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    63
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    Washington State
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    Baking, books, theater, travel.

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  1. JeffreyL

    Agitato

    Three cheers for Marta and her quick thinking! I'm certain she was as unhappy as Gus, or more, being dragged away from a fun summer and a new boyfriend. I loved Rick's phone call with Irene! He is showing another growth spurt mentally. Making quick decisions and talking down his insecurities! His other great conversation was the one with his dad in his head! All this shows the terrific writing you've been doing on this story, but the award winner was your description of the drive to and in Chicago and the hunt for Gus in the symphony hall! You absolutely nailed the tension and frustration! An
  2. JeffreyL

    Turtle Trouble

    I love these stories! They are a departure from your usual stories, but once again characters and dialogue shine! The turtles are a big bonus! I have seen the newly hatched babies and their run to the sea on TV. Seeing them in real life is on my bucket list! I am wondering if hatching happens at a certain time of year and what the weather is like for tourists at that time. When you find your illustrator and get ready to publish, you might consider a page of turtle facts at the end to supplement the information in the story. Thanks Carlos. Nicely done!
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    Chapter 12

    Eddie has my heart! I feel badly when he starts in to a panic attack. He seems to want to do well, and he has moments when he is quite perceptive. I wonder if Dr. Doyle can help him with his memory and his low sense of self-worth. Thanks.
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    Chapter 6

    What a great afternoon in the park! Ben and Ryan are good together. The conversations seemed real. No fuckboy attitudes. I am anxious to see where this goes for them. And we need to solve the mystery of the old VW. Thanks.
  5. This was a great chapter! The boys' day together was perfect; very romantic and sensual! It feels like the end of the story, but since it is labeled part one, it must just be the end of Japan. So what's next? Maybe an interlude and then Turkey? And more romantic adventures for Alex!? I am really enjoying this story! Thanks.
  6. JeffreyL

    Soulmate

    This is a wonderful poem, Tim! You have captured and put into words that joy of being one with another person! Reader1810 is spot on! "Mad skills our Tim has!" Ask Michael to give you a hug from me. Thanks.
  7. JeffreyL

    Laurestine

    Thanks for the message about this new story! I had somehow missed it. I am now caught up, and a little confused about relations and titles. I may do a little rereading to sort things. I do like Michael a lot, and I am pretty sure I will enjoy his story! Thanks.
  8. It is always a pleasure to read another chapter in the Abello universe! I am enjoying watching Ritch grow into a responsible adult and leader. Since I was never in the military, I have learned a lot about a world I know little about. Thanks.
  9. JeffreyL

    Chapter 7

    Hooray a date for Justin!! Now let's hope Connor turns out to be a good guy. Thanks.
  10. JeffreyL

    Risoluto

    I have enjoyed reading this story, and I love the way things have progressed! I liked Rick from the beginning! It is great to see him becoming the person he was meant to be! Now to get through Zoltan's meddling and figure out what HEA with Gus looks like! Thanks.
  11. JeffreyL

    Chapter 7

    This was a fun story to read! Thanks.
  12. JeffreyL

    Chapter 12

    This epilogue was a nice wrap-up to "Cabin Boys." You gave us enough bits and pieces that a follow up story is probably not necessary, but if one appears, I know I'll read it! Thanks for another heartwarming story!
  13. JeffreyL

    Chapter 9

    You have done an amazing job bringing Ed to life! I am curious to know what helped you write his thought process and dialogue. Although he sounds a bit nuts, his thought process seems logical. I wish his mom would stop calling him "stupid dodo." On some level that must hurt. I am loving Ed, and hope someone can help him get things sorted. Thanks.
  14. JeffreyL

    The Talisman

    I really like Lothar, and Edwin is growing on me. This is an interesting place you've created. I like the twist you've added to the angel/demon mythology! So far I have a lot of questions and not many answers. I am looking forward to following Edwin's adventures with Lothar and finding answers along the way. Thanks.
  15. JeffreyL

    Subito Forte

    Three cheers for Rick! His comments at the school board meeting have put a serious monkey wrench in Rita's plans. I doubt it was planned as playback, but it certainly works! I am glad he came out to Jerry. It was long overdue, and Jerry showed what a good friend he is! This is also a step closer to Rick being his real self. Two problems left: Gus and Heinrich. Rick is on a roll. Let's hope it continues. And finally, I can't wait to listen in on Rick's visit with Irene! Thanks.
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