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The Sock Drawer - 24. The Concavation/The Affection Absence

The Concavation

/The Affection Absence

 

A hollow orgasm in bed

with morning birds from the left

then a foul taste in his throat

was the sole event that led

him to wake, his soul bereft

of all but the old load.

He was not alone but he was

by himself with shades in his mind

that were imprints of a man

who never seems as dangerous

as what he is, an air god, kind

in a way and always cold.

In a narrow fold

of reality, he thinks

there must be room to hold

all the precious little things

that come with us, as we should be

and with a real love, thinks he.

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The first thought revolves around that ghost again – the 'shades in his mind' – which puts us back into Blood Gem territory.

 

Secondly, as a guy, it seems profoundly sad that an orgasm would be un-felt, or basically unlived. The opening of this poem, with the climax being akin to some passionless bodily function like a sneeze, is striking poetic metaphor. It works really well here.

On 02/06/2016 12:27 PM, AC Benus said:

The first thought revolves around that ghost again – the 'shades in his mind' – which puts us back into Blood Gem territory.

 

Secondly, as a guy, it seems profoundly sad that an orgasm would be un-felt, or basically unlived. The opening of this poem, with the climax being akin to some passionless bodily function like a sneeze, is striking poetic metaphor. It works really well here.

Thank you and you're perfectly right.

And thank you for the insightful review.

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