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A Fool's Thoughts - 8. For S. - a poem for a friend

For S.
Cold waves nip at my bare feet,
the air crackles like charged black velvet.
Your taste on my tongue is still sweet,
lingering heat,
and I am naked in the rain.
 
Lightning bolts jigsaw the sky.
Clouds race each other in a wild hunt.
And then in a blink of an eye
you said good-bye
and I am left, naked in the rain.
 
Your voice still sings in my head.
Ti ameró per sempre.
Aren’t these the words you said?
Red.
And I die naked in the rain.
 
I wrote this for my friend S., who needed words.
Copyright © 2016 aditus; All Rights Reserved.
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On 08/11/2016 10:56 PM, Emi GS said:

Images drew onto my mind's display as I read each line. I can see and feel the pain and despair. I liked the view of the picture despite the sadness; the rain, the sea and a naked body.

 

Wonderful Adi. Just wonderful.

 

~Emi.

Emi! Thank you for your kind words. Grief can be devastating, yet powerful like a storm. I just hope it can be cleansing too.

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