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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Second Sight: Remembering Some San Francisco Neighborhoods - Prologue. Affections

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Affections

 

Shall I raise a lance to remembrances,

Quixotic as the task may be,

And tilt at a verge plant round with blossoms

Shaded beneath my memory? —

Say of crimson, crinkly ivy upon

The gray walls of a freeway embankment;

Or of Christmas-red poinsettia grown

Taller than men from cracked cement?

 

For such sights surrounded in San Francisco

And like passion flowers blue-green,

Burst with Quetzalcoatl’s feathered love tales

In every heart that have them seen.

So of this city’s neighborhoods I’ll write

With some personal reflections,

Blending people, places and their settings

Amid thirty years’ affections.

 

 

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53 minutes ago, George Richard said:

Looking forward to the scenes of the city!

Thank you, George Richard

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I was drawn into your thoughts and recollections by these. I love how you find grace and beauty in so many places. 

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7 hours ago, Backwoods Boy said:

An introduction that is part of the poetry - wonderful - it gives me ideas ;) 

If you like the form (known as a 10-8 Ballad), I can get you the link to the Poetry Prompt on it 

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5 hours ago, drsawzall said:

Colors of memories aren't diminished by time!!

Very true, Good Doctor. Very true ❤️ 

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1 minute ago, Parker Owens said:

I was drawn into your thoughts and recollections by these. I love how you find grace and beauty in so many places. 

Thank you, Parker. I wouldn't have continued writing about the five hoods in this set without your encouragement 

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A panoramic introduction to a favorite city of mine.  Beautiful and loving images in your poetry AC!

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10 hours ago, raven1 said:

A panoramic introduction to a favorite city of mine.  Beautiful and loving images in your poetry AC!

Thank you, Terry. I didn't know you had San Francisco memories. I hope these poetic vignettes can do them justice. There will be 5 altogether 

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As a youth I visited SF many times.  It was such a thrill for me to go to a city that was filled with many gay people living openly.  The bus ride from Portland was about 12 hours, but I went with anticipation and left feeling renewed each time.  

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On 4/15/2023 at 12:01 AM, raven1 said:

As a youth I visited SF many times.  It was such a thrill for me to go to a city that was filled with many Gay people living openly.  The bus ride from Portland was about 12 hours, but I went with anticipation and left feeling renewed each time.  

Thanks, Terry. I hope you encounter lots that's familiar in the five sections to follow. We'll visit some hoods that I live in, and some that I played in. Good times await :yes:

 

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I've never been to SF before, but in a strange way I'm beginning to feel that I have been there sometime, possibly in another life.  

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6 hours ago, Bill W said:

I've never been to SF before, but in a strange way I'm beginning to feel that I have been there sometime, possibly in another life.  

Thanks, Bill. Such things are entirely possible. When I was about 10, my family passed through a Western town we'd never driven into on our vacations. My mother had a strong reaction, knowing where all the streets were; telling my dad to keep making turns until we arrived at a certain storefront. She told us this is where she ran a dance studio in a past life. She said it so calmly, so matter-of-factly, there was no room for equivocations 

Thanks for reading, and I hope you like the rest of the poems of this series 

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Clever introduction.  I'm looking forward to a tour of San Francisco.  :) 

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