-
Posts
5,994 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Current Mood
-
No Mood Set
Story Reviews
- Rank: #0
- Total: 47
Comments
- Rank: #0
- Total: 2,987
Favorite Genres
-
Favorite Genre
None
-
Second Favorite Genre
None
-
Third Favorite Genre
None
-
Favorite Genres
Fantasy
Mystery
Romance
Sci-Fi
Profile Information
-
Location
Washington State
-
Interests
Baking, books, theater, travel.
JeffreyL's Achievements
-
OMG! I am on pins and needles!! I have loved these characters for a long time. I first read about Will and Andrew’s earlier years on CRVboy. I don’t know how many times I’ve read that collection of stories, but it is several. Recently, I came across these later stories, and I’ve loved them just as much. I do want to know if you’re a student of Canadian government and politics, or if you’re a clever and excellent writer. Or all of the above! I’m not Canadian or a student of government, and I marvel at the detail if the political maneuvering you write about! Thank you for writing more about these beloved characters, and curse you for putting them through the wringer while I sit on the edge of my seat! ❤️😵💫
-
Add one chapter and a bunch of new details come out! Steven is complex and so much more than just a class clown. Looks like his relationship with Kenny has taken a step forward. You've raised the bar on the intrigued level for me! Thanks.
-
Steve and Kenny are a mismatched pair to draw to. At this point, I find Steve annoying, like a lot of other characters do. Kenny needs to loosen up a bit. I am curious to see how you bring them together. At least I assume that's your plan. As usual good writing and dialog! Thanks.
-
I came to this story story in a roundabout way. Having enjoyed some of your other stories, I decided to give it a try. Off to a good start! Danny and company are interesting characters, and I think I'll enjoy getting to know them. Thanks.
-
I almost passed this by as I was looking for the next story to read. Something piqued my curiosity and I stopped and read. I'm glad I did! This was well written and ended in such a touching way. It is a perfect example of how a short story should work. I got the whole picture in not a lot of words, and nothing is missing. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece of writing.
- 22 comments
-
- 11
-
-
-
This story started a little slow for me. I think because it took awhile to wrap my head around this complex, convoluted world. I quickly came to wait impatiently for the next chapter. I love Hugo and Alec, and I will be starting part 2 of their story as soon as I finish this. I highly recommend this adventure! A most satisfying read. Thank you, Topher.
-
I read the first stanza, and I knew right away what this poem was about. I was very interested to see how you expressed things because I have been "guilty" of being this way several times in my life. Great imagery, good word choice, and a touch of sadness made this a wonderful poem. ❤ I would say it's typical of your work: insightful and food for thought. Thanks for sharing, Tim.
-
I can't remember how many times I've read Will Carter's stories on crvboy. I was so excited to find this new-for-me story on GA! I know little about business, politics, or secret services, but the detail and careful planning of your stories amazes and intrigues me. Add to that your engaging characters and realistic dialog and you have a well- crafted story. Thank you for sharing this with us. I look forward to reading more. Jeff
-
The beginning of Gabe's story is interesting, and he is an engaging character. His adventure with the strange man is about to start. I'm looking forward to reading more! Thanks.
-
This story has an intriguing beginning. I wonder how long it will take Wojciech to figure out what's happening? And will find out earlier or learn as he does. I don't know how to pronounce Polish names. Would you please write our hero's name phonetically one time? Looking forward to more! Thanks.
-
Thank you Wayne! I don't know if this is the second or third reading, but I love the good feeling I get from reading your Camp Refuge stories! I'd like to rent a cabin when one becomes available.
-
I have done some writing in my past, so I understand the lack of confidence a writer can feel about their work. For most of my life I have been a reader. As a teacher I did critiquing of others' writing. I am here to tell you, Tim, you have no reason to doubt your writing skills. I have enjoyed all of your stories and poems. I always enjoy seeing you've posted something new. Keep up the good work!
-
I'm not certain how many times I have read the Camp Refuge series. Sometimes all in order; other times a single story. As I've said before I would love to visit there sometime. There are too many wonderful characters to pick a favorite, although Elias would win for this story if I was forced to choose. Once again this story fills my heart with love. Thank you, Wayne.
-
Greetings and Salutations! Hey Wayne. I was in between stories and came across this one. It has been some time since I read it. I wanted to let you know I enjoyed it as much as I did before! Your writing is so readable, and your characters really draw the reader in! Thank you.
-
I really like how this story filled in some of the blanks to Killian's story. Very enjoyable! Thanks.
