Will I or Won't I ... napowrimo 2018 - 5. The Last Two Days

These were both very good tim. April 30th was very clever. It makes me think of Hotel California for some reason. Great challenge this year. xoxo

2 minutes ago, BlindAmbition said:

These were both very good tim. April 30th was very clever. It makes me think of Hotel California for some reason. Great challenge this year. xoxo

thanks jp!  i appreciate you reading all of these ... i think it's time for a poetry break for a bit.  xo

Excellent poems, tim. April 29th's was a nice reflection. Very thoughtful after the event of last week. April 30's, however, I see it differently from the other commenters. It reminds me of relationships. Notably, an old relationship, that may have resparked, and you're giving it another go... until to you find the spectors from the past still there, and call it off again. Hoping for a new relationship with someone more trustworthy.

1 minute ago, BHopper2 said:

Excellent poems, tim. April 29th's was a nice reflection. Very thoughtful after the event of last week. April 30's, however, I see it differently from the other commenters. It reminds me of relationships. Notably, an old relationship, that may have resparked, and you're giving it another go... until to you find the spectors from the past still there, and call it off again. Hoping for a new relationship with someone more trustworthy.

You see!!!  Yes that's it. I wrote, for me, a silly funny poem about a haunted house, no hidden meanings.. and then you read it and look at what it means to you. That is poetry.. that's what it should do.. i love it!!   Thanks for writing down what you felt. I think its perfect!

So different but both are beautiful and haunting in their own unique way. Quite a month , I read them all again . A monumental achievement . Thank you for sharing with us , yet again. 

I loved your April finale. The first talks to

me of hurt and healing, while the second made me laugh. Wish the ghosts would have a party with the mice in my attic. Thank you for these and each of the other 28 you penned this month. 

5 minutes ago, deville said:

So different but both are beautiful and haunting in their own unique way. Quite a month , I read them all again . A monumental achievement . Thank you for sharing with us , yet again. 

i know you read them all. Since your first post on my work (i'm pretty sure) was on Changes, i look for your comments. I appreciate them very much. Thank you for helping to make this a great month of poetry. xo

4 minutes ago, Parker Owens said:

I loved your April finale. The first talks to

me of hurt and healing, while the second made me laugh. Wish the ghosts would have a party with the mice in my attic. Thank you for these and each of the other 28 you penned this month. 

oh, so much pain ... so many stories of people giving the dying comfort.. a number of the dead visitors to our city from Korea and Jordan .. horrible.  With Peter's friend missing the first day.. it was hard to cope with.

I'm glad you laughed at the second.. made me laugh too.    Thanks for your support Parker xoxxo

you've had a brilliant run of poems this month, tim. They're all good, and I commend you for your dedication. April 30th reminds me of a haunted apartment I lived in shortly after I moved to Colorado, lol.

Just now, MacGreg said:

you've had a brilliant run of poems this month, tim. They're all good, and I commend you for your dedication. April 30th reminds me of a haunted apartment I lived in shortly after I moved to Colorado, lol.

Oh wow, really?  That sounds like a short story, Sir!  Thank you about the poetry Sir. i appreciate Your support and comments. Thanks again, Sir.

Your final poems are very good. Very well done. Thanks for sharing.

34 minutes ago, Dolores Esteban said:

Your final poems are very good. Very well done. Thanks for sharing.

Thank you, Dolores. I've enjoyed this month, and learned a few things, and tried some new ones because of your work. Thank you also!

A very successful month, tim.  you should be very proud of the work you've done. There have been some truly outstanding poetry written. Well done, my boy xoxo

7 minutes ago, MichaelS36 said:

A very successful month, tim.  you should be very proud of the work you've done. There have been some truly outstanding poetry written. Well done, my boy xoxo

thank You, Michael. i'm so tired, but i miss writing them ... but i will take a few days xo