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Hymenaios, or the Marriage of the God of Marriage - 2. Part II. A Borrowed Flower Stall

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Part II. A Borrowed Flower Stall

 

Same day a week later, Hymen waited,

Amid bustling crowds, for his time to come.

But Chronos himself had begun to slow –

At least to the bright boy whose clock started

Only the moment he first laid eyes on

The purest of the pure, his kempt Kathros.

With him, on this sunny market Thursday,

He’d brought a sole ambition in his heart.

So now he stood impatiently shifting

One restless foot beneath him at a time,

His vigilant gaze scouring down the hill

As temple-goers made their way up it.

Inside his head, true love’s nature beckoned

That he upon it ruminate, and know

Although a week already, the sudden

Birth of it in Hymen’s core was like fire;

He’d seen her, and struck by Eros, melted.

‘Are things more noble just the same?’ he mused,

But as so often is the case, not one

Godly answer gave up explanation.

He stood to attention, spotting the maid

A few hundred feet down the shopping street,

And then a second more, there was Kathros.

Hymen put his right-brained scenario

Into its most immediate deploy –

The timing could not have been more perfect,

As the same lad as last week was in charge.

Hymen dashed through the street, into the stall.

The boy, who was perhaps twelve or thirteen,

Pulled himself like a magnet to the gold

Hymen held up to the youth’s eyelevel.

Once drawn in like a catch within a net,

A reassuring hand Hymenaios

Placed upon the young entrepreneur’s neck.

Gently massaging for reassurance,

Hymen bent to whisper in the boy’s ear:

“Lend me your stall, young man, that I might work

For a mere ten minutes’ economy.

You will get the better in the exchange.”

So said, the gold slipped into the open

Clutches of the mercenary young man.

After the coin was bit and tested true,

The lad skipped out in another moment,

Making Hymen the shop’s proprietor.

He walked behind the wreaths and garlands,

And soon the maid came clomping by, clearing

A pathway like the prow of a warship,

In whose wake safely drifted the maiden.

After they had neared, and the nurse gone by –

Gaudy and worldly things distracting her

From up ahead on the loud thoroughfare –

Hymen held out a fine wreath of cypress,

Embroidered all between its lacy fronds

With the palest of wisteria sprigs.

He held it for Kathros, and her alone.

Slowly, the girl by scanning other blooms

Must have found them to be overwhelming,

For the evergreen and soft lilac sprays

Planted a fresh plot in her perspective.

The young man hoped he could lure her closer,

And thought of the irony of the boy

Quick tempted with matters material;

Only with the girl he knew that not coin

But the substance of his spirit drew her

Like a sunflower seed to open blue sky.

His ploy was effective, for Kathros stopped.

Holding the arrangement herself, she asked

Its origin, its quality and price.

Hymen replied, “Wrought by hands too-earthly,

Nonetheless fit tribute for the divine;

It’s worth is yet untested, but its price

Will prove to the tooth its true purity.”

Thus listening, a new cast came to her,

Her eyes seeming to understand his words,

Although her conscious mind could not grasp them.

In boldness then, he dared to touch her hand,

Seeing within her stare, the jolt both felt.

“Take it, dear lady,” Hymenaios said.

“For any goddess that might receive it –

This wreath – from your blessèd fingers, will know

Divine virtue can live in us as well.”

Regrouping herself and looking for Nurse,

But seeing the woman nowhere nearby,

Kathros took the cypress and wisteria,

Imparting a shy smile for the beauty

Of the flower boy giving it her thus.

When she turned and sailed back towards her maid,

Hymen’s heartbeat throbbed close upon his throat,

Feeling Love herself had touched him that day.

He returned the stall to its owner-youth

And stealthily set off amongst the crowd,

Following them up the Acropolis:

 

Two women, who shall bedeck fair Dame Artemis;

Hymen behind to worship his one true Mistress.

 

 

 

 

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This is so sweet and funny. The details are wonderfully rich and the metaphors colorful. The scene plays befor my inner eye easily and I enjoyed it very much. An awesome Sunday treat! 

Thank you for sharing. 🙂 🙂 🙂

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Gay or straight, boys in love are boys in love!  AC I could have been walking down that street, you brought it so alive for us.  That's a smart trick.. paying off the flower seller!  Excellent work, AC.  Thanks so much for this, it is brilliant!

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Did she perhaps wonder why it was a new - and older and more handsome - youngster helping her to find a flowery tribute ? I'm glad love hasn't impaired his wits. ;) 

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Hymen is such a clever fellow; and now that Kathros’ hand has touched his, he is well and truly smitten. Again, you make us part of the scene, and this time, you give us a taste of suspense. For what will happen as Hymen trails his Kathros up the hill? 

