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About JeffreyL

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    Male
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    Still figuring it out
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    Washington State
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    Baking, books, theater, travel.

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  1. JeffreyL

    The First Night of Spring

    Great short story! I really enjoyed Dog Rose and his time with Ryan. What a nice way to end a life of abuse. Thanks.
  2. JeffreyL

    Chapter 11

    The sexual tension between the two is palpable! Your writing has done a great job of conveying it! I am anxious to read about the tattoo and looking forward to reading about some red hot sex! Thanks.
  3. JeffreyL

    Epilogue

    An unlikely beginning and an interesting middle lead to a happy ending! Great story! I really liked Chris and Josh, and Jason was a nice addition at the end! I especially appreciated the epilogue. You did a good job wrapping things up. I feel I know the general direction life is taking the family, but you left room for me to imagine how things will happen. Thanks.
  4. JeffreyL

    Chapter 33

    From beginning to end this was a great adventure! Characters, dialogue, and descriptions were all first rate! Thank you for writing and sharing this story.
  5. JeffreyL

    Chapter 14

    I am slowly catching up. As you reveal more information, it just creates more questions. I am enjoying the romance between Paul and Corbin and the growing presence of Luca and his family. I can't wait to see what's next! Thanks.
  6. JeffreyL

    Getting to Know You

    Thanks for creating these wonderful characters and for telling their story! Your writing is terrific! Thanks, Tim.
  7. JeffreyL

    11:50 From Seattle

    To the best of my knowledge, I don't know anyone who is transgender. Your story brought up several things I'd never thought of, and you did it with two really great characters. Your portrayal of, and dialogue for both felt very real and was done with a great deal of sensitivity. Thank you.
  8. JeffreyL

    Chapter 1

    You did a great job setting up the story! Looks like it will be another one of your hard to put down (or maybe wait for the next installment) stories. Thanks.
  9. JeffreyL

    AP Chapter 24

    I have enjoyed reading many of your stories, but I think this is one of my favorites. Although I am a "city boy," my grandfather and many earlier relatives were farmers. It was interesting to read about the hard work and determination needed to build a successful farm from nothing. I assume this is a realistic portrait of Australian settlers, and I wondered if these characters were based on your relatives? Thanks for sharing this wonderful story.
  10. JeffreyL

    Chapter 34

    Great dialogue! I love the conversations you write! Whether talking or thinking, I like the voice you've given Drew; the twins and Jay, too, but especially Drew. Thanks.
  11. JeffreyL

    Chapter 8

    This chapter was more than OK, as many readers said in their responses. It was just right. And isn't Ian a smooth talker! Thanks.
  12. JeffreyL

    Chapter 7

    Great conversation at dinner! What a clever way to get them to share information! Not all credit goes to Ian. That writer deserves some too. Thanks.
  13. JeffreyL

    Chapter 7

    I got a little behind and am playing catch up. I continue to enjoy the boys, their families, and friends! It is great to see things going well for DJ. I am excited to see how all the relationships are growing. I keep expecting some conflict sometime soon, but I hope I am wrong. DJ has already had more conflict than a kid deserves. Great story! Thanks.
  14. JeffreyL

    Lyrics Poetry Prompt

    Your poems are very clever! I especially liked the one about shopping. Thanks.
  15. JeffreyL

    Chapter 3

    I enjoy reading about how DJ is growing with all the opportunities Doug is providing. It is fun to see how he reacts to new experiences. You have written some interesting supporting characters. I'm anxious to see how DJ and Jamie get along. Thanks.
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