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  1. This has been a wonderful adventure! Combined with the first story made it even more enjoyable! Your characters have all been first rate; even the bad guys! I don't think I can pick one favorite. Your writing is very smooth and readable. It made the story flow along effortlessly! I am looking forward to reading another story in this series! Thanks.
  2. JeffreyL

    Chapter 1

    Great characters and an interesting beginning! Thanks.
  3. JeffreyL


    I really enjoyed this story! I liked that it was lighter in nature and not heavy and dark as some fantasy can be. I am sorry it took me so long to find it. Thanks.
  4. JeffreyL

    Chapter 13

    I am not surprised to find out Opie is a dragon. You left a few hints along the way. I am glad it is confirmed. Opie really likes Jonas. I hope he will help Jonas get his life turned around. Thanks.
  5. JeffreyL

    Chapter 6

    You gotta love that Jonas! And his new boss is totally intriguing! In spite of seeming confused, Jonas has managed to not show it and roll with the punches - mostly. He may not admit it, but he is lucky to have Jenny for a friend. I am looking forward to his first day of work and his blind date! Thanks.
  6. JeffreyL

    Chapter 3

    It's only the third chapter, but this story has already gone from "like" to "love" for me! Jonas is a terrific character, and I can't wait to see what adventures he has when his new job starts! Thanks.
  7. JeffreyL

    Rainbow Waffles

    This was a very sweet story, in spite of the little dark spot. Sadly these dark spots are a part of real life. I loved the couple and their flirty dialogue, and of course Henry, the superhero disguised as a restaurant owner! And there are sometimes amazing moments like the one provided by the older gentleman at the end! My take on rainbow waffles: I tried a few times to make them with my granddaughter. It's hard to swirl in the food coloring enough to make it rainbow-ish, but not so much it makes a greenish brown. Better to go for one color. Kylie's favorites were pink and purple! Thanks, Tim! I enjoyed this. 💖
  8. JeffreyL

    AOC 1

    What an interesting first chapter! I like both Ethan and Wayne. You have given us several possibilities for how this story will go. I can't wait to read more! Thanks.
  9. JeffreyL

    Chapter 27

    Thank you for sharing Ed's story! A lot of it was sad, but it ended well. The hints in the post script sound quite promising! I really loved Ed! He was a great character, and your writing really captured his unique thoughts and personality!
  10. JeffreyL

    Chapter 61

    I loved the end of this chapter where Mr. Rusello was asked to sign the painting in the cafeteria. When he went back to check Adam saw not just Mr. Rusello's signature but Abel's also. What a great way to encourage this boy to pursue his interest in art! Thanks.
  11. JeffreyL

    Chapter 26

    Poor Ed. He can't seem to catch a break. No pun intended. I do think he is lucky to be with Uncle Ted. I hope things get better for him. Ed is a really unique character, and I like him a lot! Thanks.
  12. JeffreyL

    An Ember Burns

    Hey Wayne! I was thinking about some of the stories that I especially enjoyed here on GA. And for no good reason I decided to reread some. Of course your stories are terrific, and I really loved Troy and Grant! I just finished reading their story, and let me say I enjoyed as much the second time as I did the first time! Your writing is always great! Thanks.
  13. JeffreyL

    Embers 17

    Brandon is a great character! I enjoyed his time down under and his growth as a person and shifter! The firefighting scenes were frightening, but also interesting and informative. It was great fun to run into the guys from Parker Valley Wolf Pack! It was also fun to stop by Liston Winery and touch base with Spencer! I am a big fan of CJ and Carlos! You did a good job wrapping things up still leaving room for future stories. Good writing, characters, dialogue, and travel tips made this a most enjoyable story! Thanks.
  14. JeffreyL


    It is always a pleasure to stop by Camp Refuge! This is a great short, and it makes me happy to see loving parents that want their child to be good regardless of their sexuality. Thanks.
  15. JeffreyL

    Chapter 32

    It is great seeing how much Cyn has grown in confidence, and how he and Seamus keep growing closer as a couple! Thanks.
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