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I reread this wonderful piece again this morning, and all who comment before me are so right. This piece is wonderful, Hymen clever, scene and background alive with people and colour. Yet, it was your description of Hymen waiting, and Chronos slowing that struck me.  How many of us today know what that really is?  Hymen, had no music to listen to, no phone to check, no social media to ask ... he was truly there on his own, in the moment, restless and his thoughts must have flying with what if's, and his much gone-over plan.

AC, i am enjoying this story so much ... thank you.  xo

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AC ... the was so masterfully done! i felt as if i was watching the scene play out in front of me! Hymen was very clever paying the flower boy to let him use the stall. can't wait to see what happens next! #flirtingneverchanges 

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On 7/21/2019 at 1:42 PM, Lyssa said:

This is so sweet and funny. The details are wonderfully rich and the metaphors colorful. The scene plays before my inner eye easily and I enjoyed it very much. An awesome Sunday treat! 

Thank you for sharing. 🙂 🙂 🙂

Thank you for reading and commenting, Lyssa! Yes, my inner Ovid is striving to find his voice (lol, I just made a typo -- I wrote "vind" his voice. I think I have been reading too much German poetry recently!).

The next Part will be up soon!

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On 7/21/2019 at 3:00 PM, MichaelS36 said:

Gay or straight, boys in love are boys in love!  AC I could have been walking down that street, you brought it so alive for us.  That's a smart trick.. paying off the flower seller!  Excellent work, AC.  Thanks so much for this, it is brilliant!

τα αγόρια θα είναι αγόρια! (boys will be boys)

In any language, and in any age, this maxim holds true. Thank you, Mike, for reading and commenting! We will see what the near future holds for our boys :)

 

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On 7/21/2019 at 3:20 PM, Timothy M. said:

Did she perhaps wonder why it was a new - and older and more handsome - youngster helping her to find a flowery tribute ? I'm glad love hasn't impaired his wits. ;) 

You ask a great question, Tim. We don't know much about Kathros yet -- just as much as our hero does -- so maybe we'll get some insight into her thoughts and feelings later on :yes:

Thanks again for all your help!

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On 7/21/2019 at 4:55 PM, Parker Owens said:

Hymen is such a clever fellow; and now that Kathros’ hand has touched his, he is well and truly smitten. Again, you make us part of the scene, and this time, you give us a taste of suspense. For what will happen as Hymen trails his Kathros up the hill? 

Yes, I suppose he is rather clever to come up with this way, even though he had no guarantee of success. Don't they say necessity is the mother of invention...? He sure invented a doozie :)

Thanks for reading and commenting. The next Part is a rather domestic one ;)

 

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On 7/22/2019 at 3:06 AM, Mikiesboy said:

I reread this wonderful piece again this morning, and all who comment before me are so right. This piece is wonderful, Hymen clever, scene and background alive with people and colour. Yet, it was your description of Hymen waiting, and Chronos slowing that struck me.  How many of us today know what that really is?  Hymen, had no music to listen to, no phone to check, no social media to ask ... he was truly there on his own, in the moment, restless and his thoughts must have flying with what if's, and his much gone-over plan.

AC, i am enjoying this story so much ... thank you.  xo

Thank you, Tim! Brilliant observation on how the passing of time might have affected ancient people differently than we are used to. Some monuments took generations to complete -- like the gothic cathedrals -- and yet, others were done quickly too (like Hagia Sophia, done in 5 years; or the Parthenon in Athens, complete in 20 years, if I remember right). Sometimes the lack of distractions leads to brilliance, but at other they can leave one feeling lonely and aimless. For our Hymenaios, I feel he's feeling the pull in both directions. Let's hope he achieves something great :)

Thank you, as always, for your flagging support. Muah     

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On 7/22/2019 at 3:19 PM, mollyhousemouse said:

AC ... the was so masterfully done! i felt as if i was watching the scene play out in front of me! Hymen was very clever paying the flower boy to let him use the stall. can't wait to see what happens next! #flirtingneverchanges 

LOL for the # -- it's the perfect complement to your comments!

Thank you, Molly, for reading and leaving your generous comments. In my mind, Hymen was clever and bold to actually go in for the touch, because as we all know, there is nothing quite like contact of person to person.

Thanks again! Part 3 will be up shortly  

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I love how I’m able to see what you describe so well. It’s game on, for Hymen, and he does not miss a near perfect opportunity.. Who doesn’t remember that giddy feeling, when you touch your crush’s hand or brush by them for the first time. Lol. Oh, to be young again. 

 

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On 8/1/2019 at 6:55 PM, Defiance19 said:

I love how I’m able to see what you describe so well. It’s game on, for Hymen, and he does not miss a near perfect opportunity.. Who doesn’t remember that giddy feeling, when you touch your crush’s hand or brush by them for the first time. Lol. Oh, to be young again. 

 

Thank you, Def! To be young again and feel those butterflies in your tummy. Thank you for reading and enjoying this work of mine. It may be a cliche, but still, this poem was a labor of love for me. Muah!

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