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    Gabri’el had to hold Pasha back. He wrapped his arms around the feisty, impulsive angel and dropped his cheek to Pasha’s hair. “Easy,” Gabri’el murmured. “If we want answers we have to tread carefully.” “Well said,” the boy said, clapping again. “Don’t get complacent, boy,” Gabriel snarled. “I want answers and if I don’t get them, I’ll be the one going for your throat and this time I won’t stop until I choke the life out of you.” “Good luck with that,” the boy said, with a musical laugh. “Yo
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    Chapter 9

    Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 9

    Thank you ~I think this is something that all parents have to be careful about. There will always come a point where your children make decisions we would not have made for them. We have to let our fledglings fly even when we know they're going to fall, otherwise how will they learn? Our children can't live their lives for us and we must be careful not to live our lives through them.
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    Chapter 9

    Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 9

    I think Bonnie truly believes that she is trying to benefit her son. She believes that Alex has perverted her son and she will do anything to get Ksi out of his clutches. Also, everyone admits that the facilities she can offer are far better than anything Alex and his family can arrange. the thing with both Kai's parents is that they have tunnel vision. They have decided this is the best course of action for Kai and won't consider anyone else's point of view or feelings. Sad really
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    Chapter 9

    Nephylim posted new chapter in Recovery

    By the end of the week things were looking grim. It became less likely by the day that Kei was going to wake up. He wasn’t showing any signs of responding at all with the world around him and the fact he was getting back into cycles of wake and sleep and even making sounds like sighs and moans, didn’t help anyone at all. Life went on around him but he wasn’t aware of it…at least on the face of it. Jess left to do her exams but there was no chance of Alex doing the same, even though his family b
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    That was an interesting chapter. Not even going to try to name all the gay actors. I'm useless with trivia. I loved the end scene to bits. Mark is so adorable I want to sweep him off his feet, take him home and torture him for hours. Oops sorry. my evil side is coming out. It would be lovely of you to torture him a bit for me though in the meantime, I'm just loving the relationship between these two, Ben was being quite fatherly in the last scene.I thought. He's going to have to get over that.
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    As the boy said from the very first, Pasha is seeing only what he wants to see - Uzzy. Gabri'el is seeing something different. He's keeping his eyes very much on what he wants - Pasha, but is it because he has feelings for him and wants to keep him safe, or does he have other designs. He, at least, knows not to believe what's in front of his eyes but he's not very good at seeing with his heart yet, either.He's closer to the truth than Pasha is but they're both in for a big surprise. Sometimes things are exactly as they seem
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    Might be Next time we get to meet God. Maybe he has some answers.
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    You may have a point with the white haired boy. As for the rest...nothing is as it seems...except that some things are
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    You may have a point with the white haired boy. As for the rest...nothing is as it seems...except that some things are
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    All the tricks and deceptions have a purpose - to reveal a truth that would never otherwise have been revealed. As for the white haired boy. He's a slave but there are many kinds of slavery and many kinds of slaves
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    Pasha surged forward. “Wait,” Gabri’el hissed. “They’ve all been traps and illusions. There was something wrong in every room and there’s no reason to believe this one’s any different.” Pasha paused and looked up at Gabri’el, holding his eyes for a moment. There was something in them that sent a shiver through him and he found he couldn’t look away. Gabri’el opened his mouth as if he was going to say something, then closed it again. Pasha shivered, when Gabri’el touched his cheek, brushing his
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    Epilogue

    Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Epilogue

    Thank you. I'm really glad you enjoyed it
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    Epilogue

    Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Epilogue

    I had SUCH fun writing the story. I could let my evil side loose compltely and Adam was such an evil bastard he was awesome to write. I'm so glad you enjoyed in even when you were cringing
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    Chapter 12

    Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 12

    It's wonderful what you can overlook when you're not expecting it and focussing on something else. I watched a magic show recently when the magician asked the volunteer to keep watching the cards. They were so intent on doing that they didn't notice when the magician stuck the card to their forehead.
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    Chapter 11

    Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 11

    So sorry I missed all these comments. Adam is pure evil isn't he. I had SO much fun writing him, He's so twisted it's hard to keep up sometimes
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    Chapter 8

    Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 8

    thank you so much for your review. Don't worry it will get better soon...in a manner of speaking. Don't forget the title of the book
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    Chapter 8

    Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 8

    thank you so much, that's exactly what I want to hear. I get such a kick when something I write affects someone, no matter what the effect. What I want as a writer is to make people feel. Don't worry, the heartbreak doesn't last forever, or at least this heartbreak doesn't. Given the title of the story, I don't think I'm giving anything away to say that Kei will be back in commission, to some degree at some point. Just hang in there, like Alex
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    Chapter 8

    Nephylim posted new chapter in Recovery

    The snow was beautiful. At the front of the hospital the comings and goings of ambulances, visitors and everyone else had pretty much battered it into submission but here, in the enclosed hospital garden, it was another world. A few sets of footprints paraded around the perimeter but even they were half filled up with a fresh fall. The trees were bare apart from the snow and the sparkling crystals of the tiny snowflakes glittered and shone in the light of the many windows that peeped into it. A
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    well, next week's called Through The Looking Glass so yet more strangeness I'm loving letting loose my weirdness
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    aha!!
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    well, we all seem to be assuming the link Pasha can feel is with Uzzy
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    well, we all seem to be assuming the link Pasha can feel is with Uzzy
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    Well isn't that a turn up for the book. This is why you shouldn't get involved with famous people. When the shit hits the fan they're so far up their own arse the only shit they can smell is their own. Ben is acting like a spoiled brat. He went to Mark's convinced he'd gone to the press and wasn/'t prepared to listen to a word he said. That's not acceptable and Mark doesn't deserve that.
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    The Longest Week

    Nephylim commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in The Longest Week

    hot and sweet, just as I like it. I'm growing to totally adore Mark
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    Things are getting complicated. Mark had me with the colourful hair. I LOVE men with colourful hair Now Ben with his velvet voice. YES!! I agree with Ben, this is not going to be easy, but then love often isn't. I like the way this is unfolding
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