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Not Done Yet - 8. How It's Supposed To Be

This chapter contains all new material, posted October 2015.

How It’s Supposed to Be

Second period was chemistry class, and Casey was late for the first day of class. As he rounded the corner in the hall, the bell rang. The classroom door was just ahead of him as he scurried along to get inside ASAP. If he weren’t too late, it would take a hard-hearted teacher to make a big deal of it. Just as he reached the door, a teacher stepped into the hall to close it. Wide-eyed, Casey barely stopped before plowing right into him. Casey stood five foot ten, and towered over the man in front of him.

“Oh, good, the first example for the semester. Come along, young man, come inside.” Walking into the room, followed by Casey, the teacher addressed the class. “Good morning, everyone. My name is Matthew Cullen, and I’ll be your instructor for Chemistry One.” He stopped and spotted Casey in a seat near the center of the room. He waved for Casey to stand. “And you, sir, what is your name?”

“Casey Donovan, sir.”

Mr. Cullen was a little less than average height, but under the white dress shirt and casual slacks, he was fit, and wore his clothes well. His glasses were rimless, with rectangular lenses, and his hair was medium length, brown, and well kept. He moved and spoke confidently, and his focus was now all on Casey.

“Let us start at the beginning, shall we? Mr. Donovan did not arrive before the beginning of class, so on a normal class day, you would be shortchanged on classroom instruction while we waited for him, or distracted when he burst into the classroom. Mr. Donovan, why were you late this morning, please?”

“I’m sorry, sir, I couldn’t find your classroom. I turned the wrong direction in the hallway.”

“Can you remember how to get here in the future, Mr. Donovan? I mean, now that you’ve found us this once?”

“I think so, sir, but I’ll make sure before the next class.”

Mr. Cullen looked at Casey for a second, and said, “Thank you, Mr. Donovan. You may sit down. Class, please show your classmates and me the courtesy of arriving on time. I also ask that you pay attention, or at the least, don’t disrupt the class. This will become more important when we go into the lab. Please believe me – your personal safety is of great concern, and the laboratory is a serious place, full of wonders and hazards, both. I wouldn’t want you to miss the one, or suffer the other.”

Walking back to his desk, the teacher turned around, pointed at the student in the back right corner of the class. “Beginning with you, miss, please stand and introduce yourself to the class.”

When the girl stood, Casey took note, and picked up his pencil. She had beautiful skin and bright eyes, and spoke clearly, so all could hear. When she spoke, he wrote down the name, Sara Conner. When she sat, she glanced his way, and Casey caught the cornflower blue of her eyes and a nice smile, and he admired the dark hair she pulled behind her shoulders.

Casey set down his pen and quietly said to himself, “I think I found a lab partner.”

*

“I like Coach Robertson. He called me into his office, and asked me about trying out for baseball.” The light turned green, and Casey looked both ways before he took his foot off the brake.

“How do you feel about that?” Jim scanned the road. Casey thought he was doing OK behind the wheel, but being a new driver, a second set of eyes on the traffic was welcome.

“I love baseball, but I never stayed in one place long enough to be on a team.” They slowed and pulled alongside the curb. Casey unbuckled his seat belt, but Jim sat still in his seat, gazing at the boy next to him.

“And?”

“Tryouts are next month. After that, practice starts in a week, every night. They won’t get serious until positions are assigned.” Casey started to look a little worried, while Jim kept his eyes on him.

“Uh-huh?”

“Jim?”

“Casey?”

“Jim!”

“Casey!”

“Is it alright?!”

“Is what alright? The school doesn’t need my permission to have tryouts and practice.” Jim’s eyes were starting to glitter, while he played dumb. The boy put his hands on the steering wheel, and slowly banged his head against the horn. It never seemed to get any easier, but in a way, he liked this game. Casey had never known an adult who was anywhere near as playful as Jim. The funny thing was, though, he always learned something from these exchanges. Right then, he realized he’d never answered Jim’s question directly – how did he feel about trying out for the team?

Casey took a deep breath and let it out. He looked at Jim, and they both started to grin. He began to laugh as he said, “Jim, may I try out for the baseball team? I really want to.”

Jim reached up and cupped the back of Casey’s neck, and gently shook the kid back and forth a couple of times, while they both laughed. “Can you get me tickets to your games? Carol’s always after me to take her out, and I’d like to do something besides going to a movie in Austin.”

