you continue because I think the story has potential. I do enjoy reading gay theme fantasy ebooks, but just like here, they aren't overly abundant. Usually I'm more partial towards magic(k) and dragons, but this take on werewolves and vampires is intriguing enough to pursue further.

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Happy Birthday Steve

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!Johnny Boy! Happy Birthday to you Getting old like me too Hope you have fun this birthday Eat some cake and drink brew

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Thanks all for the birthday wishes! It was definitely the cherry on top of a good day and good year

This is like a real life version of those online driving games where you have to get the car from the starting parking spot and out of the parking lot (off the screen) without hitting anything... except in this there are no flying grocery carts, random skateboarders, or speeding ferraris. So, this was basically level one with no time limit and they still managed to ding that maroon car haha. I also find it amusing that the person in the minivan watched that go on for a full minute before getting that man to try and help navigate. Also kudos to that black car on getting out before also getting tapped lol.

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