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Everyone is being very harsh and to be honest, i don't think they would be if they knew that everyone else was, if you know what i mean. in one way i don't blame alex. when your boyfriend it two hours late for a date, you give him an ultimatum and then he's half an hour late i think anyone is going to get pissed. however, maybe alex should have thought more about how out of character his behaviour is.
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Well, i don't know if you're going to cry or not but you're dead right that there's something going on under the surface that is going to shock the hell out of everyone, including Kei, when they find out. Thank you so much for the review
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He's having a terrible bad day and it's about to get worse. Alex isn't going to have a great time either. it's hard when everyone is down on you because of things you've done. it's worse when it's something you really can't help. Things will get worse before they get better, as they often do
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Well, Kei has been being very flaky lately and it's frustrating everyone. He's messing up assignments which could seriously affect Alex's grades and last time he was two hours late for a date. AND he forgot his sister's birthday. i think they're probably right to be frustrated with him but they were a little harsh and he's feeling very alone at the moment. He's going to be even more alone pretty soon and everyone is going to be eating craw
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“Kei…Kei. Wake up.” Kei cracked open his eyes and groaned. The light from the window stabbed into his head and hurt so much he could scream. Hadn’t he closed the bloody curtains? “Go away,” he moaned. “Well, I could,” the shadowy figure between himself and the window said in the voice of his room-mate, “but I don’t think you’d thank me if I did.” “What do you mean?” Kei dragged himself upright against the headboard and the shadowy figure resolved itself. It was, indeed, Paul his room-mate.
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what do you do when you think you're going to lose someone forever, then they come back changed?
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Chapter 34 Where Are You Going
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 34 Where Are You Going
Benji sometimes I wonder if you have psychic powers, or maybe you just know me too well We'll see what happens next week. Thank you, as always for your comments -
Chapter 34 Where Are You Going
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 34 Where Are You Going
I'm hoping my boys will tell me next week. i have an idea where this might be going and it's quite and interesting development -
Chapter 34 Where Are You Going
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 34 Where Are You Going
i know, weird isn't it. I did warn you. I think what happened with Gabri'el was that when Pasha and Uzzy joined forces to ressurrect him they transferred part of themselves into him thereby making a permanent connection. Who knows? I 'm a little nervous about the whole situation tell the truth as i have no idea where it's going -
Moving closer to each other Pasha and Uzzy joined hands, ready to unleash their power, then the angel stepped forward. “Gabri’el,” Uzzy gasped. Gabri’el smiled, then dropped to one knee, holding the sword, point down, in front of him. “My Lord,” he said. “What are you doing? Get up. What’s going on?” “The host is yours, My Lord. The Council has fallen and Eden is secured – for you.” “What? I don’t understand.” Gabri’el raised his head and smiled. “You gave me my life, Uzzy, and I give you
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Chapter 33 - The Night of Our Lives Part 2
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 33 - The Night of Our Lives Part 2
Almost, One more day. I'm writing the installment now and it's all gone weird -
hmm maybe, maybe not.
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Chapter 24 - What's Happening to Me?
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 24 - What's Happening to Me?
Together, Pasha and Uzzy can accomplish just about anything -
Chapter 18 Don't Leave Me
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 18 Don't Leave Me
Nope -
I think Uzzy has given Pasha a whole new dimension and vice versa. Either one of them would fight to the death for the other but there's a reason why Pasha, a mere mortal, can face off to one of the archangels
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Chapter 13 - Something Comes
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Something Comes
Fierro is adorable. He has his brief moment of glory but I'm going to have to fluff up his feathers again later, I think -
my angel is an angel no matter whether or not he is an angel. He he. Things will become clearer as the story progresses, honest
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Chapter 8 - Why Are You Doing This To Me
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Why Are You Doing This To Me
having been over to Nephy's World you'll appreciate that this story was written as part of my Wednesday flash fiction group and cannot be more than 1000 words long. It can sometimes be frustrating but certainly focuses the mind. thank you for your reviews. I'm really glad you're enjoying my stories. -
Chapter 2 - Meeting the Angel
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Meeting the Angel
Hehe. However, i have learned that things falling from the sky in the middle of thunder storms tend to be real trouble -
I love the idea of sex with tentacles. so many touches in so many places Thank you for sticking with the story, and all my stories. I get so excited when I get a review. There are so many people talking about Sys and Dee having a child I'm going to have tot hink about that for the future. The problem is way too many projects on the go at one time.
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The wait was unbearable. Dee tried to keep Luke occupied, but he was so much on edge that he couldn’t help but let some of it out and he found himself sniping at the little boy and becoming irritated with his constant frenetic energy. He realised that he was being unfair and, more than once he hugged Luke close and whispered apologies into his hair, realising that Luke was as worried about his father as he was. The hours crawled past interminably and the both slowly went out of their minds. Th
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