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Retail Ninja

   (4 reviews)
Sub-genres: Action Fiction, Super Hero

With thieves and crooks finding new ways to dampen the glorious shopping experience, a hero emerges. He lives by the moral code of exchanging goods and services, and he will uphold it. Fast and nimble, he is a blur to customers. Villains tremble at the sight of him. 

He is Retail Ninja.

Enjoy this three-chapter adventure that popped into my head. 
Copyright © 2023 astone2292; All Rights Reserved.
  • Promising Author
  • 05/23/2023 (Updated: 06/05/2023)
  • 3 Chapters
  • 7,615 Words
  • Teen
  • Complete

Story Recommendations (7 members)

  • Action Packed 7
  • Addictive/Pacing 6
  • Characters 7
  • Chills 4
  • Cliffhanger 3
  • Compelling 4
  • Feel-Good 5
  • Humor 7
  • Smoldering 2
  • Tearjerker 2
  • Unique 6
  • World Building 4

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Table of Contents
  • 1. Chapter 1
    • 1,860 Words
  • 2. Chapter 2
    • 2,568 Words
  • 3. Chapter 3
    • 3,187 Words

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   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

@astone2292 has combined humor, retail, and fun in a delightful story.  If you have never worked in a grocery or retail store, this may help you think of things of a differing angle.

Join Retail Ninja, Mike, and others in this story.  Well worth reading.

Response from the author:

Jeezums, how did I miss responding to this?

Thanks for reading, ReaderPaul! Retail has been a major part of my life, so I just had to make a superhero that'd come and save the day. 

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   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

Ya want some fun and laughs?  You'll find them here as @astone2292 romps over Karens and corporate villains in defense of consumers and clerks in this revel of retail ruckas with one heroic ninja of the market!  A reading revenge to lighten your day after an awful trip to the supermarket!

Response from the author:

I'm tickled pink you had a great time reading, Raven! 

  • Love 3
  • Haha 1
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Dan South

   7 of 7 members found this review helpful 7 / 7 members

I couldn’t agree more with @chris191070 : you need to read this. I haven’t checked the story tags but I hope one of them is #retail. So many retail truths in here.

This is a fun and funny romp. This is also about profit and loss. Literally and figuratively. Profit and people. Profit versus people.

I laughed out loud many, many times. As long as Karens roam the earth in search of bargains there will be room for a sequel.

Well done Mr. Stone and thank you❤️

Response from the author:

Thanks, Dan! I always appreciate a review. 

Retail Ninja is going to linger in my mind for a while. I'm sure more villains will come about, so expect him to return at some point...

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   5 of 5 members found this review helpful 5 / 5 members

This is something really different from @astone2292.

We have a retail store with the usual crooks and thieves.

The only difference being that this store has a saviour in the Retail Ninja.

You need to read this amazing Super Hero story to discover more of Retail Ninja.

Response from the author:

Thanks for the review, Chris!

It was so fun to write something different. I can't wait to find time to add a second volume of adventures!

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