“I may have to get ‘em off a scalper, but I’m pretty sure I can make it happen.”

“Scalpers? In Bastrop? For a high school baseball game? This town’s gettin’ too big. Football, I can understand; this IS Texas. But baseball?” Jim unbuckled his seat belt and looked at Casey ‘til he couldn’t keep a straight face anymore. “Sure. Let’s talk about it some more when you know more, K? Now, c’mon, let’s get the cake and get home.”

Thanks, KC.
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James' respect for life, especially while hunting, shows a maturity not always seen, even in adults. Him standing up to his grandfather on Caseys behalf shows a loyalty to friendship that is admirable. You have created, with James, a very impressive young man. Kudos.

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I agree that his respect for the lives of the animals is special and probably fostered by his mom and his Native American culture. It's a shame the grandfather is acting like he is. But why get Casey's fines paid if he disliked the kid so much? I am wondering if james and casey are even talking much. Did things get better after James' visit? Overall good chapter. thanks for the heads up it was posted!

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I don't hunt, but it's a life goal. I hope that my perspective on life and hunting is the same as James'. This was a great chapter. It showed us the depth of the friendship between Sam and James and it showed us how thoughtful and caring James is. Thank you for writing it. This one is my favorite so far.

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Great chapter. James is a remarkable boy who is going to be a man his mom is proud of. Heck I'm proud of him. I can't wait to find out how things will go between him and Casey, once they get over this rough patch. Thank you.

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I really do like James and I hope he and Casey can get back to where they were. Casey needs James and I really think James needs Casey.

Thank you for a wonderful chapter.

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James has talent, a caring heart and an independent streak. Sammy didn't back down either in asking the hard question: (Would there be any pie left for James?)

More please.

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On 02/18/2015 10:22 AM, LitLover said:
James' respect for life, especially while hunting, shows a maturity not always seen, even in adults. Him standing up to his grandfather on Caseys behalf shows a loyalty to friendship that is admirable. You have created, with James, a very impressive young man. Kudos.
I like James a lot. He's the friend we all wish we'd had growing up.
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I may be dense because I'm confused about the trouble James told Sam that he and Casey got into after Casey's dipshit father was arrested. I know Casey accidentally didn't turn off the cooking stove James lent him, thereby starting the house fire. Is that the trouble James was talking about? And why was James in trouble? For lending the stove to Casey? Why on earth would James have been sent to juvie?

 

Other than that - terrific chapter, Rusty! :) I give James a lot of credit; I could never hunt and kill an animal. I get upset when I see roadkill. :P I love that he's so sensitive. And kudos to him for sticking up for Casey in front of his grandfather His grandfather seems very judgmental. Why would he think Casey is anything like his loser father?

 

Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

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On 02/18/2015 10:26 AM, Cannd said:
I agree that his respect for the lives of the animals is special and probably fostered by his mom and his Native American culture. It's a shame the grandfather is acting like he is. But why get Casey's fines paid if he disliked the kid so much? I am wondering if james and casey are even talking much. Did things get better after James' visit? Overall good chapter. thanks for the heads up it was posted!
It's not just respect for life, it's existence. Remember, James is friends with lots of people, like Mr. Reeves and the Fishers, who have special relationships with nature.

 

I see James as a throwback to previous generations, before his granddad, when folks lived in harmony with the land.

 

Old folks get cranky when they don't get their way, especially when they're not in good health.

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On 02/18/2015 10:55 AM, Rebelghost85 said:
I don't hunt, but it's a life goal. I hope that my perspective on life and hunting is the same as James'. This was a great chapter. It showed us the depth of the friendship between Sam and James and it showed us how thoughtful and caring James is. Thank you for writing it. This one is my favorite so far.
:)
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On 02/18/2015 11:02 AM, Defiance19 said:
Great chapter. James is a remarkable boy who is going to be a man his mom is proud of. Heck I'm proud of him. I can't wait to find out how things will go between him and Casey, once they get over this rough patch. Thank you.
Thanks for reading and commenting.

 

At the risk of repeating myself, James is why I started this whole story, but he's not without his flaws.

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On 02/18/2015 11:47 AM, Gene63 said:
I really do like James and I hope he and Casey can get back to where they were. Casey needs James and I really think James needs Casey.

