JeffreyL

Hello Quinn. I was thinking about this story the other day, and I decided to look it up and reread it. I could have copied and pasted my last comment (see above) and it would work. Great characters and dialogue, a very readable writing style, and a wonderful beginning romance all make this a good story! I hope this finds you well, and I fervently hope you will pick up this story and finish it one day. I'll check back from time to time. Jeff

Hello again Tim. It is a bit past my bedtime, but I couldn't stop until I got to the end. This is my second reading, and I enjoyed as much as I did the first time! Once again your characters and dialog made the story so real! These are people I would like to know. I think I may need to read "Changes" tomorrow. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story!

Hey Tim! I was looking for a story on GA and came across your story list. I remembered this tale number two of Don and Louis, but I couldn't remember details. So I decided to read it again. Chapter one opened a window in my head, and I thought about how much I had enjoyed these characters! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story! Thanks.

I am guardedly optimistic that Felicity has taken her first step toward independence. Maybe she can confide in Andy and Adam and get their assistance. Oliver has gone way past any chance at redemption. Maybe CincyKris and drsawzall have the right idea. There are lots of chances for an untimely accident in an English home. Just saying... Thanks.

This latest segment of CJ's life is as entertaining as the rest! Your hallmark interesting characters and great dialog make each chapter a pleasure to read! Thanks.

Another good chapter! A big dose of your amazing dialog with a little history lesson thrown in. I especially enjoy the camaraderie when CJ and Owen get together with their friends! I think that's one of the reasons they are such appealing characters! Thanks.

Nice idea, taking the lords a leaping to a charity horse event! I have two cousins who are horse women and often ride in horse shows. That brought it a little closer to home for me! Thanks.

This short was a lot of fun! You created a great visual! It made me think of "Hey, Big Spender" from Sweet Charity, for no specific reason. In spite of the many people who have sung/interpreted this Christmas classic, you came up with a very clever, original take on the lyrics! The bonus was the lyrics shared by drsawzall! I had never heard them, and they made me laugh some more! Thanks.

What a wonderful story! It had so many elements I enjoy: magic creatures, timid lovers, swans, snow. I was not expecting the plot to go in a fairy tale direction, but I loved it and the surprise reveal! Thanks and Merry Christmas!

This was a fun story! I have no personal experience with geese, but their reputation does proceed them. And there is no sucker bigger than a favorite uncle! 😆 Thanks.

Hey Cole! Tate was very clever in the way he reminded Damien why he loved Tate! You were also very clever the way you put this story together! I was amused by the way Donovan's friends seemed to take Tate's side! I loved Donovan's "labors" and all the references to Hercules and his labors. I suspected a puzzle ring, but like Clancy59 I kept picturing a straight wire and not a circle. Extra points for a great ending! Thanks and Merry Christmas!

For a first meeting, Eric did pretty well! I hope he and Rob can develope a friendship, and Rob becomes a gentle guide to the life of a gay man for Eric. Thanks.

Ah, my beloved curmudgeon, I am a little behind, but planning to be caught up by the end of today. Thank you for finally getting up the gumption to call Rob. I can't wait to read about the two of you meeting in person. And thanks to you Northie for sharing this wonderful story!

I see lots of possibilities for how this will move forward. Your characters are interesting. I look forward to finding out more about their pasts. Thanks.

As I have said many times, it is great to spend some time with CJ, Owen, and their friend and family (and the occasional "bad guy"). I have never had much interest in visiting Mexico City. I may have to change my mind. It's that travel agent coming out in you that brings out the wanderlust in me. 😉 I am curious to read more about CJ's computers in schools project. Thanks.