JeffreyL

This was a great chapter! I really enjoyed meeting Mason's parents, and I hope we get to learn more about them later in the story. I am glad Mason told Vincent about their bond. Now that they have passed that hurdle, we can get on to the next part of their adventure! Thanks, and congratulations on wedding!

Thanks for sharing this enjoyable story! I liked the message about changing your lifestyle to make your life better (and probably longer). As I said near the beginning of this story, I liked the fact that it is about older gay men.

That was quite a start to this story! I am glad you are sharing another story about older gay men. I am excited to read more! Thanks.

You are a terrific writer, and this chapter really shows your ability! Pacing was first rate! You just kept sucking us in. You created a lot of tension for your readers, and caused a lot of questions to be asked. I rather liked that you did not sugar coat the werewolf fight, even though I am not much of a blood and guts kinda guy. Sawyer can't die, so I can't wait to see how you resolve this dilemma. Love Sawyer and Jimmy, and their story! Thanks.

It has been a lot of fun spending time with Will and Liam, and all their family and friends! You created a terrific group of characters, and I hope you will have another story about their lives sometime. Thanks.

Thank you for creating Jim! He is a wonderful character, and I loved his story! I am certain there are people like Jim in the world who are helping others like Jim does. Too bad there aren't more. I also loved all the boys! They and Jim's parents were wonderful supporting characters!

This is a wonderful story, and Dan is a terrific character! I must agree with Buz. There is scope here for a longer story. I have to add that although I would love more, you did not short change your characters' development or dialogue. Well-written and most enjoyable! Thanks.

The good thing about finding a new story later in the game is getting to read a bunch of chapters without having to wait for the next one. You have another story about kindness to others, and it supports my belief that karma is real. What goes around, comes around. Or if you like Biblical, as you sow so shall you reap. I love Jim and the boys! I am excited to see how things go with the "second generation" of boys. Thanks.

It is a lot of fun to meet up with this wonderful family as they star off on their European adventure! I enjoyed the first story so much, I look forward to reading this continuation! Thanks.

Thank you for sharing your poetry once again. I paints pictures for me that remind me of what I have seen on TV. Thanks also for your commitment to fighting fires, trying to keep the rest of us safe. I live in Washington State and one vacation visited the smokejumper base near Winthrop. I highly recommend a visit if anyone is interested and in the area.

I am a bit sad to see your good story come to an end. On the plus side I am certain that you have another story to share with us! This ending was perfect for Jeff's story! Thanks for sharing.

I hope this new adventure for Crow, living his own life, works out as he hopes it will. I am disappointed Barghast could not tell Crow his true feelings. I think if Crow had stayed, Barghast could have helped him heal. I love these two characters, and I am curious about what will happen to them next. Thanks.

In this feel-good story Alan decides to make some big changes in his life. The interesting part is that he is somewhere in his middle years. He leaves New York to move to a small town. There he builds his dream home , falls in love, befriends some neighbor children, and creates a family. I have enjoyed other stories by cljobe, and this is another one I definitely recommend.

Thanks for another feel-good story! I loved the way Alan totally changed his life in middle age. I also loved the way he used his wealth to make other lives better. His relationship with Cody and the boys flourished with the love and caring they shared. Thanks.

This is a beautiful little story. You created great characters that we got to know with a few words and their excellent dialogue! Your pacing and descriptions really added to the story. Thanks for sharing.