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About JeffreyL

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  • Age in Years
    63
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    Male
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    Still figuring it out
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    Washington State
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    Baking, books, theater, travel.

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  1. JeffreyL

    Part 3

    Hi Sasha. Just finished my third reading of this story, and I enjoyed it as much as the first two times! Thank you.
  2. JeffreyL

    North

    Hello Sasha. I believe this is my third time reading about Emmett and Jian. And I have to say I enjoyed it almost as much as I did the first time! Because you know what is going to happen, some of the surprise factor is lost. But the characters and dialogue are first rate. The settings are well described without bogging down the story. The sex is hot and sassy and fun! I hope this finds you well and happy. I look forward to a new story written by you one of these days. As always, thanks for sharing your stories. Jeff
  3. Tim is great! The potential romance with Ari is nice! However, it is time to get back to "the mystery" and give us some more clues. Good story! Thanks.
  4. JeffreyL

    Chapter 21

    Yes, you did! Bravo! 😃
  5. JeffreyL

    Chapter 21

    This chapter was well written! I think you got all your bases covered: you tied in Lex and Ian and covered their backstory. Nice job! Thanks.
  6. JeffreyL

    Greg

    One chapter and I like it already! Greg is interesting, and I like his idea of a gay-friendly camp ground. I am curious to see how things go with Clay and Mason. I am so excited to have another story you've written (are writing 😃) to read! Thanks.
  7. JeffreyL

    Part II, chapter 5

    After three chapters of Faith and Luke. I am ready to get back to Amy for a bit. I am missing her determination and her suspicious mind.
  8. JeffreyL

    Chapter Eight

    I am at a bit of a loss for something to comment. Your writing and dialogue are great as usual! Estevo's mom dropped a bomb shell! Well, actually she was pushed and prodded. This will be a game changer for the boys. Thanks.
  9. JeffreyL

    Green Room

    Your idea to "share the info in bits and pieces and through dialogue" is one of the reasons your writing is enjoyed by so many. Not to mention you create interesting, well rounded characters. Thanks.
  10. JeffreyL

    Wednesday

    Your writing did a good job of conveying Simon's frustrations. Being a teenager is frustrating enough when you don't have a friend or relative to help you along and share things with. Add to that being gay in a community that is predominantly homophobic (at least it sounds that way), makes it even harder to sort out your feelings. I am encouraged by your response to Timothy M. It sounds like Simon will continue to look for answers and have some success. It makes me think of that old saying, "two steps forward; one step back." Thanks for sharing this story.
  11. JeffreyL

    Part II, chapter 1

    Ugh. As a retired teacher, a student and teacher affair makes my skin crawl. As Faith says, so wrong on so many levels. I am excited for Amy's progress and hope it continues. Thanks.
  12. Writing is a good way to get your feelings out. To me this poem is sad. I hope writing this helps put you on an even keel. Thanks for sharing.
  13. JeffreyL

    Chapter 7

    Another good chapter. I especially liked the conversation in the car on the way to "Grandma's." Your dialogue writing was spot on! I really like the way the relations are growing at a realistic pace. And of course I really like these characters, even Kari.
  14. This has been a great series! I am sorry to see it end. I think one of these days, when I am looking for something to read, I'll go back and read the Homestead Pride series from the beginning. Thanks for sharing these wonderful characters and their stories.
  15. JeffreyL

    Chapter 24

    Another well written chapter with terrific dialogue throughout! This is one of those stories where the characters suck me in, make me care about them, and wish they were real people I could know. There are two or three other writers on GA that create that kind of character too. I am glad Tyler and Kyle had a chance to talk and get things sorted. Their conversation was more of that realistic dialogue you write! Thanks.
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