I Started Thinking - 4. Chapter 4

A very honest poem, Imoline. I think a lot of people will relate to this. Life can be a real challenge, but writing poetry really helps me... I hope it helps you too  

2 hours ago, Valkyrie said:

It sounds like you are going through a lot lately.  It can be difficult keeping your head above water, but you seem like a very strong person.  The emotion in this poem came through very clearly.  

Well Val, the last couple of months have been very trying to say the least. I will say this,however I am still here. Thank you for your support.

Very emotional, but also very honest, and open. Keep your head up sweetheart. 

53 minutes ago, R J Drew said:

Very emotional, but also very honest, and open. Keep your head up sweetheart. 

thank you RJ , I'm definitely going to try. I just realized that the first initials of your name are the same as my sons. Lol anyhow, thank you for reading and commenting on the poem, it means a lot to me.

As always, Have a sweet day.. Lmoline

6 hours ago, Headstall said:

A very honest poem, Imoline. I think a lot of people will relate to this. Life can be a real challenge, but writing poetry really helps me... I hope it helps you too  

Thank you, Gary. This piece was very hard to write, but at the same time it was a necessary release. You are right about life being a challenge and it's not easy to get through.

As always thank you for your constant support.

Have a sweet day. Lmoline

This was quite a heartwrenching to read. Feeling like you're trying not to drown sounds like a very painful place to be. I'm very sorry to hear you've been going through a great deal of turmoil and I hope that the help you need comes your way. Sending love, Imloline.

3 minutes ago, BDANR said:

This was quite a heartwrenching to read. Feeling like you're trying not to drown sounds like a very painful place to be. I'm very sorry to hear you've been going through a great deal of turmoil and I hope that the help you need comes your way. Sending love, Imloline.

Thank you, Brian, for sending love, it is always nice to know someone cares. Now as for the poem it is a reflection of the emotions that had built up over the last couple of months. Some of the build up was do to my therapist bring up things that I was not and had not dealt with, hence the name of the poem. Although , I guess writing it was my way of surviving all over again. Thank you again for your support,

Have a sweet day.. Laura