Nephylim
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“What do you mean? What happens with us? We go on. We learn. We live. We love. We become one as we were always meant to be.” Uzzy took Pasha’s hand and looked into his eye. “But we are not as we were. You know nothing but your earthly life. You have ties now that bind you to the earth, and I…. We have not won the war, Pasha, my love. We have won a battle only. A great battle it’s true but the real war is in Eden now. Micha’el is gone but the host is still there. I have an army to lead. “I ha
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Wacky Wednesday - Pulse Behind The Ga Crowd
Nephylim commented on Trebs's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Hehe. You're very sneaky, you know Thank you for making me sound a lot more interesting and fun than i really am. And for calling me young I'm your friend forever. Oh, and if anyone happens to see any of those hearses....!!! -
i know, I've noticed that I've missed a few of the chapters. i'll have to go back and edit. They've all got titles on the blog Gabri'el was an archangel. they are beings of vast power and vast conceit and arrogance. He was more than brought down to size. It will be interesting to see how he turns out.
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The beauty of writing this way is that I often have no idea where the story is going next. In actuality the remark at the end had no real meaning - until now. As everyone seems to think that remark is significant, i shall now make the remark significant. you've all responsible for whatever happens next.
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How strange that everyone has hooked onto that last comment. There's been an ending in many ways, isn't it natural Uzzy would want to know where they're going next. Or maybe the confession by Gabri'el made him think. or perhaps it's really nothing at all
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Oh Micha'el's gone, there's no doubt about that. Gone and good riddance. He was completely mad. and poor Gabri'el. I was always just a little sorry for him even when he was being a complete ass. Well, he's experienced death now so perhaps he'll be a little more sympathetic towards humanity.
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Passa’el was in agony. He writhed on the ground, oblivious to everything but the pain. It was far more than he would have had just from falling on his back in the dust. What did it mean? Oh God, what did it mean? Fighting the pain he dragged himself to his knees. He was surrounded by people who were trying to help him. He wanted to scream at them. All he cared about was Uzzi’el. What was happening to him? Had Micha’el pulled the trigger before Uzzi’el blasted him? Where was the pain coming from?
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Luke can tend to give the wrong impression. Although his kind grow faster than humans and mature much more quickly he's still very young, only seven. Dee is very focused on Sys and isn't a natural dad. He does love Luke very much though and he will start treating him more like a child when he realises how much everything has taken out of him.
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Luke can tend to give the wrong impression. Although his kind grow faster than humans and mature much more quickly he's still very young, only seven. Dee is very focused on Sys and isn't a natural dad. He does love Luke very much though and he will start treating him more like a child when he realises how much everything has taken out of him.
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Luke can tend to give the wrong impression. Although his kind grow faster than humans and mature much more quickly he's still very young, only seven. Dee is very focused on Sys and isn't a natural dad. He does love Luke very much though and he will start treating him more like a child when he realises how much everything has taken out of him.
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Luke can tend to give the wrong impression. Although his kind grow faster than humans and mature much more quickly he's still very young, only seven. Dee is very focused on Sys and isn't a natural dad. He does love Luke very much though and he will start treating him more like a child when he realises how much everything has taken out of him.
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I can't remember how far we are into the story and whether Sys has made his decision about whether to go back to his home planet yet but he definitely makes the right one :)People are strange and reptilian aliens are just as strange as humans. Personally I don't see the point in rebelling against a restrictive regime to them become even more restrictive but it happens all the time. It's called hypocrisy and it's rife. I couldn't say no to Luke personally. He's the cutest kid EVER. Can you just imagine him, with his little crest standing up and his eyes flashing, standing with his hands on his hips and growling. He's so cute. Mind you wouldn't want to be on the wrong end of one of his arrows or his knife. Thanks hun.
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as if I could kill sys, he's adorable and i love him soooo much. What would luke do without him. poor kid's already had to cope with the flight, the attack and seeing both his dads unconscious for two days. poor little thing. Things can only get better from here... maybe
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“Dee. Dee?” Someone was shaking him, and he didn’t want to wake up. At first he couldn’t remember why he didn’t want to wake up, but the feeling was really, really strong and he held on to unconsciousness as hard and as long as he could. “Dee, wake up. I know you can hear me. Wake up… pleasse.” It was the hiss that did it. The hiss made him think of Sys, and, although his lips began to curve into a smile, the memory of what had happened in the last minutes before he passed out slammed into hi
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Thank you. I like weird endings. I like to leave a little to the imagination of the readers so they can make up their own mind as to what actually happened and the chat seemed a good way of imparting all the important information without preaching