Thank you for a wonderful chapter.

Things don't always turn out the way we think they will or should. Sometimes, they go wrong. Sometimes, they're pulled off track. Sometimes, they work out totally different.

 

But ya know, it's Not Done Yet.

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On 02/18/2015 11:48 AM, Daddydavek said:
James has talent, a caring heart and an independent streak. Sammy didn't back down either in asking the hard question: (Would there be any pie left for James?)

More please.

Independent is ONE word for him. It's a pretty good word, too.

 

Guess I'd better get back to writing, huh?

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On 02/18/2015 01:22 PM, Lisa said:
I may be dense because I'm confused about the trouble James told Sam that he and Casey got into after Casey's dipshit father was arrested. I know Casey accidentally didn't turn off the cooking stove James lent him, thereby starting the house fire. Is that the trouble James was talking about? And why was James in trouble? For lending the stove to Casey? Why on earth would James have been sent to juvie?

 

Other than that - terrific chapter, Rusty! :) I give James a lot of credit; I could never hunt and kill an animal. I get upset when I see roadkill. :P I love that he's so sensitive. And kudos to him for sticking up for Casey in front of his grandfather His grandfather seems very judgmental. Why would he think Casey is anything like his loser father?

 

Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

That's part of the trouble. Not telling anyone about Casey's situation is another, as well as lending him the stove.

 

Old folks get very fixed ideas about bad blood. "No good ever came from any child of ____." I've heard that kind of stuff all my life. Usually from old folks. Younger ones are more circumspect, but still harbor lots of prejudices. People in insular communities are even more closed-minded.

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You tell a great story and the characters have good depth which makes for a very enjoyable read.

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On 02/18/2015 02:59 PM, Dathi said:
You tell a great story and the characters have good depth which makes for a very enjoyable read.
Thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
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On 02/18/2015 05:28 PM, jamessavik said:
With a name like James, he sort of had to be awesome. :)
Had to
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I am really liking James, but then I already did. Of course not to say I don't like Sam & Casey too. They are all great characters. I am glad that James stood up to his Grandfather, but also glad he has decided to check on him. Sure they had a disagreement, but nothing so awful happened that they should not care for each other anymore.

I also had the same counfusion that Lisa did, and am glad that I read your reply to her review first.

This feels so original I am very impressed. I don't see anything else like this. I'm enjoying very much.

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On 02/18/2015 11:31 PM, sammiam said:
I am really liking James, but then I already did. Of course not to say I don't like Sam & Casey too. They are all great characters. I am glad that James stood up to his Grandfather, but also glad he has decided to check on him. Sure they had a disagreement, but nothing so awful happened that they should not care for each other anymore.

I also had the same counfusion that Lisa did, and am glad that I read your reply to her review first.

This feels so original I am very impressed. I don't see anything else like this. I'm enjoying very much.

Thank you very much for the review. Thanks, especially, for the one word, original.

 

I'm going to take another look at the section that confused you and Lisa, and see what I could have done to make things more clear, or write around the issues. When two people have a similar comment, I'd be a fool not to take it to heart.

 

That's the problem with writing out of order, and not giving it all to the editor at the same time. That's my impatience coming out.

 

I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

 

Thanks for helping me develop my storytelling.

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I haven't hunted in a while, but it's always a good skill to have. James is such an old soul. It feel like he was born in the wrong century. I could see him running wild and barefoot across the west. I like getting to see more of Sam but really miss the James and Casey storyline. great chapter, looking for more :)

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On 02/23/2015 09:21 AM, K.C. said:
I haven't hunted in a while, but it's always a good skill to have. James is such an old soul. It feel like he was born in the wrong century. I could see him running wild and barefoot across the west. I like getting to see more of Sam but really miss the James and Casey storyline. great chapter, looking for more :)
I think I wrote before that I see James as a throwback, who understands the value of things others don't notice anymore. Luckily, he lives some place where he has access to nature. I don't think he would thrive in the city.

 

You'll probably see more of Casey. And others. As long as you keep reading.

 

It's Not Done Yet.

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With a character like James in your head, I can see why you wanted/needed to write his story.

Seeing how different James is from his grandfather shows that offsprings not necessarily have to be like their ancestors.

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