Down a Darkened Path

I've thoroughly enjoyed reading this touching and moving story.  Troy and Jayden are beautifully rounded, engaging, and interesting characters that I couldn't help but care about.  I'm not going to spoil it if you haven't already read it, but it's a bumpy ride at times, which just seems to get more tense as things go on.  Anyway, you'll see for yourself in the end, because you should definitely need read this.  The only down side is that it just isn't long enough, having left me wanting more, although that's hardly a criticsm.

Fantastic story, very well written. The way the writer expresses characters feelings and relationships really allows the reader to connect with the characters. The shifts in the story are done very well and I would recommend this story to others. Ending was done beautifully, leaving you to want more.

I highly recommend this well written story. There are parts of this story that are unpleasant, but they were handled carefully. The characters are believable, and I quickly came to care about them. The dialogue and the feelings of the characters seemed realistic. Now that all the chapters are available, this will be one of those hard to put down kind of stories. Thanks to Ronyx for sharing this story.

Another fantastic story from Ron. Troy and Jayden find each other after coming together through different, but difficult circumstances for both of them.