What kind of wolf am I?

This might seem harsh, but you really need a good editor.  I stopped reading your first chapter before I reached the half-way point.  There were so many errors that I found it difficult to understand what you wrote. 

For example, you used "sent" when I think you meant "scent". 

Where you wrote "a spec of freckled bridging his nose", did you mean "freckles bridging his nose"? 

Where you wrote "The door didn’t look very different from any other entries, but damn was it opposing.", did you mean "The door didn’t look very different from any other entries, but damn was it imposing."? 

I really enjoy reading stories about were-creatures, so please start over but with an editor. 

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3 hours ago, lEAFMOLD said:

This might seem harsh, but you really need a good editor.  I stopped reading your first chapter before I reached the half-way point.  There were so many errors that I found it difficult to understand what you wrote. 

For example, you used "sent" when I think you meant "scent". 

Where you wrote "a spec of freckled bridging his nose", did you mean "freckles bridging his nose"? 

Where you wrote "The door didn’t look very different from any other entries, but damn was it opposing.", did you mean "The door didn’t look very different from any other entries, but damn was it imposing."? 

I really enjoy reading stories about were-creatures, so please start over but with an editor. 

It is not harsh at all, all kinds of feed back is highly appreciated, so thank you for taking the time to comment 🥰

You are absolutely right, I should probably have sent it past my editor 😰 one of the perks of being too eager, and so I am very sorry that you did not enjoy, not that I can say I blame you, yikes...  and I will see to that the mistakes are corrected and make sure I reread everything before posting.

However, I did type a note about this story being a first draft and there were bound to be errors along the way, so you should not have expected the read to be flawless. But I completely understand you, I too have skipped stories because of errors.

Feel free to come by again, once I have the errors fixed and hopefully you will stay with me.

Thank you again for taking your time

Loves and hugses🤗